[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

[meteor]

keep in mind the end of lost 6.......

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If it was normal at the beginning, Lauren was already pregnant in the later part of the story. Wow, you have such a strong taste!
Unless the timeline jumps to Lauren wanting to take Johnny out. The destination is this island. Unfold a new storyline like this···
If that's really the case.. Will it be Johnny vs Brandy+Kelly this time! Lauren facing Dylan?
If that's really the case, I really hope Johnny and Dylan can be taller and stronger this time!

 

[Oblivion]

keep in mind the end of lost 6.......

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Yeah another thing made FOR FUCKING NOTHING

 

[Oblivion]

Victoria left before having a proper time with Dylan?
If the author accepts the reader's suggestion and resets the story next? Character modeling, plot progression···

I cant believe it too, I thought Dylan was going to fuck Vics brains out before her sons the moment they met.

Author accepts the reader's suggestion and resets the story next? yeah sure I would love to see that.

Is this the story for the next chapter? I hope Tom can be gentle.

If PS use common sense that would be next but with a build up to convince Dylan to let Brandi free first to avoid another stupid ntr scenario.

If it was normal at the beginning, Lauren was already pregnant in the later part of the story. Wow, you have such a strong taste!
Unless the timeline jumps to Lauren wanting to take Johnny out. The destination is this island. Unfold a new storyline like this···
If that's really the case.. Will it be Johnny vs Brandy+Kelly this time! Lauren facing Dylan?
If that's really the case, I really hope Johnny and Dylan can be taller and stronger this time!

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I dont think we are going to see them anytime soon in AN tbh.

 

[meteor]

I cant believe it too, I thought Dylan was going to fuck Vics brains out before her sons the moment thy met.

Author accepts the reader's suggestion and resets the story next? yeah sure I would love to see that.

If PS use common sense that would be next but with a build up to convince Dylan to let Brandi free first to avoid another stupid ntr scenario.

I dont think we are going to see them anytime soon in AN tbh.

Victoria's two twins are slightly taller than her, while Dylan is shorter. Perhaps this is the reason why there was no interaction! So height and figure are very important! It's not just about having a big penis.

 

[Oblivion]

Victoria's two twins are slightly taller than her, while Dylan is shorter. Perhaps this is the reason why there was no interaction! So height and figure are very important! It's not just about having a big penis.

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I dont think is because of height or penis size, it was because of lack of build up and interaction between them.

 

[Oblivion]

Au Naturel Part 29 - 45 pages​

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[meteor]

I dont think is because of height or penis size, it was because of lack of build up and interaction between them.

This scene has already given the answer, Harry gives a feeling of being even more 'robust'! Like a fitness coach, Dylan is like a good kid who only knows how to study.
Victoria and Dylan have had interactions, but for a short period of time.
If it were Harry at this moment, would Victoria play with him?
If we talk about Brandy when she first landed on the island. Let her and Harry create a story!

 

[Oblivion]

This scene has already given the answer, Harry gives a feeling of being even more 'robust'! Like a fitness coach, Dylan is like a good kid who only knows how to study.
Victoria and Dylan have had interactions, but for a short period of time.
If it were Harry at this moment, would Victoria play with him?
If we talk about Brandy when she first landed on the island. Let her and Harry create a story!

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Is pretty obvious that it was easier for Vic to fuck her sons than Dylan who she interacted with once.

If it were Harry at this moment, would Victoria play with him? the answer is no because hes a stranger to her and in that time she was just seeing things getting use to the lifestyle of the island but I guarantee you she would have being blown away by his size but nothing more just like Brandi did with Tom, both blondes were newbies in that period so their reaction makes sense.

 

[Oblivion]

this is coming Iguess......

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Cant believe this is NOT canon smfh

 

[Rian]

Au Naturel Part 29 - 45 pages​

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LMAO. Ps is trying to build excitement for what kind of scene next?
i.e: It's already a damn soap opera.

 

[Oblivion]

LMAO. Ps is trying to build excitement for what kind of scene next?
i.e: It's already a damn soap opera.

Sexual ceremony for the new residents , Gina has a plan so lets wait and see , resident card better be useful.

 

[Mrh69]

I cant believe it too, I thought Dylan was going to fuck Vics brains out before her sons the moment thy met.

Author accepts the reader's suggestion and resets the story next? yeah sure I would love to see that.

If PS use common sense that would be next but with a build up to convince Dylan to let Brandi free first to avoid another stupid ntr scenario.

I dont think we are going to see them anytime soon in AN tbh.

