[Melissa N.] Collection

[monOINKa]

I would say the evidence points to Marina along with Mr. Seferi and the detective but I would not say I hate any of them. There are reasons to like and dislike each of the characters in this story and MelissaN has done a good job of concealing everyone's culpability, giving readers tidbits one way or the other for each of them. I agree there will be nothing simple about how this story ends but considering its suppose to end soon you need to go with where the evidence is pointing. The revelation that Marina knew Elena's surgery was irreversible, her fucking the detective and Mr. Seferi shooting Joel all point to them as culprits. With nothing more to mitigate their involvement in these activities I am pointing to them.

 

[Elaine]

I would say the evidence points to Marina along with Mr. Seferi and the detective but I would not say I hate any of them. There are reasons to like and dislike each of the characters in this story and MelissaN has done a good job of concealing everyone's culpability, giving readers tidbits one way or the other for each of them. I agree there will be nothing simple about how this story ends but considering its suppose to end soon you need to go with where the evidence is pointing. The revelation that Marina knew Elena's surgery was irreversible, her fucking the detective and Mr. Seferi shooting Joel all point to them as culprits. With nothing more to mitigate their involvement in these activities I am pointing to them.

yes that is a bit weird - she accuses Andrew of sleeping with Nikos knowing that he has undergone gender reassignment surgey and is supposed to be Nikos's wife and then beds the detective. I can understand her walking out of the house when it becomes clear that Andrew has committed to staying as Elena a lot longer than was initially agreed. However the leaving Andrew in the clinic is a bit harder to understand. Then in this chapter she is seen arguing with Nikos over something and he storms off.

 

[hobojoe22]

A Sweet Change 10

 

[Devin19]

Molly definitely looked better in chapter 9. This makes her look worse.

 

[Insanio]

Yeah these changes didn’t seem necessary to the plot.

 

[shemaleNL]

I find her even a bit scary

 

[Elaine]

Yeah these changes didn’t seem necessary to the plot.

there doesnt seem to be much plot tbh. It is just Melissa dragging out the story - i would rather she got on with K-POP again

 

[SilentZT]

there doesnt seem to be much plot tbh. It is just Melissa dragging out the story - i would rather she got on with K-POP again

I think in general, for the last year, all their stories have been dragged out in time and nowhere.....
Maybe it's just a creative crisis. The K-pop idol in general has a lot of things mixed up and the story has come to nothing, some mythical producer of another producer's idol, who is another producer's producer, ordered it because he had something in mind, but it's not clear and won't be clear for sure, that is, 1000 ideas and all different and leading nowhere. Same with the last story, actions that do not affect the development of the plot and are harmful to it, plus most people constantly complain about these hyperbolic bimbos, in almost every story the main character looks better at the last stage of transformation, and then bam and some unknown scary creature ))
It seems to me that if a person is already exhausted, then it is worth taking a break and start with fresh ideas and a fresh head!
My personal point of view, maybe someone else sees it in another way.

 

[transmorpho]

Speaking of stories that drag on, Aphrodite Mirror started in 2021, and it was said that it would be updated every week, and then it started skipping weeks or even more, if Melissa had followed the routine the story would have ended more than a year ago.

 

[Communist Bimbo]

Writing is hard and kind of fucking sucks. As creatively fulfilling as it can be, it's never easy to just keep focused on a single project until its completion. People change and have other immediate needs that inevitably take up their attention, so it makes sense that some of these titles simply do not wind up turning out like planned.

 

[Redryder74]

Molly definitely looked better in chapter 9. This makes her look worse.

I’m not a fan of these bimbo looks.

 

[monOINKa]

If ex-girlfriend Emily is orchestrating this, I think she wants to teach Molly some humility and sensitivity toward the struggle many women face with body image. If so, that may mean Molly gravitates more toward becoming a big boob bimbo over time. At present, I wonder if she now has a vagina?

 

[Elaine]

Another thing is that the MC seems utterly clueless about what is going on. They discover that something has happened to them and they had no idea it was going to happen. It seems a bit unbelievable that anyone would be that gullible or stupid.

 

[Mahdy464]

She has become a mother

 

[Kobboldpot]

Another thing is that the MC seems utterly clueless about what is going on. They discover that something has happened to them and they had no idea it was going to happen. It seems a bit unbelievable that anyone would be that gullible or stupid.

Well, actually, a couple of years ago on Patreon she wrote that she had run out of ideas and asked for suggestions. I still had the opportunity to be subscribed to Patreon back then, and sent her an idea in a fantasy setting with a reference. She said "Yeah, yeah", but apparently somehow forgot about it over time. So, by her own admission, she began to suffer from a crisis of ideas a long time ago.

 

[Kobboldpot]

A Sweet Change 10

 

[Elaine]

doesnt remember her name and doesnt know what the salon did - beggars belief

 

[Communist Bimbo]

"I can't believe I got turned into a milf and I don't even get to enjoy it."

 

[Nuvolari]

Obviously there is some sort of mind manipulation involved, probably hypnosis.

 

[Jackjons]

Speaking of stories that drag on, Aphrodite Mirror started in 2021, and it was said that it would be updated every week, and then it started skipping weeks or even more, if Melissa had followed the routine the story would have ended more than a year ago.

On the fast hand , Aphrodite Mirror is not a story for 1400 pages, it should ended long ago around 600-700 pages,!
But Melissa dragged the story unnecessary, there is nothing much you know from the beginning