[ST-9pol] Original, & Fan Graphic Novels

[Yeah_Right...]

@ST-9pol I take it you have no control over what is uploaded on the comics site of APC, but you might want to try and get a mod to fix Chapter 2 over there.
They've made a bit of a mess of it. Pages 1 to 28 are correct, the actual page 29 is missing and instead pages 30 upto and including page 169 are misnumbered to 29 to 168, and page 170 duplicated as page 169, so starting from page 170 to end numbering matches again.
So what they need to do is remove the duplicate page 169, then renumber page 29-168 to 30-169 and then add the now missing actual page 29 (The one shown below)


It's also missing the title page (same for the first chapter...)

While we're on the subject of Chapter 2 and in light of the recently published Chapter 1.1 Sleepover at Jessica, page 238 of Sunday at the Beach with the trio Ellie, Jessica and Tracy has Ellie referring to the previous night when Jessica's parents walked in on them...
Are you planning to extend the Sleepover chapter with that occurrence?

PS. Since Samson seems to be allowed here, they might also want to change chapter 4 and replace the neutered pages with the Samson variants

 

[ST-9pol]

@ST-9pol I take it you have no control over what is uploaded on the comics site of APC, but you might want to try and get a mod to fix Chapter 2 over there.
They've made a bit of a mess of it. Pages 1 to 28 are correct, the actual page 29 is missing and instead pages 30 upto and including page 169 are misnumbered to 29 to 168, and page 170 duplicated as page 169, so starting from page 170 to end numbering matches again.
So what they need to do is remove the duplicate page 169, then renumber page 29-168 to 30-169 and then add the now missing actual page 29 (The one shown below)

View attachment 161799
It's also missing the title page (same for the first chapter...)

Hi and thanks. Yes, you are 100% correct that I have never had any control at all as to my GN posted at APC comics web site... Over time you are not the first person that has alerted me to errors, but I have never been able to get it fixed... Unfortunately, APC Forum and APC Web comics are two different entities so reporting here will possibly have no effect... All I can suggest is using my Mega links at the beginning of this thread to download and read my GN... These copies are correct and if there is an error, I do have the ability to fix it... Thanks for reaching and letting me know... But APC Comics is only one of many pirate comic sites that host my comics out of order, misnamed etc etc etc...

 

[Yeah_Right...]

Unfortunately, APC Forum and APC Web comics are two different entities so reporting here will possibly have no effect...

They may be two different sites, but like with the now defunct 8muses, the forum and the web comics site are both using the same domain, so owned and maintained by the same whoever... (I've reported the post, hopefully someone can actually do something)

My last edit of the original post slipped through I think...

While we're on the subject of Chapter 2 and in light of the recently published Chapter 1.1 Sleepover at Jessica, page 238 of Sunday at the Beach with the trio Ellie, Jessica and Tracy has Ellie referring to the previous night when Jessica's parents walked in on them...
Are you planning to extend the Sleepover chapter with that occurrence? I suspect so since it is labeled as a "pt 1"?

 

[ST-9pol]

They may be two different sites, but like with the now defunct 8muses, the forum and the web comics site are both using the same domain, so owned and maintained by the same whoever... (I've reported the post, hopefully someone can actually do something)

My last edit of the original post slipped through I think...

While we're on the subject of Chapter 2 and in light of the recently published Chapter 1.1 Sleepover at Jessica, page 238 of Sunday at the Beach with the trio Ellie, Jessica and Tracy has Ellie referring to the previous night when Jessica's parents walked in on them...
Are you planning to extend the Sleepover chapter with that occurrence? I suspect so since it is labeled as a "pt 1"?

I will send a ticket and try my luck... I thought both sites were the same as well, but had it confirmed that isn't the case.
Thanks for your assistance with this... It looks like you may be getting some traction...

On Ch2 pg238 its actually Staci not Tracy ( ) but yep, I know what you are referring too... These little hints in the early chapters were at the time back story material for context... In truth I had no idea when writing it that 4 years later I would be still doing it..... In saying that over at SS I ran a poll for a mini arc and the story of Ellie's Saturday night at Jessica's while Sophia entertained the boys with the Fashion show won hands down... It was so popular pt 2 was also done and released... This I will start to run out here soon and leads off exactly from where pt 1 finishes... No spoilers but it does finish earlier in the evening than the reference you are talking about on pg 238.. So yes there is a part 2 but no it doesn't contain that scene, and to confirm no I wasn't planning on doing a pt 3.. I'm a bit time poor to complete all arc's I'm afraid.. Thanks again for your interest and for reaching out..

