Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters
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Powerconti
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* The Contact *
In my previous review, I highlighted the author’s exceptionally superb writing style, characterised by fluid storytelling and passionate, erotic elements.
At this point, however, a flaw must be noted which transcends both reality and the bounds of fantasy: the performance of Ray, who apparently possesses a penis capable of ejaculating three times within two hours, yet remains rock-hard and has boundless stamina.
For Ray and Jenna – having got up at around 7 o’clock – first had sex in bed. Afterwards, the sex continued in the shower and finally in the kitchen. The incident in question took place between 7 o’clock and 9 o’clock, until James arrived and interrupted the proceedings. (Ray ejaculated during every sexual encounter!)
I shall refrain from mentioning the sexual encounter in the night (9.00 pm to 7.00 am) and the frequency of Ray’s ejaculations during it.
With regard to tomorrow’s ‘sexual activity’, it can be established that Ray had a total of at least seven to eight ejaculations within a twelve-hour period.
It should be noted that Ray has a different physique and level of fitness to that of an average, young and well-trained man. Instead, he is fat and overweight, sweats like a pig at the slightest exertion, is unathletic and 53 years old.
The author creates a character called Ray who resembles Superman and serves as a metaphor for virility; he is able to get an erection at the *push of a button* so that he can embark on a new sex marathon at any time.
My appeal is this: in this context, the author should endeavour to adopt a realistic and rational approach...
-- PC
In my previous review, I highlighted the author’s exceptionally superb writing style, characterised by fluid storytelling and passionate, erotic elements.
At this point, however, a flaw must be noted which transcends both reality and the bounds of fantasy: the performance of Ray, who apparently possesses a penis capable of ejaculating three times within two hours, yet remains rock-hard and has boundless stamina.
For Ray and Jenna – having got up at around 7 o’clock – first had sex in bed. Afterwards, the sex continued in the shower and finally in the kitchen. The incident in question took place between 7 o’clock and 9 o’clock, until James arrived and interrupted the proceedings. (Ray ejaculated during every sexual encounter!)
I shall refrain from mentioning the sexual encounter in the night (9.00 pm to 7.00 am) and the frequency of Ray’s ejaculations during it.
With regard to tomorrow’s ‘sexual activity’, it can be established that Ray had a total of at least seven to eight ejaculations within a twelve-hour period.
It should be noted that Ray has a different physique and level of fitness to that of an average, young and well-trained man. Instead, he is fat and overweight, sweats like a pig at the slightest exertion, is unathletic and 53 years old.
The author creates a character called Ray who resembles Superman and serves as a metaphor for virility; he is able to get an erection at the *push of a button* so that he can embark on a new sex marathon at any time.
My appeal is this: in this context, the author should endeavour to adopt a realistic and rational approach...
-- PC
srajat11rs
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Can anyone please share story - my fiancee, my sister and my high school bully. From panwhowrites.
WayRadSteve666
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OMSATAN! I just discovered this, and thank you very much and sincerely for doing Dark Lords work here today....and now I'm off to see what sort of crazed perversions Grace is pushed to this time
