[Melissa N.] Collection

[mntna]

Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 28 part 3)

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but in all of this, Joel (the Guy with Glasses turned into Bimbo) what is doing?
he is the most unused character in the story and he went through a Feminization that gave him a Bimbo Body.

i think that he is with Nikos as it was stated that his ex-girlfriend that now work at the Beauty Salon hate the Samaras

 

[SaraVega]

but in all of this, Joel (the Guy with Glasses turned into Bimbo) what is doing?
he is the most unused character in the story and he went through a Feminization that gave him a Bimbo Body.

i think that he is with Nikos as it was stated that his ex-girlfriend that now work at the Beauty Salon hate the Samaras

To me that's one of the issues with the story, something (like Joel turning into a girl) seems important but then it's neglected and the story focuses on something else

Most of the "explanations" feel like things completely made up, the way the story is going any character could get super powers out of nowhere. Or there would be a completely new character that orchestrated all this because he hated Andrew for marrying Mariana,

At least to me things just seem like when a small kid tells a story and it really doesn't make sense

I understand Melissa tried something different and it's appreciated but it really didn't work, I prefer her earlier work

 

[jamieScott]

Bestie part 13 is out

 

[hobojoe22]

A Bestie in the Making 13

 

[Al minus]

Finally something juicy from melissa

 

[caaptaincold209]

Anyone has a combined pdf till date for a bestie in making

 

[LKendel]

Hm. i wouldn't be surprised if Amy's next step involves something Melissa did back in chapter 6 of Kpop (Oct/Nov 2023)

 

[mntna]

Hm. i wouldn't be surprised if Amy's next step involves something Melissa did back in chapter 6 of Kpop (Oct/Nov 2023)

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i think the same, it's about that moment in Melissa's stories where the "Female Character" put him into a chastity cage, to then start training him into feeling pleasure by being penetrated

 

[Al minus]

Anyone has a combined pdf till date for a bestie in making

Here...

 

[hobojoe22]

A Kpop Idol (Chapter 17 Part 1)

 

[chalana56]

looks like she's back to producing new parts at her usual speed now

 

[moroha]

A Kpop Idol (Chapter 17 Part 1)

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A Kpop Idol (Chapter 17 Part 1)

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They are still not done with the fitness training?

Where is my lesbian sex?

 

[CursedTaste]

The fact that both characters stay in their roleplay even though they never have a serious conversation about how "nabi-ya" is adjusting to her new "normal" or about Minji’s true motivations is odd.
Meeting up just the two of them should be an opportunity to drop the masks again and clear things up now that the tension between them has eased.

 

[mntna]

A Kpop Idol (Chapter 17 Part 1)

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it looks like Minji feminized him as a way to get back at someone, he was simply in the wrong place at the wrong time
i now understand that the rushed surgeries to make him look likes a Korean Girl was to traumatize him, to crack his ego and the time in a mysogin environment like a Korean Idol Agency, hit the final blow, he is completely broken now, or he is almost, like 90 %.

i'm curious to see how the other girls will find out that she forced him to not only become a woman, but a Korean Girl younger than them

T-Panda gave me vibes that he don't know that Kim was an American Guy.

 

[Ociredor]

Bestie part 14 is out

 

[@lexx$]

A Bestie in the Making - 14
Enjoy

 

[mntna]

A Bestie in the Making - 14
Enjoy

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nothing much happened here that would progress the story

it would had been better (for me) if Amy positioned herself in a way that made it seem like they were having lesbian sex (scissors position) or Amy raising Isabella's legs and made it looks like She was the one fucking Isabella

i still think that next we will see Amy, putting a Chastity Cage on Isabella after sex, or we may see a timeskip of weeks

 

[WillowSky]

nothing much happened here that would progress the story

it would had been better (for me) if Amy positioned herself in a way that made it seem like they were having lesbian sex (scissors position) or Amy raising Isabella's legs and made it looks like She was the one fucking Isabella

i still think that next we will see Amy, putting a Chastity Cage on Isabella after sex, or we may see a timeskip of weeks

Yes, chastity cage incoming, along with shock, outrage and compliance.

 

[Kobboldpot]

A Kpop Idol (Chapter 17 Part 1)

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So, on the one hand, my prophecy didn't come true. On the other hand... It's actually good that we avoided two or three empty chapters. But instead, we got an equally empty sequel. What else can you do in the gym that we haven't seen yet? And as if the last three sports chapters were somehow engaging. They're literally doing the splits again.

And... There was a burger in the last chapter! Isn't anything going to be done about that either? Like, "Oh my God! Look, you've gained an extra 300 grams, let's go burn them off!"

And even if we return to training, there's still more to it than just stretching. There's dancing itself, singing, posture and gait, makeup lessons.

And it's amazing how much this story has to offer.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

So, on the one hand, my prophecy didn't come true. On the other hand... It's actually good that we avoided two or three empty chapters. But instead, we got an equally empty sequel. What else can you do in the gym that we haven't seen yet? And as if the last three sports chapters were somehow engaging. They're literally doing the splits again.

And... There was a burger in the last chapter! Isn't anything going to be done about that either? Like, "Oh my God! Look, you've gained an extra 300 grams, let's go burn them off!"

And even if we return to training, there's still more to it than just stretching. There's dancing itself, singing, posture and gait, makeup lessons.

And it's amazing how much this story has to offer.

What even more weird is dude literally got surgically body modified into a Korean female and not a single chapter has he checked out his body or anything .. just another boring wasted rated G filler chapter ....