[MandoLogica] Forbidden Flames

[llermito]

A very new update

 

[llermito]

A very new update

 

[Michalis_K]

Posting the hole part 2 (213 pages) as a rar file for easy access. As far as i can see, here (in the thread) part 2 is updated so far till page 60

 

[Gnaparelli]

Just too long, too complicated, unnecessary plot twists... All that "i wouldn't fuck you without your consent (??!???)" C'mon man... Not exactly exciting, unfortunately. Too bad because mom (Catherine from "The tan/bad tan") is great (and Jenny would be even better). But having sexy character is not enough if artist starts to make up some really silly, out-of-the-world ideas and dialogues instead of just creating nice , simple, taboo incest story. So, unfortunately this is just not good. Hopefully Mandologica will eventually change his way of creating porn stories.

 

[zorro2000]

Just too long, too complicated, unnecessary plot twists... All that "i wouldn't fuck you without your consent (??!???)" C'mon man... Not exactly exciting, unfortunately. Too bad because mom (Catherine from "The tan/bad tan") is great (and Jenny would be even better). But having sexy character is not enough if artist starts to make up some really silly, out-of-the-world ideas and dialogues instead of just creating nice , simple, taboo incest story. So, unfortunately this is just not good. Hopefully Mandologica will eventually change his way of creating porn stories.

I agree somewhat, and I hope that this shift in the story leads to something more important and more exciting. I apologize if my idea did not reach you well, as this is a translation from my original language.

 

[llermito]

A very new update

 

[bubbahubba007]

Thanks

 

[Johnsina21]

Spoiler!!

 

[almodovar]

Spoiler!!

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As a cerebral person, I find this picture particularly erotic. The son is very excited by his mother's nudity, and treats her body as mere mastic or a plaything. So unexpectedly, without permission, he touches her soft meat just like that as if it was nothing, ignoring any barrier between mother and son. By her face, she shows that she is speechless and powerless, shocked by such audacity from her son. But he doesn't expect any backlash from his mother. We could dissert for hours on this picture. Thanks for sharing!

 

[Radiccio80]

Forbidden Flames 3 - 285, 286

 

[NewtBlack]

Let me guess: Katherine and Jessy are going to develop a pseudo-lesbian relationship which revolves around Katherine's presumed annoyance, when in, I guess the word for it is, "reality," Katherine is going to live out some sadomasochistic fantasy where she (sexually) disciplines Jessy. Why is this plot becoming more pornographic? (To be fair, it did kind of start out that way.) Why is this even developing at all, much more at a far quicker pace than Ben and Katherine? Is the majority of subscribers really requesting this? I'm honestly curious.

 

[Urikf]

Let me guess: Katherine and Jessy are going to develop a pseudo-lesbian relationship which revolves around Katherine's presumed annoyance, when in, I guess the word for it is, "reality," Katherine is going to live out some sadomasochistic fantasy where she (sexually) disciplines Jessy. Why is this plot becoming more pornographic? (To be fair, it did kind of start out that way.) Why is this even developing at all, much more at a far quicker pace than Ben and Katherine? Is the majority of subscribers really requesting this? I'm honestly curious.

I believe that author doesn't have an idea how to develop a plot. That's why he simplified ALL OF HIS FOUR comics. By the way he doesn't to finish his comics because he will have to create a something new. I wrote about JFY @ F95. Now we see taht it happened with other 3 artworks. I understand that author wants to make money. You understand that if he will continue with this acrobatics he instead of making money he AT LAST... will lose subscribers. I apologize but it is my personal opinion. Why do I think so? I see that all of 4 comics are close to the end according to plot's logic but author try to add new unecessary scenes to keep subscribers' interest. IMHO.

 

[NewtBlack]

I believe that author doesn't have an idea how to develop a plot. That's why he simplified ALL OF HIS FOUR comics. By the way he doesn't to finish his comics because he will have to create a something new. I wrote about JFY @ F95. Now we see taht it happened with other 3 artworks. I understand that author wants to make money. You understand that if he will continue with this acrobatics he instead of making money he AT LAST... will lose subscribers. I apologize but it is my personal opinion. Why do I think so? I see that all of 4 comics are close to the end according to plot's logic but author try to add new unecessary scenes to keep subscribers' interest. IMHO.

