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[ST-9pol] Original, & Fan Graphic Novels
ST-9pol
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Thanks.... yes...
Have had better months, but sometimes life gets in the way of what I prefer to be doing...
Thanks for reaching out.
doccop65
Member
I love your work and have been following it for 2 years now. You've done incredibly with the AWAM story, taking it to heights that the original creator hasn't even sniffed at yet. With that being said, I know what you speak, as far as life getting in the way of art. I've been writing an adult story with taboo content on Discord for the past 5 years and, especially in the last year, it's been very slow going. Please take a day away from things and people to recharge and, dare I say, "Breathe again." You're entitled to that too. I look forward to more from you and hopefully, Finally, I can become a supporter over on SS, even if only for a few months. Your fanbase Loves you so take care of yourself for Your sake. We as fans know that we will reap the benefits when you do.Thanks.... yes...
Have had better months, but sometimes life gets in the way of what I prefer to be doing...
Thanks for reaching out.
ST-9pol
Active member
Very kind words.... I thank you.I love your work and have been following it for 2 years now. You've done incredibly with the AWAM story, taking it to heights that the original creator hasn't even sniffed at yet. With that being said, I know what you speak, as far as life getting in the way of art. I've been writing an adult story with taboo content on Discord for the past 5 years and, especially in the last year, it's been very slow going. Please take a day away from things and people to recharge and, dare I say, "Breathe again." You're entitled to that too. I look forward to more from you and hopefully, Finally, I can become a supporter over on SS, even if only for a few months. Your fanbase Loves you so take care of yourself for Your sake. We as fans know that we will reap the benefits when you do.
I would like to read your work if you're able to share the link.
shemaleNL
Active member
I love this remake of the fashion show. The interaction between mom and son before the show are sensual. As the start is also. Sofia lying on the table is real erotic. Everything is just right. The screen and tv part is almost divine. Just one thing. For me you can skip the txt on the yellow background. Just the talk. But thats me. Anyway. Great job.
tanuno
Well-known member
I think the narrative is useful to complete the general idea, although perhaps it could be a little less extensive in some cases. For example, when I do my translation (for my personal use and reading) I use an app that makes text summaries with AI. Maintains the general idea with 50% text in Spanish. But like you, it's just my case.
Greetings and thanks to ST-9pol for sharing his excellent work.
ST-9pol
Active member
Many thanks for your comments and feedback..
In regard to the yellow "Narration" panels..... sorry no... these will stay... Unfortunately, it's the style I write in (As unorthodox as it is) and the layers of the story not only as this is important to explain character motivations, Is also something I like doing... There is I know something to be said for minimal text or story on a page that allows a reader to use their own imagination and let the renders tell the story. My top tier supporters get non text versions of all my work for this very reason... But to me the story (yellow panels as well) are just as important as the renders themselves.. RDS-SDR, Renders Drive Story, (as) , Story Drive Renders.. Its how I do things... Thanks again for your thoughts..
doccop65
Member
The remake of Fashion Show was well done and it did tie things up into the rest of your tales but I had a bit of a letdown because I thought that it would retain most of the elements from the original, particularly the sex scenes. I'm not disappointed in the remake, don't get me wrong. It makes sense when weaving into the greater tapestry of your opus, I just believed that the impetus for the sex scenes would be addressed and the rest would be left alone. I Do appreciate what you've done and Keep up the Great Work.
wolverutto
Member
I love your work and have been following it for 2 years now. You've done incredibly with the AWAM story, taking it to heights that the original creator hasn't even sniffed at yet. With that being said, I know what you speak, as far as life getting in the way of art. I've been writing an adult story with taboo content on Discord for the past 5 years and, especially in the last year, it's been very slow going. Please take a day away from things and people to recharge and, dare I say, "Breathe again." You're entitled to that too. I look forward to more from you and hopefully, Finally, I can become a supporter over on SS, even if only for a few months. Your fanbase Loves you so take care of yourself for Your sake. We as fans know that we will reap the benefits when you do.
nice words, agree with you!
ST-9pol
Active member
... not totally sure what you are meaning... TFS Redux isn't finished yet? This isn't a replacement but a more detailed retelling... The spoilers are that the redux has the same outcome... It's just a different journey to get to the same destination...
tanuno
Well-known member
ST-9pol
Active member
No was uploaded, but I must have hit the Post button before it was fully uploaded... Fixed now.. thanksI suspect that the text file was lost in the cyber web.
doccop65
Member
My sincerest apologies. I had Pixil's rendition of that story arc in my brain when I mentioned that. It's been so long since I attempted to go back to L&P's version that I forgot how it truly played out.
Please forgive my confusion. Btw, did the link to my Discord story work for you?
ST-9pol
Active member
Hi... Just a quick correction... The original version of the story rendered was actually mine..... Pixel did a version later... and the original writer of the fashion show as per my first rendition was by Bane71... This is in no way an L&P story... It has always been fan art..My sincerest apologies. I had Pixil's rendition of that story arc in my brain when I mentioned that. It's been so long since I attempted to go back to L&P's version that I forgot how it truly played out.
ST-9pol
Active member
Sorry, I did try the link you sent me but got the msg.My sincerest apologies. I had Pixil's rendition of that story arc in my brain when I mentioned that. It's been so long since I attempted to go back to L&P's version that I forgot how it truly played out.
doccop65
Member
Okay, I'll send some excerpts from a couple of scenes when I'm able.
doccop65
Member
It seems that I'm wrong at every turn here this week.
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