[Melissa N.] Collection

[transmorpho]

Let's see, Andrew made a mistake and confessed it to Marina, right? Marina made a mistake, persisted in it, and out of vanity, not wanting to show him that she was wrong, considering herself too vain, she blamed him for everything, asked for a divorce, and hid herself away. Later, she confessed her mistakes to another person, perhaps to redeem herself because she destroyed the only person who truly loved her since he was by her side. Who knows, many things might not have happened, but she continues to make mistakes. Let's see the ending between Marina and Andrew. Everything indicates that Marina is too proud to admit her mistakes to Andrew, and Andrew has been so conditioned that he is capable of forgiving even the devil in front of him, as his ex-wife will say.

 

[mntna]

Let's see, Andrew made a mistake and confessed it to Marina, right? Marina made a mistake, persisted in it, and out of vanity, not wanting to show him that she was wrong, considering herself too vain, she blamed him for everything, asked for a divorce, and hid herself away. Later, she confessed her mistakes to another person, perhaps to redeem herself because she destroyed the only person who truly loved her since he was by her side. Who knows, many things might not have happened, but she continues to make mistakes. Let's see the ending between Marina and Andrew. Everything indicates that Marina is too proud to admit her mistakes to Andrew, and Andrew has been so conditioned that he is capable of forgiving even the devil in front of him, as his ex-wife will say.

it's clear that we will never agree, so let's stop it here before the discussion takeover the entire thread

 

[transmorpho]

I agree, everyone has their own opinion, you with yours, me with mine, even if they are contradictory.

 

[transmorpho]

It would be funny to have hours and hours of discussions, imagine in (Little TG Kitten) she has interesting stories, one in particular, but she decided to end it before catching the real culprit, who knows if there's a sequel it will be amazing, (Barrosbr) also has some, but lately it's been disappointing, (Emory alhberg) didn't grab my attention much at first, but now I'm even liking the direction her stories are taking, it's better to stop here if we don't want to have intermittent discussions again.

 

[Nippur]

i have the feeling that you are twisting the story and even the authors "words of explanation", in a way that fit your vision of the characters & the situations they find themselves into to make Marina always one of the Villains

The author explanation is lame and silly.

 

[transmorpho]

It's not that Melissa is weak, it's that she's afraid to cross the line, to be out of her comfort zone; in other words, she's so comfortable in a dilemma that she's afraid to take risks.

 

[@lexx$]

A Bestie in the Making - 16
Enjoy

 

[Nippur]

A Bestie in the Making - 16
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How can she put him on that fucking chastity appliance and why in the hell he will accept it? It is not a coherent story, Maybe in the end is eplained with something like drugs or hypontical techniches.

 

[transmorpho]

The problem is that she woke up with him; she must have put him there while he was sleeping. In other words, another story involving Melissa, where the wife, or soon-to-be ex-wife, will allow her own husband to be mutilated and will probably hand him over to another man. Now, it's about discarding a husband just because she wants a friend.

 

[@lexx$]

We all knew the chastity belt was coming, but honestly, I don't like that narrative device at all; it feels very painful.

 

[Nippur]

The problem is that she woke up with him; she must have put him there while he was sleeping. In other words, another story involving Melissa, where the wife, or soon-to-be ex-wife, will allow her own husband to be mutilated and will probably hand him over to another man. Now, it's about discarding a husband just because she wants a friend.

I agree with you it is every more frequently stories where the transformation is not a result of a self discover but a an unwilling process of mutilation and resignation to his new destiny.

 

[transmorpho]

It's true that it's called forced feminization, but why destroy it, subjugate it, and make it submissive? It seems like the story loses its meaning and becomes boring. Let him fight for his ideals; the story becomes much more exciting when the character manages to react.

 

[Jackjons]

Marina is normal or not , doesn't matter,
It is upto people, many people like Aphrodite mirror, many are not , so if you are enjoying it , very good , and if you don't like it (like me ) just ignore it , there is a lot of comic to read, a lot of potential author, you can just read them , if you like their work, you can support them , it is totally upto the people who Is reading

 

[transmorpho]

The problem with the story isn't whether Marina is a normal character or not, or whether you like the story or not, but rather the pacing of the story. In Melissa's case, she works very well with graphics, and some of her stories are interesting, but she has many flaws in the pacing of some of her stories, and she relies too much on gaps to get her stories back on track. For example, a character says no, she creates a gap, and now he's saying yes, which leaves the story feeling somewhat empty. Speaking of other authors, yes, there are some interesting ones whose stories I'm keeping an eye on.

 

[mntna]

A Bestie in the Making - 16
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it was a matter of time, but finally it is the part where the Protagonist's penis gets put into a chastity cage, nice touch that she did it while he was asleep due to him being tired from the day shopping, the encounter with the Waiter and the new kind of sex he had with Amy, he was so tired that he didn't wakes up when Amy placed the chastity cage on him

the next part should be of them arguing about the chastity cage and maybe we get to see Amy mentioning for the first time the "Girly Points" (first time chronologically)

 

[Sam Emberlyn]

k pop new part is out

 

[BriannatheMage]

does anyone have a pdf of bestie in the making up to part 16

 

[khris942]

Here you go PDF of 1-16

 

[hobojoe22]

A Kpop Idol (Chapter 17 Part 2)

 

[mntna]

new BESTIE part is out