It would be perfect to tie into AU, but we all know how PS deals with plots.

Post in thread '[Pegasus Smith] Lost in the Woods' https://forum.allporncomix.com/threads/pegasus-smith-lost-in-the-woods.191/post-135910

 

[Oblivion]

It would be perfect to tie into AU, but we all know how PS deals with plots.

Post in thread '[Pegasus Smith] Lost in the Woods' https://forum.allporncomix.com/threads/pegasus-smith-lost-in-the-woods.191/post-135910

Glad you remember that idea I had it would be perfect they look alike a lot.

 

[Rian]

Glad you remember that idea I had it would be perfect they look alike a lot.

If only ps would ever do that. But I'm certain that if he ever does; he'll try to add his bull creativity in it, thus botching everything.

 

[Oblivion]

If only ps would ever do that. But I'm certain that if he ever does; he'll try to add his bull creativity in it, thus botching everything.

Imagine thats canon and older mom and dad/brother shows up in the island that would be nuts but no instead PS is going to focus on Aunt Jemima and George Floyd .

 

[Mrh69]

It would be an interesting, even spectacular, situation. Gina herself has said that some mothers and sons have had children together on the island. So it wouldn't be far-fetched at all.

And if it couldn't be the main characters from LitW, it could very well be Carmen, Gina's lifelong friend. I can see her perfectly embodying the role.

She's already been seen in orgies with her son, and she'd be the perfect subject to introduce all this talk about pregnancies and offspring.

Although this would have to happen much later, once all the main characters have satisfied their desires with the rest of the island.

 

[Oblivion]

It would be an interesting, even spectacular, situation. Gina herself has said that some mothers and sons have had children together on the island. So it wouldn't be far-fetched at all.
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And if it couldn't be the main characters from LitW, it could very well be Carmen, Gina's lifelong friend. I can see her perfectly embodying the role.
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She's already been seen in orgies with her son, and she'd be the perfect subject to introduce all this talk about pregnancies and offspring.
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Although this would have to happen much later, once all the main characters have satisfied their desires with the rest of the island.

Thats a nice insight of knowledge mate, it would be interesting to see that in the future and enough reason to bring back Carmen.

 

[Gnaparelli]

Once incest is main theme, it should stay main focus in at least 80% of plot and sex scenes. Not just bunch of regular sex relationships, or couples. And again, once the story is beginning to feel as "regular couple sex", with no taboo tension between characters, story/comic should be ended and artist should go on with another, new story-plot-characters.

 

[Oblivion]

Once incest is main theme, it should stay main focus in at least 80% of plot and sex scenes. Not just bunch of regular sex relationships, or couples. And again, once the story is beginning to feel as "regular couple sex", with no taboo tension between characters, story/comic should be ended and artist should go on with another, new story-plot-characters.

PS is so inconsistent , Dylan can fuck with any girl he wants but Brandi cant do the same? like wtf is the point then , hell even Kelly is just there and Vic was the one with so much spotlight just to throw all her progression to the trash in AN 29 is beyond ridiculous.

 

[meteor]

PS is so inconsistent , Dylan can fuck with any girl he wants but Brandi cant do the same? like wtf is the point then , hell even Kelly is just there and Vic was the one with so much spotlight just to throw all her progression to the trash in AN 29 is beyond ridiculous.

There is a second key clue: the reason why Brandy and Kelly are willing to have sex with Dylan is. To prevent Dylan from having children with the girls on the island, this is to protect Dylan. 2. Satisfy their own desires, after all, they are adults who have undergone social training. They can control who they are willing to have sex with and not leave any offspring.
Dylan was initially controlled by his own desires when he first landed on the island. Dylan couldn't even control his own climax.
When it comes to the theme of 'incest', it should not be confined to blood relations. It can be age, for example, Victoria and Dylan are also considered incestuous and cheating.
Incest, it should be how Dylan upgraded by fighting monsters, using the skills learned from the master, to win the "mom" of other tourists who will land on the island next!
This story has developed to this point, and there are actually some areas that can be further elaborated, not necessarily all at once. Just like the progress of Kelly and Dylan's relationship. Although it ultimately failed.
What can still be remedied is 2D. In this 2D spacetime, it's the only place that can be remedied. It depends on readers finding the 2D comic creator and entrusting that 2D creator to reset it. Of course, we need the original PS to agree...
I recommend this' Kaos' creator. According to rumors, this creator may no longer be creating. It depends on whether the reader's friends also like the creator's style, or whether they can ask him to create or reset it again.