ginger_anagram
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This is beginning to feel like something written by JJ Abram’s ….
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[Melissa N.] Collection
- Thread starter alienhead
- Start date
- 3dcg
- age-progression
- feminization transformation
Sur_GalaChad
Active member
This plot is so cooked ....
transmorpho
Member
the way the story is going, Aphrodite will skip a year or more, and Nikos will be trapped with his gang, and so Andrew will completely assume the identity of Elena, Eva and Sofia treating him as his biological mother, and even after everything Marina did to him, he will still make peace with her treating her as his beloved niece, and who knows, even becoming Mr. Toska's wife, as in all of Melissa's stories, always the same ending, it's no wonder Melissa makes great graphics, but her stories are already becoming routine, always the same thing.
Elaine
Active member
I have been thinking about the story today. I am not sure it makes sense for Nikos to shoot Elena as it was more than likely him that paid for the surgeries. the speed that Melissa updates the story is truly annoying
mihaluck
Active member
it was supposed to be moving towards the end kind of like last year. Then she said she wouldn't be able to finish before the end of the last year. Then I assumed that it would be until September lol. But maybe I was being too optimistic? How many pieces are left?
Kobboldpot
Member
Heed my prophecy:
- In the next episode, they'll be chatting and barely make it to the bedroom.
- An episode later, they'll start cuddles, shyness, and just barely get around to starting anything.
- Two episodes from now, something will interrupt them, and a new arc will begin, lasting 2-3 episodes, spent chatting in a single location.
honkykong
Member
I don't like crapping on work or complaining about stuff i'm getting free, I feel like you lose that right when you aren't actually paying....BUT
I started A Bestie in the Making and I couldn't believe Melissa is actually is putting this out. It might be the most soul less, un-inspired just cookie-cutter, put together in 10 minutes story i've seen in a long time lol. I understand there's only so many ways you can write the same "man reluctantly turned into a woman" story but jeez it's as if you asked someone to come up with the most stereotypical, least creative TG story possible so far lol. Hey maybe i'm not giving it enough time, maybe there's a narrative just getting going or a hook that's yet to show and if so then I apologize in advance to Melissa! So far tho...not great.
I think Melissa is fantastic too and does GREAT work which is why i'm so surprised she's even putting this out, it's well below her standard imo. I have higher expectations from her because in my opinion she's one of the GOATs who's been doing this genre a while and has made some outstanding stories and if I didn't respect and enjoy her work I wouldn't say anything and just move on. If her paying Patrons are happy with it though, that's all that matters at the end of the day I guess, no clue if they are or not but just felt like sharing my opinion I guess curious if anyone else feels this way haha.
I started A Bestie in the Making and I couldn't believe Melissa is actually is putting this out. It might be the most soul less, un-inspired just cookie-cutter, put together in 10 minutes story i've seen in a long time lol. I understand there's only so many ways you can write the same "man reluctantly turned into a woman" story but jeez it's as if you asked someone to come up with the most stereotypical, least creative TG story possible so far lol. Hey maybe i'm not giving it enough time, maybe there's a narrative just getting going or a hook that's yet to show and if so then I apologize in advance to Melissa! So far tho...not great.
I think Melissa is fantastic too and does GREAT work which is why i'm so surprised she's even putting this out, it's well below her standard imo. I have higher expectations from her because in my opinion she's one of the GOATs who's been doing this genre a while and has made some outstanding stories and if I didn't respect and enjoy her work I wouldn't say anything and just move on. If her paying Patrons are happy with it though, that's all that matters at the end of the day I guess, no clue if they are or not but just felt like sharing my opinion I guess curious if anyone else feels this way haha.
mihaluck
Active member
of course it very plane. no need even comparison to similar theme comics other authors like liltkit His Leash Is Short As Well As His Skirt or barrosbr Restructuring. Melissa had similar A (Not So) Temporary Roommate and that was other level and then I was support her, but now not. It's not worth the encouragement.
Kobboldpot
Member
Again, questions about dramaturgy. I'm not sure if you know the term "Chekhov's Gun," but it's a universal principle for any script: If something was shown on camera, it should work.
And if in the last episode the heroine is fiddling with a soft penis, lamenting her inability to experience pleasure, then in the next scene, in which she's staring at a MILF's perky butt, we definitely don't expect a hamburger, which hasn't been shown in the story before.
Perhaps it would be more appropriate (if the author doesn't want to immediately pull out a strap-on from the nightstand) to engage in some kind of reflection or relaxation.
- Inspecting one's body in the mirror, which will further arouse and inspire thoughts that there is another path to pleasure since the usual one isn't working. And then immediately dismiss it out of fear.
- Make out with a fellow dancer and try to force sex (and she'd be down for it), but his penis treacherously remains soft. Then his co-worker suggests he try/show her "How Girls Do It With Each Other."
- Send him to a massage, where, under skilled hands, he'd start moaning and writhing in overstimulation, and he wouldn't even notice his butt sticking out. And then maybe a hired masseur/masseuse would touch him in specific places, and he'd be so excited he'd let them do it without resisting.
- Or, most banal and vulgarly, his boss would greet him in sexy lace lingerie. She'd say, "I can take it all back if it's really that boring to you. But are you sure you're still a man?" And demand he prove his masculinity in bed, which, of course, he'd fail because his penis refused to get aroused.
Or even all of this in the right order. But definitely not two episodes of sitting on the splits and chatting about nothing.
Nippur
Well-known member
Husband erased, bestie in his place, double dating awaits
mntna
Active member
i was expecting a situation like this, i think Amy planned everything from the start (days or months ago)
it's a classic scene, but it never gets old
love it
that's what Amy is working on, Isabella look the part of her Girly Ditzy BFF, now it's time to push him into feeling like he really is Amy's Girly Ditzy BFF Isabella and that his old self was only someone that Amy dated
i'm really into this story, maybe because we are still at the "beginning" of the feminization but i'm starting to get really curious about how it goes on
Coracal422
Member
I hope that it gets explained why Amy has chosen to do this with Isabella. One of the things I really didn't like about Temporary Roommate is that we don't really know the real reason why the FL did what she did to Destiny. Only the bullshit she told to him which I'm pretty sure it's not the truth, or at least not the whole story.
And I know that these are just fetishy short stories without any real substance, but I'd like to know that kind of thing.
mntna
Active member
i don't agree with you on "A (Not So) Temporary Roommate"
i think that the explanation that the FL (Sara) gave was good and plausible
at the start it was something to fool her Parents, then to have a better chance to fool them, she push things furhter, but when Her Parents visit them and Her Mother took a liking to Destiny, things went out of Sara's control
TTax
Member
Is it just me or character are barely moving in place? Like the kpop idol, don't know how many chapter it took to get min ji from bathroom to out side the door, honestly mellisa really is dragging it out. Just saying one sentence is taking a whole page, like just discuss all of it with one page, Tgtrinity does it best honestly, with characters talking and all that. I don't know...has mellisa perhaps lost the passion of creating. And seems like I'm not the only one to notice this. Damn I wish we had more creators in this space, if one was bad we could have had dozen of other stories to look forward to. 60 or even less second of reading and watching the 3D character just doesn't do it for me. Shit is not horny no more lol.
On the other hand if someone got a similar stories like the slow feminization similar to LitKit and mellisa N, from places like fictionmania and any other sites. Would appreciate if you can share it here. Those places have hidden jems but it's hella difficult to find and go through all of them.
On the other hand if someone got a similar stories like the slow feminization similar to LitKit and mellisa N, from places like fictionmania and any other sites. Would appreciate if you can share it here. Those places have hidden jems but it's hella difficult to find and go through all of them.
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