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* The Contact *

In my previous review, I highlighted the author’s exceptionally superb writing style, characterised by fluid storytelling and passionate, erotic elements.

At this point, however, a flaw must be noted which transcends both reality and the bounds of fantasy: the performance of Ray, who apparently possesses a penis capable of ejaculating three times within two hours, yet remains rock-hard and has boundless stamina.

For Ray and Jenna – having got up at around 7 o’clock – first had sex in bed. Afterwards, the sex continued in the shower and finally in the kitchen. The incident in question took place between 7 o’clock and 9 o’clock, until James arrived and interrupted the proceedings. (Ray ejaculated during every sexual encounter!)
I shall refrain from mentioning the sexual encounter in the night (9.00 pm to 7.00 am) and the frequency of Ray’s ejaculations during it.
With regard to tomorrow’s ‘sexual activity’, it can be established that Ray had a total of at least seven to eight ejaculations within a twelve-hour period.
It should be noted that Ray has a different physique and level of fitness to that of an average, young and well-trained man. Instead, he is fat and overweight, sweats like a pig at the slightest exertion, is unathletic and 53 years old.

The author creates a character called Ray who resembles Superman and serves as a metaphor for virility; he is able to get an erection at the *push of a button* so that he can embark on a new sex marathon at any time.
My appeal is this: in this context, the author should endeavour to adopt a realistic and rational approach...

-- PC
 
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jailsu said:
Part 20 is formatted incorrectly due to issues with transferring the file. 21 had a direct download so it should be good. Not a major issue just means some of the paragraphs aren't as clearly separated.
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OMSATAN! I just discovered this, and thank you very much and sincerely for doing Dark Lords work here today....and now I'm off to see what sort of crazed perversions Grace is pushed to this time🤘😈🤘😈🤘😈
 
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* The Contact - Ch. 21 *

This chapter is characterised by a gripping, passionate and thrilling narrative style, which can be regarded in this thesis as a unique example of exceptional storytelling. In summary, it can be said that this is an excellent work, ranking amongst the best of its kind.
It is one of the most remarkable chapters I have read recently.

James’s reaction and actions were the long-awaited outburst of emotion and impatience that came at just the right moment. This moment marked the beginning of a significant turning point in the narrative.

Based on my intuition, which I cannot shake off, I predict that James and Jenna will eventually separate and their marriage will break down.
Jenna’s behaviour – showing no inclination to give up Ray or end the affair – reinforces this prevailing feeling.
Despite James’s warnings and assurances, she will continue to meet Ray in secret and carry on with their sexual escapades. During one of these secret meetings, the pair will be caught out by James. And that is precisely what will lead James to put his words (warnings) into action and break up with Jenna.

It is in the nature of things that people make mistakes. It is therefore entirely understandable that the author might astonish me and the other fans and readers with an unexpected twist. I am curious to see how this plays out and am looking forward to the coming chapters ...

-- PC
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ur review is good . can u review othe stories like this, so i read or skip the story. or suggest other story same as TA
 
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Powerconti said:
* The Contact *

In my previous review, I highlighted the author’s exceptionally superb writing style, characterised by fluid storytelling and passionate, erotic elements.

At this point, however, a flaw must be noted which transcends both reality and the bounds of fantasy: the performance of Ray, who apparently possesses a penis capable of ejaculating three times within two hours, yet remains rock-hard and has boundless stamina.

For Ray and Jenna – having got up at around 7 o’clock – first had sex in bed. Afterwards, the sex continued in the shower and finally in the kitchen. The incident in question took place between 7 o’clock and 9 o’clock, until James arrived and interrupted the proceedings. (Ray ejaculated during every sexual encounter!)
I shall refrain from mentioning the sexual encounter in the night (9.00 pm to 7.00 am) and the frequency of Ray’s ejaculations during it.
With regard to tomorrow’s ‘sexual activity’, it can be established that Ray had a total of at least seven to eight ejaculations within a twelve-hour period.
It should be noted that Ray has a different physique and level of fitness to that of an average, young and well-trained man. Instead, he is fat and overweight, sweats like a pig at the slightest exertion, is unathletic and 53 years old.

The author creates a character called Ray who resembles Superman and serves as a metaphor for virility; he is able to get an erection at the *push of a button* so that he can embark on a new sex marathon at any time.
My appeal is this: in this context, the author should endeavour to adopt a realistic and rational approach...

-- PC
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I agree that it’s not very realistic, but personally, before you pointed it out, I hadn’t noticed so many inconsistencies. It seems you really have to take the time to count them up to realize it...



What I did notice right away while reading was the moment Ray and Jenna have sex in the kitchen. I feel that scene is unnecessary. Ray has already had several sexual encounters, yet he jumps straight into another one—like the Terminator, lol! Furthermore, these scenes don’t really add much in terms of erotic tension. They just served as a trigger for James to get upset, but a different scene—the shower scene, for instance—could have been used instead.



