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[Pete]

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[user322]

Here we go again... TA34 alMerci pour l'épisode

Thanks for the episode!

I have to say, this is one of my favorite chapters!

And here, Dan starts to embrace his "cuckold" tendencies! He's not as weak anymore, and I hope it continues like this!

 

[schulz777]

I wonder what is going to happen in CH.35....
that erotic drama lived mostly from back and forth ( and sometimes to the side) but CH.34 is such a huge jump forwards,
I mean - fat old Lester dominates the married couple completely now (in every way, not just sexual) He owns them - there is no way out for them, unless Dan kills Lester but we know that is not going to happen Dan is apu$$y
- so.... what else Don Silver can teel us now about that story overall ?!
He can't simply go back and give Dan and Sarah their brains back - their were made so stupid, beyond their limits, that part is over for good.
More sex scenes of Sarah and Lester - no thx, gettind kinda borring, we've had more than enough of those in the last 2 years, right ?!
Lester has a heart attack during sex - and Sarah and Dan find a new ugly bull to be able to continue with their new lifestyle - could be a possibility to get the story in the new direction with new charakters.... hard to say which way to go now but the story need some unexpected turn to become interesting again

 

[swewxxx]

I wonder what is going to happen in CH.35....
that erotic drama lived mostly from back and forth ( and sometimes to the side) but CH.34 is such a huge jump forwards,
I mean - fat old Lester dominates the married couple completely now (in every way, not just sexual) He owns them - there is no way out for them, unless Dan kills Lester but we know that is not going to happen Dan is apu$$y
- so.... what else Don Silver can teel us now about that story overall ?!
He can't simply go back and give Dan and Sarah their brains back - their were made so stupid, beyond their limits, that part is over for good.
More sex scenes of Sarah and Lester - no thx, gettind kinda borring, we've had more than enough of those in the last 2 years, right ?!
Lester has a heart attack during sex - and Sarah and Dan find a new ugly bull to be able to continue with their new lifestyle - could be a possibility to get the story in the new direction with new charakters.... hard to say which way to go now but the story need some unexpected turn to become interesting again

Wow! That's an easy question to answer: nothing!
Or, the same as the last 15 to 20 chapters, only new clues, sex with different partners for no reason, or for stupid reasons. This story is meh!
Every chapter someone says "now it's going forward", but it's the same they said before and the same someone else is going to say about the next.
There are more loose ends in this story than in a Aghata Chistie novell. Only in the ninety-ninth chapter we will see the light. lol

 

[RDW]

<sigh> almost don't want to bother...kinda wish DS would move full time to Neighborhood Encounters...

I skipped 33. I'm with you. I have my doubts that 34 is worth it.

This story jumped the shark at least a dozen chapters ago. I kept reading in the hopes of a resolution, but it feels like he will just write this forever.

Don is great at sex scenes. The story was okay to start with, but has wobbled apart and is garbage now.

Just write something new, man. Finish some stuff.

 

[fantafan]

Well Undercover is shit from a quick look. Neighborhood Encounter seems interesting at first glance. Won't be reading it till there's more than four chapters...

 

[Cheryl-Samantha]

I agree I've already said it a few times. TA has become 50 shades of grey meets groundhog day. Yes it was good to start with but I think Don fell into the trap that most writers that write long stories fall into. They repeat themselves over and over again but I also think he's not sure where to stop now because of the response of so many readers,

 

[Lifefan]

Wow! That's an easy question to answer: nothing!
Or, the same as the last 15 to 20 chapters, only new clues, sex with different partners for no reason, or for stupid reasons. This story is meh!
Every chapter someone says "now it's going forward", but it's the same they said before and the same someone else is going to say about the next.
There are more loose ends in this story than in a Aghata Chistie novell. Only in the ninety-ninth chapter we will see the light. lol

 

[swewxxx]

Here are The Bet by RabbbleLaid ch 18 19 20

 

[RDW]

I read chapter 35, and that was a mistake. They're a throuple now, but totally dependent on Lester. It's all about how the se with Lester is the most important thing in all of reality for both Dan and Sarah. She has lost all respect for him as a person, but that's okay, since Dan keeps jerking off to it, anyway.

It irks me to no end how the pregnancy thing is still coming up. There's no way that Sarah isn't pregnant at this point unless Lester is sterile. And frankly, given the unprotected sex she has in general, it is silly.

But instead of going ahead and hitting that note, DS keeps hinting at it, dancing around like it's one thing to keep in reserve.

This story is going nowhere, and is so far past the point that even a fap story can suspend disbelief that it's ridiculous. I kept hoping for a hot resolution, but that's clearly not going to happen.

 

[RDW]

And yeah, I wish that somebody would share Greek Goddess 9 by VZB. At least that's the end to a story. He seems to have fallen off the internet again - it should have been on Literotica already.

