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PstrJnkns29 said:
I think you got your wires crossed or something. The post of mine that you replied to wasn't talking about TA at all. I never said it was a bait and switch. I said I enjoyed it early on because I had never read a story like it before. The point about stubbornness is because the story has become boring. I think that if you put it to a vote, people would say they are tired reading scenes of Sarah and Lester fucking twice per chapter over and over again. It's monotonous.
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45 chapters??? With several parallel stories that lead nowhere, and if you erase them from the text, you can easily find a better solution for the continuation of the story.
And, worse, charging a lot for every single chapter.
 
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alright-alright-alright said:
No they all write the same story, where the husband always tells his wife that even if she my think she went to far or she might even have some reservations about some things that are happening he just tells her how that most he's ever been turned on and how sexy she looks doing it. Then the usual troupes follow like wife lying, then goin behind husband's back. By then the wife is prolly being shared by her lover and his friends and what little the husband does know about he is all the more happier when they let him act involved. It's really sad that nobody can really brake away from this mold. I thought that Vivian author was goin somewhere with her writings but she seemed to have flaked out. Can't seem to finish her series, and the ones she did seem unfinished some how.
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This is certainly true of the incredibly long stories published on Patreon etc. However, if you're looking for angsty stuff that doesn't follow that formula Literotica has absolutely tons of it in the Loving Wives category. BTB endings? Yup lots of those. RAAC? Yup. Something in between? Yup. Shitty writing, great writing, all kinds of writing. Just look for a decent score (say 4+) and try them out.
 
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The complete How Far is Too Far by DontJudgeMe. Ch 1-21 from Literotica then 22 converted from the PDF posted here. Minor issues like Chapter 2 being out of order, a fake cover, etc. Hopefully I didn't mess anything up in the process of the numerous conversions etc. Anyway, its complete afaik (yes meaning it ends).

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Powerconti said:
What do you think ā€“ will Sarah confront her mother (Renee)?
Will she ask where she spent the night before she came home?
Will she ask her who she cheated on her father (James) with, and how often?
Will Renee then tell the truth?
If so, how will Sarah react ā€“ particularly to the realisation - that the second woman in the room was her own mother (Renee)?
Or will Mr Don Silver simply pick up where he left off, namely by ignoring the conversation between mother and daughter and not addressing it?
It would be interesting to know what you think about this.

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Could it just be that Don Silver is about to show us how Sarah completely loses herself in a downward spiral past chapter 45? The truth regarding Renee doesn't even really matter anymore according to the narrative dynamics, because Sarah just keeps going. In fact, the jealousy only fuels her obsession further, driving her to exhibit even more extreme behavior. Whether Renee tells the truth or Don Silver simply sweeps it under the rug, Sarah's focus has completely shifted to the high and destructive surrender, with Lester flawlessly using the dynamic between mother and daughter for further exploitation perhaps even leading into a threesome where both women consciously choose to participate.
 
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fantafan said:
The complete How Far is Too Far by DontJudgeMe. Ch 1-21 from Literotica then 22 converted from the PDF posted here. Minor issues like Chapter 2 being out of order, a fake cover, etc. Hopefully I didn't mess anything up in the process of the numerous conversions etc. Anyway, its complete afaik (yes meaning it ends).

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Could you share us some more with long slow story like that.
Sorry for my English not so good
 
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fantafan said:
This is certainly true of the incredibly long stories published on Patreon etc. However, if you're looking for angsty stuff that doesn't follow that formula Literotica has absolutely tons of it in the Loving Wives category. BTB endings? Yup lots of those. RAAC? Yup. Something in between? Yup. Shitty writing, great writing, all kinds of writing. Just look for a decent score (say 4+) and try them out.
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Don't like the BTB ending, they seem to be more in Fantasyland then most of the supercuck authors
 
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alright-alright-alright said:
No they all write the same story, where the husband always tells his wife that even if she my think she went to far or she might even have some reservations about some things that are happening he just tells her how that most he's ever been turned on and how sexy she looks doing it. Then the usual troupes follow like wife lying, then goin behind husband's back. By then the wife is prolly being shared by her lover and his friends and what little the husband does know about he is all the more happier when they let him act involved. It's really sad that nobody can really brake away from this mold. I thought that Vivian author was goin somewhere with her writings but she seemed to have flaked out. Can't seem to finish her series, and the ones she did seem unfinished some how.
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Not sure why you answered "no" and then went on to pretty much validate everything I said.

The depiction of a "Beta husband" in these stories is usually someone who is either too mentally or sexually weak to satisfy his wife completely and gets aroused when someone else does it for him. I'm not agreeing with that definition, but that's typically how the stories make the husband into a loser whose woman starts to betray him.

In my opinion, Vivian's problem with her writing is that she wants it both ways: she wants to write "more active" husbands and wives who "feel bad" about how they're betraying their husbands but actively won't stop doing it. She has also said that she does not like confrontational men in her stories, which conveniently allows her to write the husband just walking out of the door and leaving the wife to her devices while the story remains unresolved. That's what happened in Cuckold Consequences, What's Left Unsaid, and Trinity, thus far. Hell, people loved Chapter 10 of Trinity because Calen (or whatever his name is) finally confronted Cassie and didn't let her crying, weeping and "sorries" stop him from calling her out on her shit. But even then, it ends with him just....walking out of the door with no resolution. No ultimatums. No finality. No actionables. It's the exception that proves the rule: a confrontation that leads to a non-confrontation.
 
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CrownySuccubus said:
Not sure why you answered "no" and then went on to pretty much validate everything I said.

The depiction of a "Beta husband" in these stories is usually someone who is either too mentally or sexually weak to satisfy his wife completely and gets aroused when someone else does it for him. I'm not agreeing with that definition, but that's typically how the stories make the husband into a loser whose woman starts to betray him.

In my opinion, Vivian's problem with her writing is that she wants it both ways: she wants to write "more active" husbands and wives who "feel bad" about how they're betraying their husbands but actively won't stop doing it. She has also said that she does not like confrontational men in her stories, which conveniently allows her to write the husband just walking out of the door and leaving the wife to her devices while the story remains unresolved. That's what happened in Cuckold Consequences, What's Left Unsaid, and Trinity, thus far. Hell, people loved Chapter 10 of Trinity because Calen (or whatever his name is) finally confronted Cassie and didn't let her crying, weeping and "sorries" stop him from calling her out on her shit. But even then, it ends with him just....walking out of the door with no resolution. No ultimatums. No finality. No actionables. It's the exception that proves the rule: a confrontation that leads to a non-confrontation.
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I with u 100%. I felt CC was rushed, but then I went and read the complete story in one book ,it's got a different name. The story takes a turn from the husband standing up for himself to where the husband blames himself and has to listen to the wife blame him also the ending is same same but different. Then the story of the wife sleeping with the husband's best friend, right when all the funds out then the wife finds out she pregnant it was over. I used to support her on patreon but soon saw a pattern of series that ended with resolution, with to big of an open ending that makes no sense or some series that read as they have not ended but the have. They read like the guy comes home for work. The end.
 
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