[Melissa N.] Collection

[Jackjons]

I don't know you guys remember it or not , at the beginning of This story it was years ago , Melissa mentioned that she is a fan of Sir Arthur Conan Doyel's story, for Aphrodite Mirror, she was inspired from sir Arthur Conan Doyel's writings.
People who don't know ( i believe everyone knows what sir Arthur Conan Doyel created) Doyel created SHERLOCK HOLMES & Many crime mystery thrillers.
Now you guys understand why Aphrodite Mirror is like this,
The story is almost its ending face but still there is MANY question remains unsolved, that is the speciality of Doyel's writing style.


But , for tg gender Bender erotic comics, i don't think the genner is much appropriate

 

[transmorpho]

I don't know you guys remember it or not , at the beginning of This story it was years ago , Melissa mentioned that she is a fan of Sir Arthur Conan Doyel's story, for Aphrodite Mirror, she was inspired from sir Arthur Conan Doyel's writings.
People who don't know ( i believe everyone knows what sir Arthur Conan Doyel created) Doyel created SHERLOCK HOLMES & Many crime mystery thrillers.
Now you guys understand why Aphrodite Mirror is like this,
The story is almost its ending face but still there is MANY question remains unsolved, that is the speciality of Doyel's writing style.


But , for tg gender Bender erotic comics, i don't think the genner is much appropriate

So if we follow this path, everything will only be resolved on the last page, it's like watching a movie waiting for the hero to defeat the villain, but the hero dies in the last minute of the movie and the villain is free.

 

[Jackjons]

So if we follow this path, everything will only be resolved on the last page, it's like watching a movie waiting for the hero to defeat the villain, but the hero dies in the last minute of the movie and the villain is free.

It is not like hero villain story, it is mystery thrillers, we will have the answers but it doesn't means villina will get punishment hero will win ,
I am not saying it can't be possible but
Mainly in mystery thrillers specialy in sharlock holmes story we will have all the answers, why the transformation, who is behind it , what was the motive etc etc .......

I don't know what will happen in Aphrodite Mirror, that is upto Melissa. For me i am not following Aphrodite Mirror, reason is to much thriller suspense, and for me , i am okay with a good story but not this much thriller suspense in a Adult Erotic gender Bender comic.
If I need to feel the suspense, thriller I can watch sharlock holmes, Agatha Christie, hercules poirot or other thriller suspense...
It is not my cup of tea

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

If I need a plot board or if your comic needs recaps you're doing too much... Mirror started doing too much about 15 chapters ago and I checked out I read these comics to fulfill a fetish not try to unravel a mystery that feels so convoluted she lost the plot and just started throwing darts at a wall for patreon filler arcs.

The idea was great and it was going well then it all got unhinged and now it's not even erotic anymore there hasn't even been nudity is like 6 chapters just exposition dumps

 

[Jackjons]

If I need a plot board or if your comic needs recaps you're doing too much... Mirror started doing too much about 15 chapters ago and I checked out I read these comics to fulfill a fetish not try to unravel a mystery that feels so convoluted she lost the plot and just started throwing darts at a wall for patreon filler arcs.

The idea was great and it was going well then it all got unhinged and now it's not even erotic anymore there hasn't even been nudity is like 6 chapters just exposition dumps

It becomes a thriller mystery, that is what exactly i mentioned if I need to read or watch thriller mystery i would for other story, why in the world i would read a erotic gender Bender adult story for thriller mystery. It makes no sense, to be honest, now hanna is doing good and day by day becoming better, lilkit also doing good ,

Everyone has their time , I feel mellisa's time is coming to end here , if she started thinking herself as a mystery thriller writer

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

It becomes a thriller mystery, that is what exactly i mentioned if I need to read or watch thriller mystery i would for other story, why in the world i would read a erotic gender Bender adult story for thriller mystery. It makes no sense, to be honest, now hanna is doing good and day by day becoming better, lilkit also doing good ,

Everyone has their time , I feel mellisa's time is coming to end here , if she started thinking herself as a mystery thriller writer

Litkit is starting to peak her stories are generally good and I'm enjoying the current one as well Hannah is unreadable to me her stories are dreadful... Melissa is just entrenched in the patreon filler category she makes so much money and has so many followers she doesn't need to try she can just release sexless , nudeless filler and get rich off it. It's a shame what she's become because her stories are good and have a lot of potential. Just keeping my fingers crossed she actually finishes kpop this time and not bench it again for the 4th time lol

 

[Kobboldpot]

