It's wonderful! I really appreciate the dialogue, as it's what turns a nice series of images into a genuine storyāa real comic. I also appreciate Erica's physique; it's masculine, yet retains enough femininity to be sexy without any surgical alterations. This aspect makes the story feel more realistic. Regarding my previous comment: I simply wanted to share my opinion, not offer criticism. If the author envisions a lesbian counterpart for the girlfriend, then so be it; anyone putting in the effort to create something should do it their own way. P.S. I hope Rick is well-endowed... in scenarios like this, the "master" really ought to be!