 

[OldGreyGeek]

@ST-9pol I take it you have no control over what is uploaded on the comics site of APC, but you might want to try and get a mod to fix Chapter 2 over there.
They've made a bit of a mess of it. Pages 1 to 28 are correct, the actual page 29 is missing and instead pages 30 upto and including page 169 are misnumbered to 29 to 168, and page 170 duplicated as page 169, so starting from page 170 to end numbering matches again.
So what they need to do is remove the duplicate page 169, then renumber page 29-168 to 30-169 and then add the now missing actual page 29 (The one shown below)

View attachment 161799
It's also missing the title page (same for the first chapter...)

While we're on the subject of Chapter 2 and in light of the recently published Chapter 1.1 Sleepover at Jessica, page 238 of Sunday at the Beach with the trio Ellie, Jessica and Tracy has Ellie referring to the previous night when Jessica's parents walked in on them...
Are you planning to extend the Sleepover chapter with that occurrence?

PS. Since Samson seems to be allowed here, they might also want to change chapter 4 and replace the neutered pages with the Samson variants

I had the same problem with my project (Project Sex House) where they grabbed the 8MF posted package before the last contribution from another fan.
Anyway, my archive of this goes way back so the error may have been the original post 'cause pg 029 was absent and pg 170 was a dupe. At pg 179 ST-9to1 started with page numbers . Now, there are two pages numbered 239 in my original distro. Stuff happens, FIDO.

 

[ST-9pol]

I had the same problem with my project (Project Sex House) where they grabbed the 8MF posted package before the last contribution from another fan.
Anyway, my archive of this goes way back so the error may have been the original post 'cause pg 029 was absent and pg 170 was a dupe. At pg 179 ST-9to1 started with page numbers . Now, there are two pages numbered 239 in my original distro. Stuff happens, FIDO.

Hi, don't know how all this has gone down but below is pg239... Was interesting to hear that I only started page numbers at 179... after all this time I had forgotten that... ... As stated in an earlier post the best and most accurate repository for my work is in my Mega links at the beginning of the thread... this is the only archive I maintain. Thanks.

 

[ST-9pol]

And Part 2 Begins.. Kicking off from the end of part one Ellie continues her awakening journey with Jessica's family...

Ch1.1 - Sleep over at Jessica's Pt2 pg61-75 + txt file

 

[OldGreyGeek]

Hi, don't know how all this has gone down but below is pg239... Was interesting to hear that I only started page numbers at 179... after all this time I had forgotten that... ... As stated in an earlier post the best and most accurate repository for my work is in my Mega links at the beginning of the thread... this is the only archive I maintain. Thanks.

Yep, that's page 239. And here is the other page 239 . Haven't ck'd the archive to see if it's been corrected.

 

[ST-9pol]

Yep, that's page 239. And here is the other page 239 . Haven't ck'd the archive to see if it's been corrected.

Ok, you guys really got me intrigued with all this stuff and I have gone back to the original composites and discovered that Pg239 with the backyard and "The End" was incorrectly numbered... .. This is the final page 240.. I have renumbered it, see attached. I have also updated this page in my Mega link repository... I'm amazed this hasn't been picked up before... Thanks all.

 

[ST-9pol]

Ch1.1 - Sleep over at Jessica's Pt2 pg76-90 + txt file

 

[ST-9pol]

4K Remastered Addition Coming Soon...

As teased I have been working on the remastered version of the origin of my graphic novel works "The Fashion Show" .. The pages I am releasing for this is not a replacement for the original but more of an addition to the story to bring it in line with the chapters that has followed... This has always been something that I wanted to do but once I completed the prequal chapter Ch1.1 - Sleepover at Jessica's, that of course occurs in the same timeline as the fashion show, I knew the time was right to get a start on it... The pages are rendered in 4k and importantly for non-game players who only know of the background story through small references in the GN, the first 3 pages serve as a full introduction to my story giving some reference from the game but also from my own fan art retelling... Game players will understand the differences, and for non-game players it doesn't matter... I'm starting off with 5 pages which includes a title page and 4 pages of the story... I aim to update daily where possible, but I am only doing these a page at a time, so it doesn't impede on the current chapters... These posts are on a week's delay from Subscribestar where they are posted in uncompressed format... For those familiar with this chapter, I hope you like the retelling, and for those who don't... Welcome aboard...

