• Staff Applications are OPEN! [ Staff / Moderator ] More Info HERE Help us make a better forum for everyone!

[Six Pack Site / Joe Six-Pack / Sick Puppy Press] Comics

It was good for me. What you expected?
it had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!
and then he becomes bully jock guys girlfriend, and then he becomes a model off screen, and then becomes devoted to bully jock after amazing sex.

its like trophy wife, but skipping the part when we get the determining step for the main protag, when they accept their role as wife and owns the role, while criminal drug addict roomate to protag slowly and gradually becomes snobbish preppy schoolgirl daughter of rich husband.

just POOF! now is girl.
snow bunny have good beginning, ok middle and rushed ending

why is it good for you then? thats pretty subjective way to base it on just being good for you.
 
it had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!
and then he becomes bully jock guys girlfriend, and then he becomes a model off screen, and then becomes devoted to bully jock after amazing sex.

its like trophy wife, but skipping the part when we get the determining step for the main protag, when they accept their role as wife and owns the role, while criminal drug addict roomate to protag slowly and gradually becomes snobbish preppy schoolgirl daughter of rich husband.

just POOF! now is girl.
snow bunny have good beginning, ok middle and rushed ending

why is it good for you then? thats pretty subjective way to base it on just being good for you.

I agree with you on the rushed story part. But I liked the art in Snow Bunny a lot.
 
it had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!
and then he becomes bully jock guys girlfriend, and then he becomes a model off screen, and then becomes devoted to bully jock after amazing sex.

its like trophy wife, but skipping the part when we get the determining step for the main protag, when they accept their role as wife and owns the role, while criminal drug addict roomate to protag slowly and gradually becomes snobbish preppy schoolgirl daughter of rich husband.

just POOF! now is girl.
snow bunny have good beginning, ok middle and rushed ending

why is it good for you then? thats pretty subjective way to base it on just being good for you.
you mean ski bunny
 
it had a good buildup adn a good middle, but then in the end when hes exposed, hes just teleported off screen (off chapter?), gets a sex surgery and boom! now is girl!
and then he becomes bully jock guys girlfriend, and then he becomes a model off screen, and then becomes devoted to bully jock after amazing sex.

its like trophy wife, but skipping the part when we get the determining step for the main protag, when they accept their role as wife and owns the role, while criminal drug addict roomate to protag slowly and gradually becomes snobbish preppy schoolgirl daughter of rich husband.

just POOF! now is girl.
snow bunny have good beginning, ok middle and rushed ending

why is it good for you then? thats pretty subjective way to base it on just being good for you.
I just don't see what's interesting to tell there because all the intrigue of the story is gone. I don't find it interesting that he became a model or became the girlfriend of the ex-girlfriend's boyfriend, the intrigue is gone.
 
I just don't see what's interesting to tell there because all the intrigue of the story is gone. I don't find it interesting that he became a model or became the girlfriend of the ex-girlfriend's boyfriend, the intrigue is gone.
I agree. There is nothing to get excited over since the story forced reaching its climax and thus nothing is left to still intrigue you anymore.
 
Here you go
 

Attachments

  • SPP042 – Fashion Victims AKA “Shop ‘Til You Drop” by Lauren Bliss – Art by Fraylin – A “Crosse...PDF
    SPP042 – Fashion Victims AKA “Shop ‘Til You Drop” by Lauren Bliss – Art by Fraylin – A “Crosse...PDF
    3.5 MB · Views: 417
  • SPP043 – The “Blondie” Series – Book 3 – Blondie He's Not by KK – Art by Fraylin – A “Crossed ...PDF
    SPP043 – The “Blondie” Series – Book 3 – Blondie He's Not by KK – Art by Fraylin – A “Crossed ...PDF
    4.8 MB · Views: 423
  • SPP046 – Mall Makeover Madness AKA “A Day At The Mall” by KK – Art by Fraylin – A “Teens Trans...PDF
    SPP046 – Mall Makeover Madness AKA “A Day At The Mall” by KK – Art by Fraylin – A “Teens Trans...PDF
    3.1 MB · Views: 439
feels rather disappointing, how they suddenly become stereotypical mean girl bimbos with no resistance. no struggle, no conflict, no arc. rather disappointed seeing how this one was hyped up.
Because they were brainwashed in the image of their creater to replace the group that ditched her. Which were mean girl bimbos. That's the point and moral of the story. She created the exact friends that already ditched her so she repeated her own mistake. And in the process lost her own life to her own machination. It's a full circle story
 
how to make art like JoeSix Pack? Any idea?
Well, Joe knows how to draw to begin with. Admittedly he's not the most talented artist around, but he is competent enough. Only recently he began experimenting with AI image generators. So, first step? Learn to draw.
 

Similar threads

Back
Top Bottom