goonguy1234
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what makes you think all the other stories feel apart at the end ?
cause they did a lot of his recent stories started strong and ended weak or nonsensical or even worse just rushedwhat makes you think all the other stories feel apart at the end ?
one recent example i had was with snow bunnywhat makes you think all the other stories feel apart at the end ?
It was good for me. What you expected?one recent example i had was with snow bunny
felt really rushed in the end
it had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!It was good for me. What you expected?
it had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!
and then he becomes bully jock guys girlfriend, and then he becomes a model off screen, and then becomes devoted to bully jock after amazing sex.
its like trophy wife, but skipping the part when we get the determining step for the main protag, when they accept their role as wife and owns the role, while criminal drug addict roomate to protag slowly and gradually becomes snobbish preppy schoolgirl daughter of rich husband.
just POOF! now is girl.
snow bunny have good beginning, ok middle and rushed ending
why is it good for you then? thats pretty subjective way to base it on just being good for you.
you mean ski bunnyit had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!
and then he becomes bully jock guys girlfriend, and then he becomes a model off screen, and then becomes devoted to bully jock after amazing sex.
its like trophy wife, but skipping the part when we get the determining step for the main protag, when they accept their role as wife and owns the role, while criminal drug addict roomate to protag slowly and gradually becomes snobbish preppy schoolgirl daughter of rich husband.
just POOF! now is girl.
snow bunny have good beginning, ok middle and rushed ending
why is it good for you then? thats pretty subjective way to base it on just being good for you.
anyone got a pdf of this before nnn startsAlready
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I just don't see what's interesting to tell there because all the intrigue of the story is gone. I don't find it interesting that he became a model or became the girlfriend of the ex-girlfriend's boyfriend, the intrigue is gone.it had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!
and then he becomes bully jock guys girlfriend, and then he becomes a model off screen, and then becomes devoted to bully jock after amazing sex.
its like trophy wife, but skipping the part when we get the determining step for the main protag, when they accept their role as wife and owns the role, while criminal drug addict roomate to protag slowly and gradually becomes snobbish preppy schoolgirl daughter of rich husband.
just POOF! now is girl.
snow bunny have good beginning, ok middle and rushed ending
why is it good for you then? thats pretty subjective way to base it on just being good for you.
Right now.When will the new comic be shared here?
I agree. There is nothing to get excited over since the story forced reaching its climax and thus nothing is left to still intrigue you anymore.I just don't see what's interesting to tell there because all the intrigue of the story is gone. I don't find it interesting that he became a model or became the girlfriend of the ex-girlfriend's boyfriend, the intrigue is gone.
Thanks a lotHere you go
feels rather disappointing, how they suddenly become stereotypical mean girl bimbos with no resistance. no struggle, no conflict, no arc. rather disappointed seeing how this one was hyped up.Right now.
Better off bitches - joe Sixpack
Because they were brainwashed in the image of their creater to replace the group that ditched her. Which were mean girl bimbos. That's the point and moral of the story. She created the exact friends that already ditched her so she repeated her own mistake. And in the process lost her own life to her own machination. It's a full circle storyfeels rather disappointing, how they suddenly become stereotypical mean girl bimbos with no resistance. no struggle, no conflict, no arc. rather disappointed seeing how this one was hyped up.
Totally agree with thisfeels rather disappointing, how they suddenly become stereotypical mean girl bimbos with no resistance. no struggle, no conflict, no arc. rather disappointed seeing how this one was hyped up.
Learn to draw ?how to make art like JoeSix Pack? Any idea?
Well, Joe knows how to draw to begin with. Admittedly he's not the most talented artist around, but he is competent enough. Only recently he began experimenting with AI image generators. So, first step? Learn to draw.how to make art like JoeSix Pack? Any idea?