[Marmalade Mum] Art+Comics

[Hobbie]

Why do i have a feeling that brad gonna brad Alex arm and pull him back closer to him

Sincerely hope not! Let’s get out of this locker finally and get the story moving

Seems like Alex has realized the milk is not harmless and wants to rush home before anyone drinks any. I wonder if he’ll make it

 

[Edd085]

My God, if there are still 30 pages to go before chapter 4, I hope they won't be useless blah, blah, blah...

I love MM's work, but I'd also like to see the story progress without unnecessary slowdowns. Unnecessary dialogue or flashbacks between different characters, lasting several weeks or less, no thanks. I've already tested that. MM : Great work, but keep the story moving, please.

MM : Great work, but keep the story moving, please !!

 

[Hobbie]

My God, if there are still 30 pages to go before chapter 4, I hope they won't be useless blah, blah, blah...

I love MM's work, but I'd also like to see the story progress without unnecessary slowdowns. Unnecessary dialogue or flashbacks between different characters, lasting several weeks or less, no thanks. I've already tested that. MM : Great work, but keep the story moving, please.

MM : Great work, but keep the story moving, please !!

Possibly even 40 pages. I do not mind, as long as the story moves along. There can be story progress as well as exciting sex scenes, and build up to those scenes. Chapter 3 was almost just one long sex scene. Which I admit, I would not mind as much if it involved Clara. But anything can get boring if nothing interesting happens

Thankfully it seems interesting stuff is finally happening

 

[Edd085]

Alex seems to be in a hurry...

 

[Gamefriend]

Prediction for the plot: Alex and Brad make themselves ready and, after an maybe encounter with the people outside the locker head home to Alexe, where they find Riley and Clara (Cara potential with some more changes).

 

[Marine1234]

Chemistry Class III - Page 141 ​

 

[Marine1234]

it's getting a bit long !

 

[Hobbie]

it's getting a bit long !

Jeez. At this pace, the next page will be them walking to the locker again. Then the next page them slowly walking past the lockers. Then the next page very very slowly reaching for the door out of the locker.

 

[Deleted member 2877]

aw man, i wanted a shower sex scene

 

[Edd085]

Cassie. I guess she saw Alex and Brad go.

 

[Hobbie]

Wow, we were in the locker so long I forgot there were any other characters!

 

[Marine1234]

Chemistry Class III - Page 142​

 

[Dog]

Damn! I hope that in the next two pages, there will be an ellipsis do that Alex can arrive DIRECTLY at his house and we can see Clara again.

 

[Hobbie]

Can't rush story everything has it way to connect remember it not just a sex comic is a book

Sure. As long as story actually moves. It can segue quickly and still feel normal.

 

[Marine1234]

Chemistry Class III - Page 143 ​

 

[GamecubeDude100]

BONUS New art work of brad by mm

 

[Marine1234]

Chemistry Class III - Page 144​

 

[Edd085]

New page wonder what gonna happen

What should happen... But we’re still in high school...

 

[Marine1234]

Chemistry Class III - Page 145​

 

[Edd085]

Poor Brad, he's contracted bovine fever... It would be funny if he contaminated those around him and the effects, for lactose-tolerant people, were similar to milk...