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Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

well this is starting to get interesting.

Hello everyone I’m new here and for a while I’ve been reading and admiring yalls commentary on this topic and have decided to join in on the fun. That be said I want to first by touching on the big elephant in the room that no one ignores and that is the path/style of this story.

What I’m talking about is the repetition and lack of plot development. Yes while I agree with the majority of the people on this forum on that don has fallen into a business mindset of ā€œif it ain’t broken than don’t fix itā€ and so far it has worked. By way of his subscribers who more than willing to pay his patron subscription. Will he change, more than likely He will. Just look at the last chapter he released, there has been some character development and plot development as well.

Speaking about the last chapter to be released as I said the characters are more or less changing and the plot is advancing. The biggest change in a character has been Sarah (the protagonist) who went from being a loving wife and mother of two to a woman that willing to sacrifice her whole life just so she can satisfy her sexual desires. I would reckon that the biggest switch of her transformation into this new Sarah is in this chapter where he agrees to join Lester on this plot of revenge, this not only puts her closer to Lester but also she has gone from being the pawn to the chess player. We will have to see how it turns out for her. I’m surprised that a few of the recommendations that a few of yall put out here has come to fruition, it’s like don silver really listened to his audience for once, gasp!

Moving on the Lester side of things. Things are getting interesting for our troll like friend, because we starting that his controlling of Sarah is growing, but his own plot story is changing especially with cronos (AKA Irving ) on his trail.

Moving on to our other protagonist or more and more our supporting character Dan is growing as well, his business venture is starting to flourish with his recent success with sentinel and there maintains be a new love interest for him too.
Overall I believe that Don is starting to advance the story and the characters as well. I hope to see better things in the upcoming chapters of this erotic story.
 
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Advance the story? How?

Sarah is a caricature of a believable character at this point. All of the characters are. Rather than develop the characters and make them interesting, literally every single one has become one dimensional, one note cardboard cutouts.

Lester - big dick, amazing sexual prowess, smarter than everyone else.

Dan - loser.

Sarah - empty headed slut. Ready to fuck anyone, anytime, no matter the risk or consequences.

Sure, Don has added in a little more about the shadowy conspiracy organization... which is frankly boring and uninteresting.

This story has gone from hot to slop, and it isn't coming back. However, those patreon subscriber counts mean that it isn't going to change anytime soon.
 
Advance the story? How?

Sarah is a caricature of a believable character at this point. All of the characters are. Rather than develop the characters and make them interesting, literally every single one has become one dimensional, one note cardboard cutouts.

Lester - big dick, amazing sexual prowess, smarter than everyone else.

Dan - loser.

Sarah - empty headed slut. Ready to fuck anyone, anytime, no matter the risk or consequences.

Sure, Don has added in a little more about the shadowy conspiracy organization... which is frankly boring and uninteresting.

This story has gone from hot to slop, and it isn't coming back. However, those patreon subscriber counts mean that it isn't going to change anytime soon.
my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."

...until the morning she ran to the toilet to throw up. Hours later the digital display read 'pregnant', that's the moment she felt the weight of everything she threw away. For a huge cock attached to a fat asshole that's one cheeto away from a morgue.
 
my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."

...until the morning she ran to the toilet to throw up. Hours later the digital display read 'pregnant', that's the moment she felt the weight of everything she threw away. For a huge cock attached to a fat asshole that's one cheeto away from a morgue.
Absolutely. The repetitiveness has killed any interest in the story.

As for the pregnancy thing, I've touched on this before. Early on, the idea that Sarah was unwittingly risking pregnancy was hot. Lester had lied about a vasectomy, it was obvious that he intended to trick Sarah and impregnate her. Okay, I get it.

We had the scene with >>FOUR<< sabotaged condoms (seriously) before Sarah agreed to let him finish bare. But only because she "knew" he was fixed.

Okay. Scene is set. Lester has come in her, it's only a matter of time until he knocks her up. Cool.

Except, wait. Sarah - who was described as being unprotected - is actually on the pill, haha. But don't worry, Lester the supergenius with unlimited connections is having fake birth control pills manufactured to replace them. Haha!

Except, Don seems to forget about this, telling us repeatedly how Sarah is risking pregnancy with bare sex with Lester (and others). To the point that it's pretty unbelievable that she isn't pregnant.

Oh, right. She was on the pill, she just had all of those internal thoughts about how risky it was, and how Lester being fixed was all that protected her. Because why not.

So now, the pill has come up again. And... fuck, I don't know.

Drag the pregnancy risk out for twenty-five chapters, change the rules around it multiple times, change her birth control status willy nilly. It's obvious that Don forgot (or didn't care) about this stuff.

It's just bad writing. I used to follow Don's patreon as a free member, even considered joining a paid level for a bit. Given how little consistency he gives to the story, how he's just painfully dragging it out for the obvious incentive of raking in more monthly patreon subscription fees, I'm so glad that I have chosen to just skim the crap when it gets leaked on Kemono or whatever. The story sucks now, has for a long time, but I have some perverse desire to see how it ends - even though I no longer even read along.

Thruple. lmao.
 
my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."

...until the morning she ran to the toilet to throw up. Hours later the digital display read 'pregnant', that's the moment she felt the weight of everything she threw away. For a huge cock attached to a fat asshole that's one cheeto away from a morgue.
I agre 100%
 
Advance the story? How?

