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[Tal3s of Debauchery] A Mothers Shame

Hi,
The next 21 Pages (170 incl Cover) of Chapter 2 for A Mothers Shame are now out on subscribestar and fanbox!

A gentle advance to achieve progress... (Sneak Peek of Chapter 2 PG 165)

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Unfortunately, there are not enough reminder of the fact they are mom and son, so all the potential taboo feeling are just missing, and with them all the excitement. Entire situation looks like just normal couple flirting, going out on a date and so on. Age difference between them is also looking almost minimal. So, it's somehow "off the mark". I mean, if it's about incest fantasy, then artist should remind us with right dialogues, right taboo tension, feel of prohibited and so on. If author wants to create just a nice porn/erotic story "younger man/mature woman" then it should/could be like this.
 
Unfortunately, there are not enough reminder of the fact they are mom and son, so all the potential taboo feeling are just missing, and with them all the excitement. Entire situation looks like just normal couple flirting, going out on a date and so on. Age difference between them is also looking almost minimal. So, it's somehow "off the mark". I mean, if it's about incest fantasy, then artist should remind us with right dialogues, right taboo tension, feel of prohibited and so on. If author wants to create just a nice porn/erotic story "younger man/mature woman" then it should/could be like this.
I don't think it's yet natural for them to call each other 'mom' & 'son', because we shouldn't forget they just start to reconnect with their biological bond as she abandoned him when she was younger and he grew up in another family. I guess they'll gradually start calling each other 'mom' & 'son' when they get to know each other better but we shouldn't rush things. On the other hand, I'm waiting for the moment when she'll have to explain why she abandoned him at a younger age and how he will react when he'll learn the truth.
 
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Hey all,
no update from A Mothers Shame today but as I also posted about on here as it first came out I´ll also continue to post the free updates of it here, so here we got the first 20 Pages of my little christmas themed short story, A Naughty little office Jingle. With two new protagonists, Tyson and his aunt which is also his boss Amelie.

I hope you also enjoy their little entanglement.


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Unfortunately, there are not enough reminder of the fact they are mom and son, so all the potential taboo feeling are just missing, and with them all the excitement. Entire situation looks like just normal couple flirting, going out on a date and so on. Age difference between them is also looking almost minimal. So, it's somehow "off the mark". I mean, if it's about incest fantasy, then artist should remind us with right dialogues, right taboo tension, feel of prohibited and so on. If author wants to create just a nice porn/erotic story "younger man/mature woman" then it should/could be like this.
Ever heard of Genetic Sexual Attraction? That's exactly what is happening here... the inhibition is lower for them.
Also, patience ;)
 
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