[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

[Oblivion]

Thanks Mate!

He's like Batman you know he shows up out of nowhere makes some shit and fucking leaves .

 

[dykan29]

an29 update 036-045

 

[Nippur]

What I don't figure it out up to know is they never mention health insurance, or what will they do to pay the bills (must have been a great divorce deal . And Dylan's father has never been mentioned again ha ha ha.

 

[Oblivion]

What I don't figure it out up to know is they never mention health insurance, or what will they do to pay the bills (must have been a great divorce deal . And Dylan's father has never been mentioned again ha ha ha.

Easy... who gives a fuck about all of that well I know nobody lol.

I only care about character development at this point for Brandi and Kelly mostly, they have still so much to give if PS gives them free will and separate them from Dylans schlong.

 

[Oblivion]

an29 update. just for fun
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PS made The Master dirty

 

[alldicker453]

I wish rory had a redemption arc. The ceremony without rory and josie feels incomplete.

 

[Oblivion]

I wish rory had a redemption arc. The ceremony without rory and josie feels incomplete.

Chapter 10 ruined him and Brandi I knew this was going to be the case the moment the NTR shit happened, he can be use maybe trying to convince Kelly this time.

Josie, Petra, The yoga mom, The Monster should be there too, PS still can include them because the ceremony just started so.

 

[alldicker453]

Chapter 10 ruined him and Brandi I knew this was going to be the case the moment the NTR shit happened, he can be use maybe trying to convince Kelly this time.

Josie, Petra, The yoga mom, The Monster should be there too, PS still can include them because the ceremony just started so.

I wish dylan and rory dp Brandi in the future

 

[alldicker453]

Chapter 10 ruined him and Brandi I knew this was going to be the case the moment the NTR shit happened, he can be use maybe trying to convince Kelly this time.

Josie, Petra, The yoga mom, The Monster should be there too, PS still can include them because the ceremony just started so.

Harry the monster is a solitary creature. I think he avoids events like this because many girls avoid his log out of fear lol.

 

[Oblivion]

I wish dylan and rory dp Brandi in the future

PS destroyed that possibility the moment he forced NTR in chapter 10, Dylan hates him now for good reason but Brandi is the one who fucked up the most that's a fact.

Harry the monster is a solitary creature. I think he avoids events like this because many girls avoid his log out of fear lol.

We don't know much about him but he should be use more of course, he seems to be a very humble and shy dude.

Oh also Pete Ann and Emily ain't there either wtf .

 

[meteor]

PS destroyed that possibility the moment he forced NTR in chapter 10, Dylan hates him now for good reason but Brandi is the one who fucked up the most that's a fact.


We don't know much about him but he should be use more of course, he seems to be a very humble and shy dude.

Oh also Pete Ann and Emily ain't there either wtf .

It's better to have Tom and Monster pair up with Brandy and Kelly, and let them each pair up and find a place to play the game. The game between men and women starts with two people enjoying themselves in a certain place.
As for Rory! Can only be 'reborn from the ashes' in other derivative works?!
Take out 20% of the volume of Tom's model and add it to Rory's body. Strengthen Rory!
This' Rory ', Brandy and Kelly won't refuse. Speaking solely of' height ', Rory is more suitable to play games with Brandy and Kelly! However, Dylan is the protagonist in this story!

 

[Oblivion]

It's better to have Tom and Monster pair up with Brandy and Kelly, and let them each pair up and find a place to play the game. The game between men and women starts with two people enjoying themselves in a certain place.
As for Rory! Can only be 'reborn from the ashes' in other derivative works?!
Take out 20% of the volume of Tom's model and add it to Rory's body. Strengthen Rory!
This' Rory ', Brandy and Kelly won't refuse. Speaking solely of' height ', Rory is more suitable to play games with Brandy and Kelly! However, Dylan is the protagonist in this story!

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I agree about Tom and The Monster destroying them relentlessly.

PS ruined him in chapter 10 that's why he never spoke to Brandi ever again since then shame because I wanted him to conquer her MAKING SENSE manipulating Dylan first with Gina's help WITHOUT ANY FORCED SHIT INVOLVED.

I think Rory should focus on Kelly next now that she's a resident and how mad he was when he lose the BJ competition so that could be the perfect revenge, that can lead to get close to Brandi again.

 

[meteor]

I agree about Tom and The Monster destroying them relentlessly.

PS ruined him in chapter 10 that's why he never spoke to Brandi ever again since then shame because I wanted him to conquer her MAKING SENSE manipulating Dylan first with Gina's help WITHOUT ANY FORCED SHIT INVOLVED.

I think Rory should focus on Kelly next now that she's a resident and how mad he was when he lose the BJ competition so that could be the perfect revenge, that can lead to get close to Brandi again.

Rory can only play games with Kelly under her new identity in the new story!

 

[meteor]

I agree about Tom and The Monster destroying them relentlessly.

PS ruined him in chapter 10 that's why he never spoke to Brandi ever again since then shame because I wanted him to conquer her MAKING SENSE manipulating Dylan first with Gina's help WITHOUT ANY FORCED SHIT INVOLVED.

I think Rory should focus on Kelly next now that she's a resident and how mad he was when he lose the BJ competition so that could be the perfect revenge, that can lead to get close to Brandi again.

This theme should be suitable, that is, in the new story, Rory plays a tenant who works and rents a house on a construction site, and Brandy is the landlady. Then Rory took advantage of various opportunities and gradually made Brandy play games with him!

 

[dykan29]

an29 update

 

[pazzdan]

Again...this charter is ready to win the award

WCE
Worst
Charter
Ever

Victoria is missing,no more incest with sons,no moms swapping
Absurd cerimony with old granny guy....

 

[Oblivion]

Again...this charter is ready to win the award

WCE
Worst
Charter
Ever

Victoria is missing,no more incest with sons,no moms swapping
Absurd cerimony with old granny guy....

This plot can lead to a lot of future possibilities dude so.

 

[Gnaparelli]

This story, and generally these type of stories, once they start with main focus on incest, should absolutely stay that way, like at least 80% incest/taboo themed, not just this or that guy fucking every women, or this or that hot female character getting fucked by younger or older guys with big cocks or whatever. I understand that incest theme is "niche" and doesn't have many fans, but still, once artist chose that theme/plot, it should stay more less in that space.

 

[Oblivion]

This story, and generally these type of stories, once they start with main focus on incest, should absolutely stay that way, like at least 80% incest/taboo themed, not just this or that guy fucking every women, or this or that hot female character getting fucked by younger or older guys with big cocks or whatever. I understand that incest theme is "niche" and doesn't have many fans, but still, once artist chose that theme/plot, it should stay more less in that space.

Tell that to Dylan who fucks basically every girl he mets with a few exceptions like Vic and Petra.

 

[zaxxon]

Tell that to Dylan who fucks basically every girl he mets with a few exceptions like Vic and Petra.

To his defence women always go after him first. He is speech impaired - he cant say no when woman want to have sex with him.There is more woman who wants to have sexx with him,but didnt have chance yet (Allie,Josie,Petra...). Only woman he needed to seduce was Brandi.