[Pedro Voss] Her Awakening

[shemaleNL]

me too....

but that Rick is such a creeper though...

Yes. Perhaps he spent time in jail for this.

 

[paoin]

It's great—I hope it continues soon—but I don't get the part about the girlfriend's lesbian storyline. I don't think the people interested in the feminization of a former alpha male who discovers he's a faggot are also interested in a lesbian relationship; it's not the same audience.

 

[honkykong]

Love it! Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to more. If I had any critiques? Wishes? It would be that hopefully the cuck stuff is left behind, cause it does *nothing* for me personally haha, also I really hope the girlfriend side-story isn't relevant to Eric's story cause I skipped through it lmao

 

[peelpaal]

Her Awakening
Rick and Eric alone in the Restroom

 

[paoin]

It's wonderful! I really appreciate the dialogue, as it's what turns a nice series of images into a genuine story—a real comic. I also appreciate Erica's physique; it's masculine, yet retains enough femininity to be sexy without any surgical alterations. This aspect makes the story feel more realistic. Regarding my previous comment: I simply wanted to share my opinion, not offer criticism. If the author envisions a lesbian counterpart for the girlfriend, then so be it; anyone putting in the effort to create something should do it their own way. P.S. I hope Rick is well-endowed... in scenarios like this, the "master" really ought to be!

 

[shemaleNL]

Great story yes. Great pictures and dialogue. I was very pleased. Great artist. But for me with this update I pass. For me seeing Eric naked is not my cup of tea. Too much just a boy. I really expected some curves, a hint of breasts and a small dick.

 

[beagleboy]

I am loving this story.

 

[MoonFlower]

Her Awakening
Frank introduces Rick to Eric

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Interesting story, but it looks like a couple of images are missing 1-13 of this set.

Could have added some fillers for the empty cups.

 

[peelpaal]

Her Awakening
Rick and Eric alone in the Restroom part 2

 

[paoin]

Wow! That was fast! So don't leave us hanging—please, tell us the whole story...

 

[grumpo]

What ai do you use?

 

[peelpaal]

Her Awakening
Rick and Eric alone in the Restroom part 3

 

[beagleboy]

Just keeps getting better and better.

 

[peelpaal]

Her Awakening
Rick and Eric alone in the Restroom part 4

 

[houstontara]

Really good work

 

[peelpaal]

Her Awakening
Rick and Eric alone in the Restroom part 5

 

[yuggz]

very interested in where this is going

 

[peelpaal]

Her Awakening - The tease

(Characters inspired by Kizaru "Friend", with an original story and different direction.)

 

[beagleboy]

What happened to Frank,he seems to have vanished.

 

[houstontara]

So ready for whats in store for Alice and Rick.