yes I cant help feeling disappointed at these constant tiny drip feeds of story every couple of weeks which add very little to the story and make it as clear as mud what is actually happening. A good submission would be a whole chapter at a time and not parts of one.
She was obsessed with sir author Conan Doyle! Which is very good ! I am also a big fan of him and love Sherlock Holmes! But what she done wrong is she replicate the suspense which is sir author Conan Doyle's speciality! Until the end you cannot guess what is exuly going on ! And I must say Melisa dose very good job on it , but its back fire her ! Becouse it is a gender BENDER adult story, you have to feed th viewers what they want to it , so you don't have much room for it , a smart writer should work on those very minimum room for story building or whatever she or he wants to create. But she didn't do that she created a whole suspense story! That is why people are not liking it .
now they are the one complaining I don't know wherever THEIR brain stop working for reading too much gender Bender comics that they couldn't see the flow of the story where it is going 
HOW can he/she say "it feels so fucking real", if he/she NEVER had a pussy before?!?
Maybe by that she means that it seems to be real because if it was a fake one she wouldnt be able to take him inside? a fake one would not permit penetration
Modern Techniques in vaginoplasty allowed somekind of penetration. But certantly the thoughs are at least incoherent
yes by fake i meant a latex one glued on which wouldn't allow penetration unlike a vaginoplasty which could. it would appear real but it seems optimistic to expect a neovagina to take Nikos erect penis. That she can might reinforce the feelings that she's always been Elena yet further.
I will be surprised, if you understand that now
I think Andrew's life wasn't good so elena finds an opportunity in her new life as a hot woman despite being older
The view that a memory will probably be forgotten is nothing more than an assumption that Andrew's memory will be lost from Elena's consciousness. Thus far there is no evidence of that happening and therefore Melissa N. has not contradicted herself.
Theres been plenty of evidence, sometimes she seems to remember out of nowhere shes really Andrew playing a part and then just as easily she forgets
it seems that after drinking wine he seems to think as Elena.
which means Elena has never forgotten its just a matter of whether its conscious or unconscious