Sarah is a caricature of a believable character at this point. All of the characters are. Rather than develop the characters and make them interesting, literally every single one has become one dimensional, one note cardboard cutouts.

Lester - big dick, amazing sexual prowess, smarter than everyone else.

Dan - loser.

Sarah - empty headed slut. Ready to fuck anyone, anytime, no matter the risk or consequences.

Sure, Don has added in a little more about the shadowy conspiracy organization... which is frankly boring and uninteresting.

This story has gone from hot to slop, and it isn't coming back. However, those patreon subscriber counts mean that it isn't going to change anytime soon.
I agree 100%.

But, I understand some of the comments on how the story advanced. If we go back on this and/or other foruns we'll see from time to time someone saying he/she saw some progress. These comments usually come from new readers or DS cheerleaders (however, I think they're finally dying).

For me, for you, perhaps for many of us, who have read this story since the first chapter, many years ago (lmao), we have already seen the same nonsense. DS gives clues, new information, new characters that come from nowhere and go nowhere.

ex: We can see a lot of comments making assumptions about Lizzy. She appeared, I think, in a single chapter and never again! It was never explained who she really was (except from Lester), what her actual relationship with Lester was, or where she's gone to.
And every now and then, someone brings her back as a living character that could make a difference.

And finally, Lester showed up, again, naked to her mother too!!!!!????? lmaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
 
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my main issue is how repetitive it is. The last 20 chapters could be summarized by "over the next six months, Lester continued to push Dan and Sarah's limits with Sarah becoming more and more submissive to Lester's devious whims. Sarah fucks strangers to get more of Lester's cock, she gives up her career for more of Lester's cock, finally she gives up her marriage and family for more of Lester's cock."

...until the morning she ran to the toilet to throw up. Hours later the digital display read 'pregnant', that's the moment she felt the weight of everything she threw away. For a huge cock attached to a fat asshole that's one cheeto away from a morgue.
I agree 100%
 
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For some time now, a new chapter has begun, one that contains hints of turbulent and exciting events to come.
In any case, I enjoyed reading it.

Dan's visit to Lizzie could be an important turning point for his situation and research.
By denying that he and Sarah can trust Lester, and furthermore, by perhaps passing on further information to Dan, for example about Lester's secret recordings, manipulations and acts of sabotage, she would pave the way for Dan to pursue Lester with all the consequences and hold him accountable.

I have a feeling that Lizzie's pregnancy is the result of Lester's manipulation, for example by swapping contraceptives or sabotage. Perhaps she will also give Dan the hint to take a closer look at Sarah's contraceptive pills!

Furthermore, Sarah's descent into an antisocial slut, criminal milieu alongside the scumbag Lester continues unabated!

Chapter 38 promises to be interesting, insightful and exciting.


-- PC
 
>Chapter 38 promises to be interesting, insightful and exciting.

You must either be Don under another screen name... or maybe, his mom. This things has been circling the drain for fifteen chapters, and gets more and more outlandish - as well as less and less believable - with every new chapter.

Insightful and exciting? Be serious.
 
>Chapter 38 promises to be interesting, insightful and exciting.

You must either be Don under another screen name... or maybe, his mom. This things has been circling the drain for fifteen chapters, and gets more and more outlandish - as well as less and less believable - with every new chapter.

Insightful and exciting? Be serious.

That's exactly what I mean!
I believe that everything comes to an end eventually. For more than 20 chapters, we have observed that the author has been producing bullshit and had made money from it.
He has reached his peak and milked his cow dry!
The author ā€˜DS’ sees this too, because with the current status quo of TA, it can't go on any longer.
In my opinion, he began to incorporate a change of course in chapter 37 that lifts the story out of its slump and moves it forward.
Because that's the only way to keep ā€˜TA’ interesting.

Ultimately, I'm not talking about the numerous fuck fests of the cock-driven Sarah with her deformed and criminal Lester and run-down creatures with stiff cocks, but about Dan's awakening and return!

-- PC
 
In next chapter I belive Sarah's mum should bring up Lester's cock they should both discuss it .
It will be interesting to see how they both compare notes as Sarah mum have seen it and Lester told her Sarah saw it too
 
Bro, aren't you tired of watching Sarah and Lester's relationship? 😁
I waited a year for Sarah to finally be fucked by someone other than Lester, and at the same time I hoped that Sarah would not behave like a whore who had lost her boundaries and my expectations were fulfilled Now it is becoming a new reality.
Don is the best! šŸ‡©šŸ‡Ŗ
I'm tired of the whole story. The sex scenes would be good in any story. But the entire plot is too weak. If you read the comments, you'll see that nobody knows what's going on. The author (and his cheerleaders) think he's writing an epic novel. But in reality, he's just trying to make more money. Sorry. I know many of you like it.
 
I'm tired of the whole story. The sex scenes would be good in any story. But the entire plot is too weak. If you read the comments, you'll see that nobody knows what's going on. The author (and his cheerleaders) think he's writing an epic novel. But in reality, he's just trying to make more money. Sorry. I know many of you like it.
Plot was fine until Don realize he can milk this story to the last drop
 
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