 

[makoto shishio]

What's Left Unsaid - Chapter 8
15 de setembro
“Have you tried an extender? Or perhaps a penis sleeve?”

I suppressed the urge to grab Dr. Vance by his white coat collar and throw him across the room. Mainly because that wouldn’t be good for my back. Not because the suggestion of using some sort of false penis to please my wife was utterly humiliating.

It wasn’t the first time this idea had come up. Daisy had even suggested it at one point, though that had been early on after I’d fully recovered from my injury and surgeries. Just as a temporary thing. That was before we realized the depth of my situation.

 

[makoto shishio]

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What's Left Unsaid - Chapter 9

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I parked next to the curb rather than pulling into my driveway. Mainly because I couldn’t. Someone’s car was parked where Daisy’s car should have been. I didn’t recognize it… but it wasn’t hard to figure out who it belonged to. A sports car. Sparkling cherry.

I gripped my steering wheel as I stared at the red paint… seeing red… red… so angry… an image of a bull snorting and grunting, hoofs stamping on the ground, head tilting down and aiming deadly horns…

What I wouldn’t give to smash into that stupid little car. Ram it over and over with my Subaru. But that wouldn’t solve anything. It wouldn’t even make me feel better. It would just result in paperwork. Police. Charges. Money.

 

[swewxxx]

I read chapter 35, and that was a mistake. They're a throuple now, but totally dependent on Lester. It's all about how the se with Lester is the most important thing in all of reality for both Dan and Sarah. She has lost all respect for him as a person, but that's okay, since Dan keeps jerking off to it, anyway.

It irks me to no end how the pregnancy thing is still coming up. There's no way that Sarah isn't pregnant at this point unless Lester is sterile. And frankly, given the unprotected sex she has in general, it is silly.

But instead of going ahead and hitting that note, DS keeps hinting at it, dancing around like it's one thing to keep in reserve.

This story is going nowhere, and is so far past the point that even a fap story can suspend disbelief that it's ridiculous. I kept hoping for a hot resolution, but that's clearly not going to happen.

Unintended and/or unplanned pregnancy is an American fetish. It sells well.
What bothers me is that most readers state they are against child abuse (which I am too), or even talking about children in erotic stories, but have no problem with women getting pregnant by perverts, trash, and despicable men, which will lead to a difficult life for the children.

 

[fantafan]

Unintended and/or unplanned pregnancy is an American fetish. It sells well.
What bothers me is that most readers state they are against child abuse (which I am too), or even talking about children in erotic stories, but have no problem with women getting pregnant by perverts, trash, and despicable men, which will lead to a difficult life for the children.

Its not really one of my things but I understand the difference between a jerk off fantasy and reality. I don't really believe all black men have huge cocks, and that all women fall on their knees for a huge cock, and that all women are sluts at heart and happily yell out "yes make me pregnant" whenever a guy with a big cock is fucking them, etc etc etc.

 

[chris16717]

I read chapter 35, and that was a mistake. They're a throuple now, but totally dependent on Lester. It's all about how the se with Lester is the most important thing in all of reality for both Dan and Sarah. She has lost all respect for him as a person, but that's okay, since Dan keeps jerking off to it, anyway.

It irks me to no end how the pregnancy thing is still coming up. There's no way that Sarah isn't pregnant at this point unless Lester is sterile. And frankly, given the unprotected sex she has in general, it is silly.

But instead of going ahead and hitting that note, DS keeps hinting at it, dancing around like it's one thing to keep in reserve.

This story is going nowhere, and is so far past the point that even a fap story can suspend disbelief that it's ridiculous. I kept hoping for a hot resolution, but that's clearly not going to happen.

Where did you read chapter 35 I can't find it anywhere.

 

[bluepixiegurl316]

Here are The Bet by RabbbleLaid ch 18 19 20

Wow!

 

[RDW]

I like the unintended pregnancy angle. That's fine, it can be hot for a fantasy thing.

But Don has been flirting with that for around thirty chapters now. Lester went to all the trouble to sabotage a bunch of condoms. Then he invented fake birth control pills that look exactly like Sarah's, down to the packaging (somehow). But there are also multiple references to how she's not protected at all, how it's only that he's had a vasectomy that keeps her from getting pregnant (he lied about the vasectomy). And yet, she fucks the janitor bare.

It's like Don can't keep up with what he's written, but just wants to tease the pregnancy risk as the last angle here. But it's become Charlie Brown, Lucy, and the football. If you're never going to actually give that to the readers, stop bringing it up. And at least keep up with what you've written already... so lazy and frustrating.

 

[asdfghjk123]

executive privilege chapter 10 anyone?

 

[bullshark]

The bet ch 21 someone plesse??

 

[Powerconti]

TA 34 - (Final)