I get where you're coming from. In my opinion, Mandologica's best story started with Breaking Boundaries. I know he's had one-off's before, and I haven't paid much attention to JYF or TW, but the first few chapters of Breaking Boundaries were really good. Not only did I like the slow build-up, but the psychological manipulation on the son's part was semi-plausible. But the pitfall I wish content creators would avoid is the temptation to cater to the whims of the internet mob, for lack of a better term, and instead compel them to like what you as a content creator want them to like. In other words, it's your story. Make them like it. The reason I'm always loading my critiques with references to pornography is because porn is lazy, and heavily reliant on the mere attractiveness of their female talent. I suppose it concerns me when extremely talented 3D artists mimic this, glossing over a golden opportunity to stimulate not just the body, but also the heart, mind, and soul. 3D art, especially as detailed and intricate as it has become in recent years, expands the scope of creative license that porn cannot hope to broach. But maybe I should just temper my expectations because not everyone's going to like what I like, and vice versa. And regardless of whether or not it bothers me, I'm always a supporter of a content creator doing what he wishes, whenever he wishes, however he wishes.

 

[Urikf]

I get where you're coming from. In my opinion, Mandologica's best story started with Breaking Boundaries. I know he's had one-off's before, and I haven't paid much attention to JYF or TW, but the first few chapters of Breaking Boundaries were really good. Not only did I like the slow build-up, but the psychological manipulation on the son's part was semi-plausible. But the pitfall I wish content creators would avoid is the temptation to cater to the whims of the internet mob, for lack of a better term, and instead compel them to like what you as a content creator want them to like. In other words, it's your story. Make them like it. The reason I'm always loading my critiques with references to pornography is because porn is lazy, and heavily reliant on the mere attractiveness of their female talent. I suppose it concerns me when extremely talented 3D artists mimic this, glossing over a golden opportunity to stimulate not just the body, but also the heart, mind, and soul. 3D art, especially as detailed and intricate as it has become in recent years, expands the scope of creative license that porn cannot hope to broach. But maybe I should just temper my expectations because not everyone's going to like what I like, and vice versa. And regardless of whether or not it bothers me, I'm always a supporter of a content creator doing what he wishes, whenever he wishes, however he wishes.

You don't understand my point. Author started to write comic without any idea how to continue and moreover how to finish it. He had an idea how to start it and he hope that earlier or later he will know what to do next or he hoped that he subscribers would help him. Unfortunately, as a rule subscribers are consumers but not idea generators. Now we can see that it is a dead end. OK?

 

[NewtBlack]

You don't understand my point. Author started to write comic without any idea how to continue and moreover how to finish it. He had an idea how to start it and he hope that earlier or later he will know what to do next or he hoped that he subscribers would help him. Unfortunately, as a rule subscribers are consumers but not idea generators. Now we can see that it is a dead end. OK?

I understand your point, I'm just not fully on board with it for one single reason: we're not mind readers. Any assumption as to what's inside Mandologica's head is an attempt at wizardry. Hence my commentary focuses more on what the plot conveys as opposed to what I think the author thinks. Is it plausible that Mandologica started with a premise and is simply adjusting the extension of his story due to the lucratively popular demands of his subscriber base? Yes. Is it just as plausible that Mandologica likes the stories that he tells, and plans them these ways on purpose? Yes. The truth is, we don't know. I try to keep my attention on what I glean from the plot as opposed to any pretense that I know what the author is thinking. I wouldn't patronize these artists that way.

 

[lorys]

I'm sorry to interfere, I'm also the same idea as yours.But this not only with mandologica but with other authors that I followassiduously.Like, crazy dad who brings the stories of him too long dynasty type...And which in the long run tire and expire miserably.Like Mr. foxx who doesn't finish the stories but on the last page writes continues...A small note on mandologica, if you get a mother pregnant, after she has rediscovered her dormant femininity, you have entered a tunnel.as I wrote some time ago for The Case Of Mrs. Smith by mr. foxx, I would have expected anything but that evolution.therefore, for better or worse everyone falls.this is to be understood as constructive criticism, nothing else....

 

[dwalsh]

I'm sorry to interfere, I'm also the same idea as yours.But this not only with mandologica but with other authors that I followassiduously.Like, crazy dad who brings the stories of him too long dynasty type...And which in the long run tire and expire miserably.Like Mr. foxx who doesn't finish the stories but on the last page writes continues...A small note on mandologica, if you get a mother pregnant, after she has rediscovered her dormant femininity, you have entered a tunnel.as I wrote some time ago for The Case Of Mrs. Smith by mr. foxx, I would have expected anything but that evolution.therefore, for better or worse everyone falls.this is to be understood as constructive criticism, nothing else....

Small correction, the case of Mrs Smith is not under Mr Foxx last time I checked.

 

[lorys]

yes, is wck3d, sorry

 

[Johnsina21]

Spoiler!!

 

[qhill44]

1 page oh yeah....