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[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

However, Victoria can become a coordinator! When readers are already bored with elements such as "deserted island, nudity, incest...", PS intersperses some Victorian independent stories and content about independent character relationships to help readers shift their reading experience.

I will not be completely agreed with you that readers get bored with deserted islands, nudity, incest, etc... Instead of readers, it is PS. I said it because in recent times, PS is not making stories with that spice for what he is so popular. I follow PS from his initial days, so there was many possible way to make AN as PRO level comic. One of the Best. But, somewhere he was
lost.
 
I will not be completely agreed with you that readers get bored with deserted islands, nudity, incest, etc... Instead of readers, it is PS. I said it because in recent times, PS is not making stories with that spice for what he is so popular. I follow PS from his initial days, so there was many possible way to make AN as PRO level comic. One of the Best. But, somewhere he was
lost.
I swear is like PS forgot such a wild setting he created for AN, a sex paradise island which allows incest but he still managing Brandi and Kelly with so much care is ridiculous, is ok to be unhinged and a complete nympho because slurs like whore slut skank or stupid feelings like jealousy insecurity shame etc doesn't exists here just love for everyone no matter race religion ethnicity age that's why he's fumbling this comic just look at Brandi finally letting another local to get inside her after 19 solid chapters and Kelly behaving like a complete jealous bitch so out of character why the fuck the wild sister is acting like that is so retarded and ridiculous.

And now he finished in a very rushed way the most interesting scenario the ceremony aka "The Great Orgy" just to give Victoria another spotlight like are you fucking kidding me Kelly is the one who needs spotlight to develop her character until she embrace the culture of the island while leaving her stupid jealousy behind, today will be 40 pages out of chapter 30 of fully clothed plot of nothing and taking in consideration Vic stupid outcome from chapter 29 holy shit this is the last thing most of us wanted to see smfh...
 
Au Naturel Part 30 - 40 pages - now available!
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What about this plan? Victoria was carried by waves to an island, where the only indigenous person - a robust boy - discovered her by the seaside.

Here is a reference for an AI illustration, located closer to the following: "Husband doesn't inform his lying wife of the islander walking down the beach

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That is from "Tarzan-X: Shame of Jane (1995)". He is native to Italy,not tropical island ;) Anyway is shown that Victoria sons ended on same beach as her.
 

What about this plan? Victoria was carried by waves to an island, where the only indigenous person - a robust boy - discovered her by the seaside.

Here is a reference for an AI illustration, located closer to the following: "Husband doesn't inform his lying wife of the islander walking down the beach

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This is from the porn movie "Tarzan X: Shame of Jane". The actor is Italian Rocco Siffredi. Tee actress is his real-world wife, Rosa Carraciolo.
 
Reference, draw inspiration!
Why can't "Mount Taishan in the jungle" be on an island? This time, Victoria taught Mount Taishan how to please women!
 
AN30 p31-40

Carl tells mom that they didnt see Martin and Darell.They dont know where they are,and decide to wait till someone rescue them.Zoom out view of island shows that is small rocky island (maybe 300m across) with lots of trees,At same time on AN island at reception Pete tells Wilson and Shonda what happend: 12h ago yacht went missing in storm and by now cost guard started searching for them.Shonda runs out crying to her brother. ( will he try to calm her somehow? ;) )
 
AN30 p31-40

Carl tells mom that they didnt see Martin and Darell.They dont know where they are,and decide to wait till someone rescue them.Zoom out view of island shows that is small rocky island (maybe 300m across) with lots of trees,At same time on AN island at reception Pete tells Wilson and Shonda what happend: 12h ago yacht went missing in storm and by now cost guard started searching for them.Shonda runs out crying to her brother. ( will he try to calm her somehow? ;) )
Well definitely not the time or the place to calm her down in that way specifically but eventually is going to happen so 😗.
 
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