On the other hand, while we shouldn’t exaggerate, we also have to consider that some men—the bulls—can be well above the average. In adult films, for example, the actors generally have penises that are above average—sometimes significantly so! It’s fair to imagine that a similar range exists among men when it comes to sexual performance. It’s certainly exceptional, but it’s not impossible...
 
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user322 said:
On the other hand, while we shouldn’t exaggerate, we also have to consider that some men—the bulls—can be well above the average. In adult films, for example, the actors generally have penises that are above average—sometimes significantly so! It’s fair to imagine that a similar range exists among men when it comes to sexual performance. It’s certainly exceptional, but it’s not impossible...
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I'd be careful trying to use porn as a measuring stick for erotic realism. Porn has entire production staff and crews which work to create the illusion of uninterrupted, unproblematic sexual fantasy. For example, long breaks and fluffers exist for exact reason that even a professional can't always get it up or stay hard on demand and stamina sometimes just plain old runs out.
 
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Powerconti said:
It is evident that as the stories grow in length, there is a marked decline in quality. This may be due to Antarctica77’s particular writing style.
His attempt to incorporate a psychological filter into the stories consistently fails and contributes to the stories becoming a complex and opaque structure from which the author is ultimately unable to extricate himself.
The confusion described above manifests itself in a particular way in his other, parallel story * BTND *, especially in the last two chapters (20–21).

-- PC
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I think with his recent money problems it has put pressure on his writing style. Also, he may be responding actively to what his subscribers want to see happen in the story line.
 
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CrownySuccubus said:
I'd be careful trying to use porn as a measuring stick for erotic realism. Porn has entire production staff and crews which work to create the illusion of uninterrupted, unproblematic sexual fantasy. For example, long breaks and fluffers exist for exact reason that even a professional can't always get it up or stay hard on demand and stamina sometimes just plain old runs out.
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When it comes to porn, I was referring to penis size, not stamina.
My point is that, just as there can sometimes be a huge difference in penis size, there can also be a huge difference in stamina.

And you have to be careful when it comes to physique: sometimes a man who doesn't look very athletic can perform better than a man with a more athletic build. The first example that comes to mind is the boxing champion Tyson Fury, lol. Just look at his appearance and compare him to other boxers... and yet, he’s a great champion!
 
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user322 said:
When it comes to porn, I was referring to penis size, not stamina.
My point is that, just as there can sometimes be a huge difference in penis size, there can also be a huge difference in stamina.

And you have to be careful when it comes to physique: sometimes a man who doesn't look very athletic can perform better than a man with a more athletic build. The first example that comes to mind is the boxing champion Tyson Fury, lol. Just look at his appearance and compare him to other boxers... and yet, he’s a great champion!
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My concern was because your post specifically referred "sexual performance" in reference to porn. I stand by my point that porn is a horrible reference point to mention sexual performance, even if only referring to penis size.

You are half-correct about the fact that there are a large variety of male body sizes and outliers, but it's also VERY common for those outliers to come with costs, such as larger dicks being more difficult to keep erect (the human body only has so much blood in it) and other challenges.

I moreso get what you're trying to say now -- you're saying that just because something is unlikely doesn't mean it's impossible -- but I still stand by what I said because both porn and erotica want a world where outliers are a form of exceptional status.
 
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CrownySuccubus said:
My concern was because your post specifically referred "sexual performance" in reference to porn. I stand by my point that porn is a horrible reference point to mention sexual performance, even if only referring to penis size.

You are half-correct about the fact that there are a large variety of male body sizes and outliers, but it's also VERY common for those outliers to come with costs, such as larger dicks being more difficult to keep erect (the human body only has so much blood in it) and other challenges.

I moreso get what you're trying to say now -- you're saying that just because something is unlikely doesn't mean it's impossible -- but I still stand by what I said because both porn and erotica want a world where outliers are a form of exceptional status.
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Ray taking tons of Viagra and being on an ssri for depression would make him last longer. 😂

The big issue is that men, as readers and authors, don't realize that people can have great sex without everything revolving around a powerful penis.
 
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bluepixiegurl316 said:
Ray taking tons of Viagra and being on an ssri for depression would make him last longer. 😂

The big issue is that men, as readers and authors, don't realize that people can have great sex without everything revolving around a powerful penis.
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Don't take me the wrong way. A good sized cock, a well toned body, as well as a round, butt filled butt, toned legs, and well proportioned breasts (one or all of these characteristics) are all good to start with, but in real life, a partner's relationship, mood, strong character, and creativity can be a greater aphrodisiac than any other stimulus.
Some men are crazy about strong women, others about the submissive ones. Others want something that belongs to others.
Some women are crazy about men who can impose themselves over others, about their power, regardless of their beauty. Some are crazy about intelligent and/or funny men.
Money is out of question. When the priority is money, it's business.
So it's not just about the size of cocks or titties.
It's more about finding the partner or partners, who fill as many of your fantasies as possible.

Well, at least in real life.
 
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