 

[ST-9pol]

The Fashion Show Redux page 5

 

[ST-9pol]

Ch1.1 - Sleep over at Jessica's Pt2 pg91-115 + txt file,

Last 25 pages complete

 

[ST-9pol]

The Fashion Show Redux page 6

 

[ST-9pol]

The Fashion Show Redux page 7

 

[tanuno]

Good day ST-9pol
Excuse my imperinence about your excellent work, in fact I really like it, thank you.
Just one detail that I observed between the recent “Sleep over at Jessica's” (Page 44) compared to “The Fashion Show” (Page 06) and some following the mentioned pages.
Is it Ellie who called Sophie? Or does Sophie call Ellie?
Just that, and excuse this small observation that doesn't make any major change to the story in general.
Greetings, good luck and great work.
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Buen día ST-9pol
Disculpa mí imperinencia en tu excelente trabajo, de hecho que me gusta mucho, gracias.
Solo un detalle que observé entre el reciente “Sleep over at Jessica's” (Page 44) comparado con “The Fashion Show” (Page 06) y algunas siguientes a las páginas mencionadas.
¿Es Ellie la que llamá a Sophie? O ¿Sophie llama a Ellie?
Solo eso, y disculpa esta pequeña observación que no hace mayor cambio a la historia en general.
Saludos, suertes y gran trabajo.

 

[ST-9pol]

Good day ST-9pol
Excuse my imperinence about your excellent work, in fact I really like it, thank you.
Just one detail that I observed between the recent “Sleep over at Jessica's” (Page 44) compared to “The Fashion Show” (Page 06) and some following the mentioned pages.
Is it Ellie who called Sophie? Or does Sophie call Ellie?
Just that, and excuse this small observation that doesn't make any major change to the story in general.
Greetings, good luck and great work.
------
Buen día ST-9pol
Disculpa mí imperinencia en tu excelente trabajo, de hecho que me gusta mucho, gracias.
Solo un detalle que observé entre el reciente “Sleep over at Jessica's” (Page 44) comparado con “The Fashion Show” (Page 06) y algunas siguientes a las páginas mencionadas.
¿Es Ellie la que llamá a Sophie? O ¿Sophie llama a Ellie?
Solo eso, y disculpa esta pequeña observación que no hace mayor cambio a la historia en general.
Saludos, suertes y gran trabajo.

Hi, this was a mistake made in the original that I have corrected in Ch1.1, and will also be consistent in the new TFS redux... In the original yes, its Ellie that calls, but this didn't fit well with crossing the two-story arc's... I changed it so that Sophia calls concerned that Ellie doesn't have a lift home, and as she has had a few glasses of wine she is going to call a taxi to pick her up...Ellie confirms that she is staying at Jessica's making Dylan very happy that she won't come home and spoil his plans... Very good observation by the way... ... you are well versed in the story it would seem... Thanks for reaching out.

 

[tanuno]

Hi, this was a mistake made in the original that I have corrected in Ch1.1, and will also be consistent in the new TFS redux... In the original yes, its Ellie that calls, but this didn't fit well with crossing the two-story arc's... I changed it so that Sophia calls concerned that Ellie doesn't have a lift home, and as she has had a few glasses of wine she is going to call a taxi to pick her up...Ellie confirms that she is staying at Jessica's making Dylan very happy that she won't come home and spoil his plans... Very good observation by the way... ... you are well versed in the story it would seem... Thanks for reaching out.

Thanks for the reply.

and as she has had a few glasses of wine she is going to call a taxi to pick her up...

Sophie is a responsible woman... "If you drink, don't drive. If you drive, don't drink"

 

[ST-9pol]

The Fashion Show Redux page 8

 

[ST-9pol]

The Fashion Show Redux page 9