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[ST-9pol] Original, & Fan Graphic Novels

Hi all, just a quick update to explain how I will be posting here moving forward... At 8muses I used to post there and at Subscribestar at the same time however with all the changes since 8m got wiped I have had some thoughts and made some changes to how I will do things... OK, so SS will remain my primary site and I will post all updates there first for my paid sub's... On delay I will then start to release the pages here as well which my free side subs and members/ visitors here will also be able to get... I see this as the fairest option to my supporters who in truth really give me the means to keep my hobby going and fund doing what I do... I have, like I'm sure most of us have from 8m missed the interaction of the threads and hope we can get back to somewhere resembling what we once had... Thanks all for your kind words and encouragement...
 
A number of months ago a complete a custom prequal mini chapter that was released to my SS subs... Over the years since the Fashion show I have had requests to tell the story of what happened Before, during and after the phone call Sophia had with Ellie when she was at Jessica's house staying over on that fateful Saturday night that my GN started from... At the time I hinted at the bottom of the panel with Ellie on the Phone "To be continued" without even realizing that nearly 4 years later I would still be producing the Story... In writing this I have given back story to Ellie that helps explain the decisions and motivations in later chapters... So... To get things rolling, here are the first 15 pages, and as always for those whose first language isn't English, a txt file you can plug into your favorite translation software to make it easier to read along... The mini Chapter is named Ch1.1 - Sleep over at Jessica's and runs on a parallel timeline to
THe Fashion show... enjoy..

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A number of months ago a complete a custom prequal mini chapter that was released to my SS subs... Over the years since the Fashion show I have had requests to tell the story of what happened Before, during and after the phone call Sophia had with Ellie when she was at Jessica's house staying over on that fateful Saturday night that my GN started from... At the time I hinted at the bottom of the panel with Ellie on the Phone "To be continued" without even realizing that nearly 4 years later I would still be producing the Story... In writing this I have given back story to Ellie that helps explain the decisions and motivations in later chapters... So... To get things rolling, here are the first 15 pages, and as always for those whose first language isn't English, a txt file you can plug into your favorite translation software to make it easier to read along... The mini Chapter is named Ch1.1 - Sleep over at Jessica's and runs on a parallel timeline to The Fashion Show... enjoy
This new prequel chapter looks great so far.
 
@ST-9pol do you have any plans for other prequels? I think it would be awesome to see what Sophia got up to during the day prior to the events of the fashion show.

It all sounds pretty hot based on what was going through her mind just before the fashion show started…

”LATE EVENING, SOFIA ALONE AT HOME, WATCHING TV. LEFT HOME ALONE WITH ONLY THE TV AND HER THOUGHTS SOPHIA MIND RACES THROUGH ALL OF THE EVENTS WITH HER CHILDREN AND SAM FROM NEXT DOOR.... FROM KISSING HER SISTER, AND THEN HER DAUGHTER TO SHOWING HER SON HER BREASTS TO THE POOL SIDE FASHION SHOW WITH THE BOYS
SHE PONDERS WHAT IS HAPPENING TO HER.... WHY DOES SHE FEEL SO DEPRAVED......”
 
@ST-9pol do you have any plans for other prequels? I think it would be awesome to see what Sophia got up to during the day prior to the events of the fashion show.

It all sounds pretty hot based on what was going through her mind just before the fashion show started…

”LATE EVENING, SOFIA ALONE AT HOME, WATCHING TV. LEFT HOME ALONE WITH ONLY THE TV AND HER THOUGHTS SOPHIA MIND RACES THROUGH ALL OF THE EVENTS WITH HER CHILDREN AND SAM FROM NEXT DOOR.... FROM KISSING HER SISTER, AND THEN HER DAUGHTER TO SHOWING HER SON HER BREASTS TO THE POOL SIDE FASHION SHOW WITH THE BOYS
SHE PONDERS WHAT IS HAPPENING TO HER.... WHY DOES SHE FEEL SO DEPRAVED......”
Isn't that all covered in the original game?
 
@ST-9pol do you have any plans for other prequels? I think it would be awesome to see what Sophia got up to during the day prior to the events of the fashion show.

