[Melissa N.] Collection

[transmorpho]

The problem is that Melissa created a lot of unnecessary images, because she could have put two characters talking on the same page, but she ended up creating a page for each character, or pages without any text repeatedly, as well as some unnecessary flashbacks.

 

[Elaine]

i agree i said as much about her reusing 6 pages in a recent update that had been used as recently as chapter 22. then she will end a part in the middle of a conversation.

At times Elena conveniently has memory loss and doesnt realise fully what;'s been going on. that memory loss coincides with the reader not knowing what the hell has been going on. Then when Elena finds out she is now stuck as as a middle aged female this is much less of a shock compared to finding out that Andrew's wife knew what was happening and chose to do nothing about it.

 

[mihaluck]

This story is so slow that people have forgotten that hypnosis has already been shown several times and are questioning why he doesn't realize what's going on. The pace of her stories has really gotten slow. If you take the same lesson for teacher and even more so the 140 page remake from liltkit and compare it to the same amount of sweet changes, the difference in pace is enormous. In one case almost every page or a little is a scene, in the other the scene goes for the entire update package of 10-15 pages.
As for the crisis of ideas. She wrote that she had ideas for about 27 stories and that she had enough for the rest of her life. So I don't believe that.

 

[Kobboldpot]

And of course, I'm really fed up with this trope that repeats itself from story to story:
- Oh, we went to the doctor for some reason.
- Oh, a minor procedure that requires general anesthesia.
- Oh, what kind of boobs are these and what's wrong with my face?

 

[Elaine]

Can you give an example where the hypnosis occurs? its not obvious to me though there have been instances of drinks being drugged.

 

[Kobboldpot]

And I have also already complained that the update is almost always a dialogue from a practically static scene with changes in angles, facial expressions and a ton of text.
If the scene is purely dialogue, then it is unclear why it takes so long to make. But maybe I do not understand the technical process, and each frame is rendered for a long time. BUT then knowing that all this will be done for a long time, is it worth using frames more actively, giving less dialogue and more events?

 

[mihaluck]

Can you give an example where the hypnosis occurs? its not obvious to me though there have been instances of drinks being drugged.

Get it

 

[Elaine]

Get it

yes I got it - missed that page

 

[Jackjons]

Mellisa earning 5000+ dollers per month from patreon! It is not a joke! So , definitely she will try to extend Those stories as much as she can !
Money matters!

 

[oled65cxpua]

Mellisa earning 5000+ dollers per month from patreon! It is not a joke! So , definitely she will try to extend Those stories as much as she can !
Money matters!

 

[mihaluck]

yes I got it - missed that page

It's from start

 

[Bilbo]

Attention everyone
Kemono is back: https://kemono.su/patreon/user/4050487

 

[Sstpa]

Anyone have the Aphrodite’s Mirror Ch24 Pt5?

 

[hobojoe22]

Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 24 part 5)

 

[paimonisnotemergencyfood]

How many chapters left for AM?

 

[Sam Emberlyn]

Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 24 part 5)

Damn.

When I am in a bad decision making competition and my opponent is Andrew Woods.


But seriously tho Bro fumbled hard.

 

[hobojoe22]

they say still have 6 chapters left

 

[transmorpho]

She blames him for everything, but forgets that she was the one who abandoned him, in the hands of her cousins, and knowing everything she still takes him to the clinic, she did all the shit and still feels betrayed and hurt, she wanted him to believe her, but she doesn't believe him, in this case who is the dishonest one in this story, even though she said she would stay with him transforming into an older woman, if she had the courage to have sex with that zombie, she would certainly soon abandon him to be with other men

 

[Elaine]

Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 24 part 5)

ooh the claws were out in that part - Marina feels that Andrew has overstepped the mark while most of the time we've been fed the line that it was Andrew who had the raw deal. Perhaps the permanent conversion into Elena is a punishment perpetuated by Gjoka and Toska because Andrew tried to fool him at the first meeting? It seems that Nikos didnt pay for the surgeries so if it wasn't Nikos it would need to be someone with lots of momey to pay for the whole long list of surgeries that Andrew went through to become Elena. So that would be Toska.

 

[transmorpho]

in this case Mr. Toska and Nikos can now be friends and Eva and Sofia used Mr. Toska to deceive Andrew, and turn him into a woman, and they deceived Marina too, but that still does not absolve Marina of her guilt, because she supported her cousins and abandoned Andrew at the time when he needed her the most, I would like Marina to receive a punishment, losing Andrew is not a punishment, I would like her to feel in her own skin what Andrew felt when she abandoned him, and see the mistake she made in leaving Andrew and going to Crete at that moment.