[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel
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swedish22222
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Any suggestions where I could find chapter 21 to 24?
Suggestions welcome and appreciated
Suggestions welcome and appreciated
Nippur
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So now Martin gets back to Kayla, Victoria keeps having sex with her sons, some scenes Rhonda being comforted in all ways by Andrè. Darnell will reaperd and some drama becaus Rhonda will like having sex with her brother. This is a soap opera
I hope Victoria's returning to AN decides to embrace the freedom and go get for Dylan, and Brandy with new adventure without Dylan and why not the arriving of Kelly's friend to open broaden opportunities wit her and Kelly. This Comic needs new things the Victoria+sons, and Brandi/Kelli/Dylan just were told.
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Zwock66
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short answer: not here. maybe at patreon or subscribestar
Nippur
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Do not waste time AN Chapter 30 is only leaked up to page 70 subscribe or wait
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Zwock66
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Short correction. We are in chapter 30 not 3
Oblivion
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Kayla should join The Swedenbergs again but this time Carl and Lukas must fuck her, Martin should fuck Victoria at least once because we didnt see that yet is like we didnt see Tom fucking Gina ever.
Well is pretty much confirmed that Andre is going to replace Darnell and hes going to fuck the shit out of Shonda eventually but with the window open of Darnell returning maybe, hope thats the case because I would love to see Shonda or any other girl dealing with 2 BBCs at the same time.
This is it for Victoria, that experience of almost die should be enough to make her unhinged for sex not just with her sons but also with the locals to fulfill every sexual desire she has and Dylan should be the first one on that imo taking in consideration their past interaction so wouldnt be forced at all , I can see Brandi telling her to have sex with him at some point.
Brandi should explore and talk to ther locals away from Dylan maybe Gina can guide her again.
Kelly is the one who needs spotlight to grow as a new resident and Petra can guide her, about Hannah well I would say she can arrive to the island but until Brandi and Kelly already sucked and fucked a lot of locals.
This comic NEEDS to go in the depraved way post ceremony for a change now that Brandi as a new local has Dylans blessing to do anything she wants sexually with anyone she wants without any problem at all, most likely The Monster is next on her body count but I would like a 1 on 1 with Tom first to prepare her holes against her encounter with Harry.
The dialogues dont lie.
PS must avoid repetition in the sex scenes so now he must use the swinger aspect of the island to the max, theres so many combinations of partners we still didnt see after in almost 30 completed chapters is insane.
Btw Take notes on this constructive feedback Pegasus @wicksel
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meteor
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Hi buddy. Your ideas are a bit conflicting. For us readers, we can only hope that PS will adopt it. Our feedback after reading. We cannot 'PS should match who/what they should do'.
Martin should do Victoria/Tom should do Gina. This setting can only appear in stories of other 'peers'.
Andre replaces Darnell. Their family is all black, and if they want to develop, they must do so during the day or under the lights. Otherwise, we can only look for their teeth.
Brandy and Tom. Their story can only be completed in other works. Speculation: PS has already brushed us off during the ceremony. The monster's penis is too big.
From this perspective, Camilla has a feeling of a Victoria's Secret supermodel, with large wavy hair spread out.
Avoid duplicating scenes. On the nude island, nudity is everywhere. The scene has been repeated many times already.
Oblivion
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Conflicting? dude my ideas are based of the setting Pegasus created, a nudist swinger paradise that doesn't have any rules to have a good time including incest so no you wrong on that.
Again why not a Martin and Victoria sex scene while Carl and Lukas are busy with their new big sister Kayla, that would be cool to see basically Victoria dialogues while Martin fucks her, same for Tom and Gina I would love to see her dealing with him like Josie their daughter did before, I don't understand why you keep gatekeeping possibilities or you forgot ANYTHING goes in Au Naturel, both examples are from a husband and a wife so makes sense to see them fucking (on Martin and Victoria case they already are in good terms go look at chapter 29 and chapter 30).
I agree from now on every sex scene involving Andre Darnell and Shonda should be on daylight.
The Monster dick is too big? dude Gina has a similar body type like Brandi and she could do it so why not Brandi too, same for Kelly and Victoria, also in the ceremony even fucking old ass Ann was fucked by him in a page so again wrong.
Camilla can do whatever with Dylan but I would love if Rory fucks her too remember there's no jealousy in the island and Dylan as a new local must behave accordingly and mostly Kelly must drop her stupid insecurities from now on.
Nobody liked chapter 30 why because PS repeated the same shit we already saw previously so yes avoiding that must be a priority now that The Swendenbergs returned and Brandi and Kelly as new residents opens the gates of huge possibilities including the male locals at their disposal.
Nudity is everywhere because is part of the culture are you not paying attention? so as swinging without any drama thats the point of the comic.