It all sounds pretty hot based on what was going through her mind just before the fashion show started…

”LATE EVENING, SOFIA ALONE AT HOME, WATCHING TV. LEFT HOME ALONE WITH ONLY THE TV AND HER THOUGHTS SOPHIA MIND RACES THROUGH ALL OF THE EVENTS WITH HER CHILDREN AND SAM FROM NEXT DOOR.... FROM KISSING HER SISTER, AND THEN HER DAUGHTER TO SHOWING HER SON HER BREASTS TO THE POOL SIDE FASHION SHOW WITH THE BOYS
SHE PONDERS WHAT IS HAPPENING TO HER.... WHY DOES SHE FEEL SO DEPRAVED......”
Isn't that all covered in the original game?
@Biggs75 in answer to your question no i will not do prequals past The fashion show as what @Wtrask mentioned is correct, the game does cover this... Your comment however does raise a question that I get asked a lot from fans of my Story that don't play the game. This is a big part of the reason for the fashion show redux as I am adding some detail that helps to explain to non-game players... (and I am surprised constantly as to how many there are) the back story and context for the chapter... To give a little background the game has just finished (Jan2024) day20 (Friday) and my GN starts game day 21 with the fashion show (Saturday evening).. The events in my GN have nothing to do with the game and references within the chapters of some background really don't go beyond the previous Wednesday... In saying that out of a current cast of 56 characters only 12 are from the game... In managing time for which is something I am short of, Prequels that are game related are not productive in pushing the story forward... Hope that helps to explain and look out for that extra detail in the Fashion show remake... ;).
 
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@Biggs75 in answer to your question no i will not do prequals past The fashion show as what @Wtrask mentioned is correct, the game does cover this... Your comment however does raise a question that I get asked a lot from fans of my Story that don't play the game. This is a big part of the reason for the fashion show redux as I am adding some detail that helps to explain to non-game players... (and I am surprised constantly as to how many there are) the back story and context for the chapter... To give a little background the game has just finished (Jan2024) day20 (Friday) and my GN starts game day 21 with the fashion show (Saturday evening).. The events in my GN have nothing to do with the game and references within the chapters of some background really don't go beyond the previous Wednesday... In saying that out of a current cast of 56 characters only 12 are from the game... In managing time for which is something I am short of, Prequels that are game related are not productive in pushing the story forward... Hope that helps to explain and look out for that extra detail in the Fashion show remake... ;).
Thanks for the info… as someone who hasn’t played the game I’ve missed out on a lot. Thanks again for continuing this awesome story and expanding on it.
 
Thanks for the info… as someone who hasn’t played the game I’ve missed out on a lot. Thanks again for continuing this awesome story and expanding on it.
No probs mate, one could say that by finding my GN you haven't really missed anything.. ;)
 
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Anyone recognize where the last page is from ;) ...


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Anyone recognize where the last page is from? ;)...
I love that you can immediately see the contrast of the image, when you make the remake you can replace this image so that it doesn't look so different. I will keep my original copy that I put in the new format so that it is easy to see but above all I like to see the incredible evolution that you have had after TFS, it is not only your new hardware (which helps a lot) it is also the environment of the scenes, the development of the story and the dialogues. You are one of my favorite artists.
 
i lovet *.*
I love that you can immediately see the contrast of the image, when you make the remake you can replace this image so that it doesn't look so different. I will keep my original copy that I put in the new format so that it is easy to see but above all I like to see the incredible evolution that you have had after TFS, it is not only your new hardware (which helps a lot) it is also the environment of the scenes, the development of the story and the dialogues. You are one of my favorite artists.
Thanks guys there really has been an evolution over time with what I produce and @lugon25 you are 100% correct, better equipment helps... 4 years ago when I did the original TFS my render rig was like a pocket calculator in comparison to my current gear.. In the remake (first pages to be posted soon) I am correcting and changing so much from what I have learnt... I suppose as analogy, someone could be given all of Pink Floyds studio equipment and let loose to experiment... It doesn't mean that they are going to walk out a week later with "Dark side of the moon"... Time spent doing this has changed so much of what I do... This is true to see also with the dev of the game, L&P who by reports has gear that again makes my set up look like a pocket calculator in comparison (But now at least a scientific one:ROFLMAO:).. The renders from the beginning of the game to what he produces now are very different... Thanks for reaching out.
 
Following on from the end of CH5.3 - The Spider and the Fly the story now resumes with a new chapters first installment.

Chapter 5.4 - Afternoon Delight pg01-21 + txt translation

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