Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 23 part 2)
I know no one asked me but in my persons opinion this story just doesn't make sense at all
it does cover that erotic/fetish story part and for those who are just looking for that then it's fine but personally I'm really disappointed and I like it less and less with every chapter
The story doesn't make sense there's so many things that are not logical
but talking just about the last few chapters, Andrew (I think that's his name) just started remembering things, he wanted to end this and go back to his life so he wanted to talk to his wife Marina to explain and try to solve things
but instead of that, because she was angry that he had ignored her, and that he, her husband had sex with a man, her uncle, instead of trying harder to talk to her and convince her that he had amnesia or that was still confused he decided the best way to get back at her, for being rightfully angry, was to have sex with her uncle again, just ignore what he was thinking about going back to his life and ending the charade, instead he'd commit even further to this lie....
also Marina feeling betrayed goes to have her own affair but why would she choose the inspector, it would make more sense if she actuallystarted having a relationship with the fake husband.... I think in her case it can be justified because it was her honeymoon and her husband decided to abandon her to be with someone else, so this is not that crazy
But for him to just ignore everything that he wanted to try and get back at her (still don't understand why he would be angry) doesn't make sense
And I'm not talking about my personal opinion and dislike for the whold age progression theme, which for me has no appeal and is the biggest nonsense....
I don't want to offend anyone and I don't pretend to get anyone to change their minds but I really wanted to express my thoughts