A Kpop Idol Chapter 13 Part 3

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I don’t remember if I said it or not, but what confuses me about this story is that the main character has ALREADY undergone all the plastic surgeries, has a new face, a female figure, a different voice, BUT at the same time there were no scenes of feminization, lessons in femininity, any reflection on the fact that he is not even a sissy, but just another fake personality (well, except for a fleeting but drawn-out scene with a group that found a new soloist, but I somehow did not understand what the conclusions were there), and most importantly, for 300+ pages there was still no K-pop

 

[Kobboldpot]

I don’t remember if I said it or not, but what confuses me about this story is that the main character has ALREADY undergone all the plastic surgeries, has a new face, a female figure, a different voice, BUT at the same time there were no scenes of feminization, lessons in femininity, any reflection on the fact that he is not even a sissy, but just another fake personality (well, except for a fleeting but drawn-out scene with a group that found a new soloist, but I somehow did not understand what the conclusions were there), and most importantly, for 300+ pages there was still no K-pop

And that's not counting the fact that the feminization itself, despite more than 300 pages, was very crumpled and rough. They put a cage on her, took her to fitness once, spanked her once and that's it - go under the surgeon's knife.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

I don’t remember if I said it or not, but what confuses me about this story is that the main character has ALREADY undergone all the plastic surgeries, has a new face, a female figure, a different voice, BUT at the same time there were no scenes of feminization, lessons in femininity, any reflection on the fact that he is not even a sissy, but just another fake personality (well, except for a fleeting but drawn-out scene with a group that found a new soloist, but I somehow did not understand what the conclusions were there), and most importantly, for 300+ pages there was still no K-pop

It helps a lot of you read the original story but I agree the tone of the full label comic is not the same as the OG. Would deff give it a read it's much better and more cohesive

 

[mihaluck]

And that's not counting the fact that the feminization itself, despite more than 300 pages, was very crumpled and rough. They put a cage on her, took her to fitness once, spanked her once and that's it - go under the surgeon's knife.

Oh, if there were more of that, the pace would be so slow that we'd be waiting years until surgery.

 

[pincho]

It helps a lot of you read the original story but I agree the tone of the full label comic is not the same as the OG. Would deff give it a read it's much better and more cohesive

If this story had good art like Melissa's Need for Speed, for example, it would be amazing.

 

[JeannieTV]

Aphrodite Mirror 26 part 5

 

[JeannieTV]

Aphrodite Mirror 26 part 5
Image 1735, I forgot to include it in the upload

 

[Daneille85]

Aphrodite Mirror 26 part 5

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This was already posted last week. See Page 46.

 

[JeannieTV]

This was already posted last week. See Page 46.

Ops, sorry. I searched in the thread if it had already been published, but could not find it. Too many uploads

 

[mihaluck]

Ops, sorry. I searched in the thread if it had already been published, but could not find it. Too many uploads

use filter for that

 

[mihaluck]

new kpop is out

 

[hobojoe22]

A Kpop Idol Chapter 14 Part 1

 

[Kobboldpot]

A Kpop Idol Chapter 14 Part 1

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Grandpa keeps nagging. However, I will not have any complaints about Melissa.
A common feature of all TG stories: If it does not end quickly enough on a high enough note, then soon, without knowing where and with whom it all began, we strictly observe an ordinary girl who is seduced or incited to do something (As a rule, from 1/2 to 2/3 of the story).

Here is an example of this story (but this is only an example) - if you replace "guy" with "American" in the dialogue, then the story will 100% not change (and the stumbling block here is not even in some features of the figure or manly behavior, but in the incomplete mastery of the language). The heroine already looks absolutely like an Asian girl, masterfully walks in heels, masterfully owns makeup, and freely walks in attractive outfits.

That is, then there is an ordinary story of drawing a young and inexperienced girl into show business. And it has no particular relation directly to TG.

I have come across very few stories that masterfully maintained the timing, allowing you to see the starting point, and the changes, and the transition, and the new role, while maintaining the idea that this is all a story about transformation.

 

[Kobboldpot]

In general, I criticize TG authors a lot (even if not out of nowhere, still conducting analysis, and not just expressing my tastes), and have accumulated a number of common patterns and comments on such stories.

If anyone remembers, I already wrote "alternative" scenarios for these plots in this thread. And in general, I thought about trying my hand at "correct" scenarios in my opinion.

One problem - I am a writer, but not a creator.
So from me, a proposal for a joint project and creativity. The genre is not important: 3D, comics, AI - it doesn't matter.
Are there any people willing to collaborate?

P.S. Probably my only limitation is no genital surgeries.