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Most paying readers clearly prefer stories featuring such characters and plotlines, and are more than happy to pay for them. Naturally, the authors arenā€™t going to change that, even if it comes at the expense of creativity and realism.

Toxic Attraction
My Neighbour
Behind The Neighbourā€™s Door
Neighbour Chronicles, etc. ...

These examples are clear proof of this.

ā€œTHE CONTACTā€ by Sir Rickenbach will probably follow this path as well. With every new chapter, weā€™re confronted with this clichĆ©: thereā€™s a man (heā€™s fat, ugly, unattractive, he has an oversized penis and is available 24/7, heā€™s blackmailing and sometimes criminal). On the other hand, there is a woman (she is young, pretty, successful, married and a mother). She gives up everything to be fucked by this man 24/7. She acts and lives exclusively according to this manā€™s wishes.

My expectations of Sirene Rickenbach were very high. I was firmly convinced that she would take a different path to most other authors. Yet with every new chapter, this hope is increasingly dashed.
I expect her not to turn Jenna into a second Sarah, nor James into a second Dan. Nor do we need another misfit like Lester, because Ray Vogler is being built up and presented as such, step by step.

-- PC
 
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Powerconti said:
Most paying readers clearly prefer stories featuring such characters and plotlines, and are more than happy to pay for them. Naturally, the authors arenā€™t going to change that, even if it comes at the expense of creativity and realism.

Toxic Attraction
My Neighbour
Behind The Neighbourā€™s Door
Neighbour Chronicles, etc. ...

These examples are clear proof of this.

ā€œTHE CONTACTā€ by Sir Rickenbach will probably follow this path as well. With every new chapter, weā€™re confronted with this clichĆ©: thereā€™s a man (heā€™s fat, ugly, unattractive, he has an oversized penis and is available 24/7, heā€™s blackmailing and sometimes criminal). On the other hand, there is a woman (she is young, pretty, successful, married and a mother). She gives up everything to be fucked by this man 24/7. She acts and lives exclusively according to this manā€™s wishes.

My expectations of Sirene Rickenbach were very high. I was firmly convinced that she would take a different path to most other authors. Yet with every new chapter, this hope is increasingly dashed.
I expect her not to turn Jenna into a second Sarah, nor James into a second Dan. Nor do we need another misfit like Lester, because Ray Vogler is being built up and presented as such, step by step.

-- PC
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Yes, I share your disappointment with The Contact. What initially seemed like a refreshing story is turning into a copy of other hard cuckold stories. It's true that the lure of profit pushes authors in that direction, and that's understandable. But what bothers me the most is that hard cuckold fans don't seem to mind getting the same stories with the same characters over and over again. Even when the quality declines, like in TA, as long as they keep getting increasingly hardcore sex scenes, they're satisfied.
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Powerconti said:
Most paying readers clearly prefer stories featuring such characters and plotlines, and are more than happy to pay for them. Naturally, the authors arenā€™t going to change that, even if it comes at the expense of creativity and realism.

Toxic Attraction
My Neighbour
Behind The Neighbourā€™s Door
Neighbour Chronicles, etc. ...

These examples are clear proof of this.

ā€œTHE CONTACTā€ by Sir Rickenbach will probably follow this path as well. With every new chapter, weā€™re confronted with this clichĆ©: thereā€™s a man (heā€™s fat, ugly, unattractive, he has an oversized penis and is available 24/7, heā€™s blackmailing and sometimes criminal). On the other hand, there is a woman (she is young, pretty, successful, married and a mother). She gives up everything to be fucked by this man 24/7. She acts and lives exclusively according to this manā€™s wishes.

My expectations of Sirene Rickenbach were very high. I was firmly convinced that she would take a different path to most other authors. Yet with every new chapter, this hope is increasingly dashed.
I expect her not to turn Jenna into a second Sarah, nor James into a second Dan. Nor do we need another misfit like Lester, because Ray Vogler is being built up and presented as such, step by step.

-- PC
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I agree, throughout the most recent chapter I could tell he was lowkey starting to move the story forward into TA territory where the girl just falls in love with fucking this fat ugly guy while the cuck becomes some wimpy emasculated man. Like the table scene where Ray defends her but the husband does nothing. Why is that even necessary? Also a lot of these stories turn the wife into a manipulative bastard towards their husband. Itā€™s all getting really old.

BUT what I will say is that the author of The Contact is AMAZING at writing sex scenes. A lot of other authors need to take notes from him lol. I wanna see if he has any other stories but I donā€™t wanna pay for them.
 
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This comment is addressed directly to the author! * THE CONTACT *

... Iā€™d also like to point out the scene with the table. Iā€™d really like to understand why you leave James standing there looking stupid and doing nothing, whilst you portray Ray as the hero who comes to Jennaā€™s rescue in her hour of need.
Why? What are you trying to achieve with this?
Iā€™ve been wondering whether you might be planning for Jenna to gradually drift away from James and instead devote herself emotionally and wholeheartedly to Ray.
Iā€™ve really tried to come up with another explanation, but I simply couldnā€™t find one!
I can understand that this scene might not be to everyoneā€™s liking, but personally I found it inappropriate and even humiliating for James.

-- PC
 
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It is interesting to consider writing the kind of story you guys want. I would be down to give it a shot if you didnā€™t immediately post chapters of the contact (which you donā€™t like anyway) here the day after I release them on smashwords! Yeesh, i only have one paid chapter, the rest are free after a month!

That said, I would have to understand the actual structure of what you guys want better. If you want the husband to have a strong backbone, and the wife to not be a slut for the other man or enjoy him much at all, then there isnā€™t a lot of room for length and development, no?

Like is the premise that both the husband and wife do not want the wife to have sex with the other man, but some outside plot mechanic makes it so they have to? Then the husband saves her?

Or does the wife start cheating then the husband is angry so he divorces her? And we get a chapter on how good the husbands life becomes and how bad hers is?

Or does the husband want the wife to see another man and she is just reluctant the whole time? And the husband is in charge and manipulating both the wife and the other man?

Or is everyone just happy with all the boundaries and theres no conflict at all? The wife wants both her husband and the other man, the other man likes the wife but respects the couples boundaries, the husband is happy with the situation and in control. Seems like this gets boring pretty quick?
 
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