my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."Advance the story? How?
Sarah is a caricature of a believable character at this point. All of the characters are. Rather than develop the characters and make them interesting, literally every single one has become one dimensional, one note cardboard cutouts.
Lester - big dick, amazing sexual prowess, smarter than everyone else.
Dan - loser.
Sarah - empty headed slut. Ready to fuck anyone, anytime, no matter the risk or consequences.
Sure, Don has added in a little more about the shadowy conspiracy organization... which is frankly boring and uninteresting.
This story has gone from hot to slop, and it isn't coming back. However, those patreon subscriber counts mean that it isn't going to change anytime soon.
Absolutely. The repetitiveness has killed any interest in the story.my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."
...until the morning she ran to the toilet to throw up. Hours later the digital display read 'pregnant', that's the moment she felt the weight of everything she threw away. For a huge cock attached to a fat asshole that's one cheeto away from a morgue.
I agre 100%my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."
...until the morning she ran to the toilet to throw up. Hours later the digital display read 'pregnant', that's the moment she felt the weight of everything she threw away. For a huge cock attached to a fat asshole that's one cheeto away from a morgue.
I agree 100%.Advance the story? How?
Sarah is a caricature of a believable character at this point. All of the characters are. Rather than develop the characters and make them interesting, literally every single one has become one dimensional, one note cardboard cutouts.
Lester - big dick, amazing sexual prowess, smarter than everyone else.
Dan - loser.
Sarah - empty headed slut. Ready to fuck anyone, anytime, no matter the risk or consequences.
Sure, Don has added in a little more about the shadowy conspiracy organization... which is frankly boring and uninteresting.
This story has gone from hot to slop, and it isn't coming back. However, those patreon subscriber counts mean that it isn't going to change anytime soon.
I agree 100%my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."
...until the morning she ran to the toilet to throw up. Hours later the digital display read 'pregnant', that's the moment she felt the weight of everything she threw away. For a huge cock attached to a fat asshole that's one cheeto away from a morgue.
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It's about time she gave up her last virgin hole for the love of her life.It's time for Dan's wife be impregnated wi
>Chapter 38 promises to be interesting, insightful and exciting.
You must either be Don under another screen name... or maybe, his mom. This things has been circling the drain for fifteen chapters, and gets more and more outlandish - as well as less and less believable - with every new chapter.
Insightful and exciting? Be serious.
I'm tired of the whole story. The sex scenes would be good in any story. But the entire plot is too weak. If you read the comments, you'll see that nobody knows what's going on. The author (and his cheerleaders) think he's writing an epic novel. But in reality, he's just trying to make more money. Sorry. I know many of you like it.Bro, aren't you tired of watching Sarah and Lester's relationship?
I waited a year for Sarah to finally be fucked by someone other than Lester, and at the same time I hoped that Sarah would not behave like a whore who had lost her boundaries and my expectations were fulfilled Now it is becoming a new reality.
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Plot was fine until Don realize he can milk this story to the last dropI'm tired of the whole story. The sex scenes would be good in any story. But the entire plot is too weak. If you read the comments, you'll see that nobody knows what's going on. The author (and his cheerleaders) think he's writing an epic novel. But in reality, he's just trying to make more money. Sorry. I know many of you like it.