Don could have focused on Dan. He's not going to use Trisha, and the sentinel would have been better off not even having them in the story. He could have had Dan and the kids talking, Dan doing things around the house, cleaning up the mess, setting up the cameras without anyone knowing, the girls talking about the Troll to their dad again. The chapter is short and really bad, looking like a cheap porn movie where the actor talks about going to space, the actress in the kitchen, and then out of nowhere starts having sex. It didn't evolve at all, they even added another character. I hope Lester throws away that role with the phone because a black bully would have arrested Lester by his underwear at the bathroom door and ended up with Sarah. Don is losing the story.