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Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

I am not sure if the author Don can read our comments here or not.
One thing I would like to mention here is that he made a son of a bitch like Lester into an ā€˜almost’ Superman is just (even if it is a fantasy story)
unrealistic and irrational.

He should rather put him at the head of the CIA, or in the Pentagon, or make him Bill Gates' right-hand man, or CEO of iPhone, etc. etc. ect....
On the other hand, he turns everyone around Lester (but especially Dan) into idiots, good-for-nothings, fools and pawns.
Only Lester, he's the mastermind, the Superman who inherits John Holmes!

Go fuck yourself man!
What the fuck is this?
 
The author DS has turned Lester into a ā€˜Swiss Army Knife’. This is a knife (if you don't know it, just google it!)
that can do everything and is ahead of all others.
What an achievement!

Turning Sarah into a whore who outshines even the most famous whores of the 20th century, Josefine Mutzenbacher
and Mata Hari (both of whom more or less had a mission).

And Dan becomes a whipping boy for everyone, a loser and good-for-nothing!
What an exuberant fantasy!

I know, I know ... Some of you will now say that I shouldn't read this anymore, that it's an unreal fantasy and so on and so forth.
Fantasy yes, but do not degenerate into 1001 Nights or Brothers Grimm fairy tales, a little realism does not hurt...
 
Gotta agree with the majority view - this chapter had nothing worthwhile in it. The engagement ring was probably the only remotely creative moment. Even the sex scene was so dull I ended up skimming through it - and DS is usually good at sex scenes.
 
Please, let me clear something that appears to be bothering a lot of people.
I am pretty sure everyone in this and other forums enjoy reading TA from the beginning up to the latest (my opinion) boring chapters.
Almost every single chapter is good as a stand alone short story and better when part of the whole story.
From all discussion boards I have read there's a fight between those who enjoy the way it is and others who expected something else.
What I am saying is: it's right to love it and/or hate it for whatever reason.
DS is an amazing skilled writer, but, in my humble opinion, is milking the story unnecessarily.
I expect to read a lot from him, but something with a minimum of common sense.
What bothers me it's the waste of his writing skills doing an insipid job.
It's his choice and we must respect him, his subscribers and his cheerleaders.
But we must respect those who disagree with him, too. Paying (his 800 plus Patreon subscribers) or not paying customers (8.2 billion people also known as the rest of the world).
 
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