One of the problems with his older stories, IMHO, is that he doesn't use any kind of break, be it a string of ***, or a new chapter, to distinguish when there is some sort of transition in the story.I should read more of his older stories, cause he does hit a lot of my kinks. Lee's batch of releases from last year turned me off the writer and there's a shit-ton of similar writers/stories available.
The transition can be a gap in time, a new location, a different characters now the POV, etc.
It can be jarring at times.
I had an e-mail exchange with him about this, and shortly afterwards, he started using chapter breaks.