Oh yeah, you've been completely brainwashed by stories like *TA*. If, to you, a story is only interesting when the husband is a pathetic spineless wimp who keeps letting himself be humiliated more and more without doing anything, the wife is a brainless slut with no respect for her husband, and the bull is a walking clichĂ©âa filthy fat slob who's somehow a sex godâthen there's really no hope for your story.
And you talk about character development? What kind of development is it when the husband just becomes dumber and more controlled by his fetish? What kind of development is it when the wife becomes so addicted to the bull that she no longer respects or loves her husband? What kind of development is it when the bull is portrayed as all-powerful despite his appearance suggesting the complete opposite?
At the end of the day, it's your story, but claiming there can't be character development unless the husband is weak and the wife isn't enough of a slut is quite a statement. You simply sacrificed the couple's love and chemistry to make hardcore cuckold content for the people willing to pay, just like Don's and so many others.
Go ahead and keep copying *TA*. Make us dream. Make James even weaker and dumber than Dan, make Jenna even more of a treacherous, loveless slut than Sarah, and make Ray an even fatter, uglier, stinkier bull who's somehow an even greater sex god than Lester. That'll be some great character development, w
on't it?