[Tal3s of Debauchery] A Mothers Shame

[Picca]

Hey Friend,
yeah I get what you mean, since Isabella usually is pretty modest about these things. To be honest I really had a long thought about how to do this chapter because the main point was that they for the first time are naked in front of each other and somewhat get more "comfortable" (probably isn´t really the best word to describe it but I don´t have any better for it) with it, since at home such things are way less common so a place like a Spa sounded like a got idea and hence the more frequent scenes of full nudity, which will be again be fewer in the next chapter unless there really is some sort of sex involved and even then complete nudity probably isn´t happening as often. Another reason for it was that I got ALOT of messages from my subscribers on subscribestar and so on that were demanding way more nudity and sexy scenes. So yeah always difficult to find a balance between both. Especially since I want my stories to not only involve straight to the point sex scenes and I at least try to be somewhat realistic with the build up of scenes, clothing of the people etc.. Anyhow I definetly get what you´re saying, since I´m also usually a fan of a more modest approach of nudity for mother/son stories.

Hello my friend.

My biggest advise to you about this matter (I'm also your subs time to time) ignore what fan says (at least most of the time). They don't know what actually they want. Of course we all want to see interaction. But we also know after these, they story destined to lose it interest day by day. Same for the nudity. Surely we want to see her perfect body, she is really lovely. But should see fully nude such early. Moms always should be more resistant about getting close.

For example look the Mando's Breaking Boundaries or Sindy's Lithium. Things escalating veryy slowly. That keep the excitement always the top level.

Your stories are well. But both of them are too fast. Just keep it slow as real life. When the story getting more real, it is surely getting much better

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hello my friend.

My biggest advise to you about this matter (I'm also your subs time to time) ignore what fan says (at least most of the time). They don't know what actually they want. Of course we all want to see interaction. But we also know after these, they story destined to lose it interest day by day. Same for the nudity. Surely we want to see her perfect body, she is really lovely. But should see fully nude such early. Moms always should be more resistant about getting close.

For example look the Mando's Breaking Boundaries or Sindy's Lithium. Things escalating veryy slowly. That keep the excitement always the top level.

Your stories are well. But both of them are too fast. Just keep it slow as real life. When the story getting more real, it is surely getting much better

Hey friend,
first of all, thanks for the feedback and your backing via subbing, I really appreciate it . Yeah both of these stories are prime examples how nice such storylines can be and definetly were inspiration for my style of writting and I´m totally backing your points, especially the thing with the full nudity and at some points I´ve driven both stories faster forward than I initially planned. I do think however that sometimes it is a bit missleading if one would compare chapter 2 of Lithium to chapter 2 of a Mothers Shame for instance since both chapters of AMS are over 200 pages long while Lithiums first chapters are about 50-70 chapters if I remember correctly so you probably end up at about chapter 4-6 of Lithium with the amount of pages out for AMS currently out and I think after chapter 6 of Lithium they started having sex again if I remember correctly. So yeah, and with AMS we are still quite far from such an explicit content. Another reason why increased the speed a bit was since otherwise it would simply take way to long to ever at some point finish the stories. Don´t get me wrong I´ve no intention on cutting both stories short or worse drop them before finishing them but that is also the exact reason why I such acceleration is at least somewhat necessarry since I´m also simply not able to pump out as many pages as the big guys like Mando and co. how they manage to do it is beyond me...

But yeah I babbled on long enough, just a really difficult topic to get right and I can improve upon.

 

[NewtBlack]

Hey Friend,
yeah I get what you mean, since Isabella usually is pretty modest about these things. To be honest I really had a long thought about how to do this chapter because the main point was that they for the first time are naked in front of each other and somewhat get more "comfortable" (probably isn´t really the best word to describe it but I don´t have any better for it) with it, since at home such things are way less common so a place like a Spa sounded like a got idea and hence the more frequent scenes of full nudity, which will be again be fewer in the next chapter unless there really is some sort of sex involved and even then complete nudity probably isn´t happening as often. Another reason for it was that I got ALOT of messages from my subscribers on subscribestar and so on that were demanding way more nudity and sexy scenes. So yeah always difficult to find a balance between both. Especially since I want my stories to not only involve straight to the point sex scenes and I at least try to be somewhat realistic with the build up of scenes, clothing of the people etc.. Anyhow I definetly get what you´re saying, since I´m also usually a fan of a more modest approach of nudity for mother/son stories.

Hello my friend.

My biggest advise to you about this matter (I'm also your subs time to time) ignore what fan says (at least most of the time). They don't know what actually they want. Of course we all want to see interaction. But we also know after these, they story destined to lose it interest day by day. Same for the nudity. Surely we want to see her perfect body, she is really lovely. But should see fully nude such early. Moms always should be more resistant about getting close.

For example look the Mando's Breaking Boundaries or Sindy's Lithium. Things escalating veryy slowly. That keep the excitement always the top level.

Your stories are well. But both of them are too fast. Just keep it slow as real life. When the story getting more real, it is surely getting much better

I hope the two of you don't mind my addressing your statements together. A few points:

1. I would never presume to tell Tal3s of Debauchery what to do with his (her?) story. At the end of the day, I have no control or say over it. That's Tal3s's prerogative. I know that very well. It is within Tal3s's discretion to completely ignore my statement, though I'm grateful that you didn't. That is not the same, Picca, as not knowing what I want, or being a part of a composite of fandom that doesn't know what it wants. I wouldn't have stated my opinion if I didn't.

2. My gripe, if you could even call it that, is, as Tal3s's pointed out, the lack of modesty especially from Isabella's part during the "dangerous situation." One would think (and I'm well aware that I'm talking about 3D characters here) that if you're nude and two strange men with their schlongs hanging at eye level approached you, not only would your radar be up, but also you would attempt, if not immediately, to cover up your exposed areas. Not to mention, one would question the reason they're there since Saunas, and I have been to a few, are usually segregated by sex. I understand, or at least I presume, the scene was created to build up tension which would eventually be resolved by her son's "white knighting," but I believe, and let me stress that this is just my opinion, the same effect could have been achieved if Isabella, at the very least, covered herself up with her towel or even hands. I know I'm nitpicking (it's a bad habit of mine) but it just leaves a sour taste that there are three male characters who got an eye full of Isabella's nude body, but only one had to put the work in, so to speak, while the other two were just cringeworthy douchebags from a handful of scenes. It came off as pornographic as opposed to a relatable narrative.

3. And this is perhaps the most important point: you're are an incredible 3D artist Tal3s of Debauchery, as I'm fond of Isabella's character design, and my statement was in no way intended to be an indictment on the story as a whole. Not that you need me to tell you this, but please continue to do whatever will make both you and your subscribers satisfied. And whatever individual gripes lurkers may express, even if cathartic, is their own baggage to carry.

 

[almodovar]

I would sum up this whole conversation above by the idiomatic expression "Food for thought".

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

I hope the two of you don't mind my addressing your statements together. A few points:

1. I would never presume to tell Tal3s of Debauchery what to do with his (her?) story. At the end of the day, I have no control or say over it. That's Tal3s's prerogative. I know that very well. It is within Tal3s's discretion to completely ignore my statement, though I'm grateful that you didn't. That is not the same, Picca, as not knowing what I want, or being a part of a composite of fandom that doesn't know what it wants. I wouldn't have stated my opinion if I didn't.

2. My gripe, if you could even call it that, is, as Tal3s's pointed out, the lack of modesty especially from Isabella's part during the "dangerous situation." One would think (and I'm well aware that I'm talking about 3D characters here) that if you're nude and two strange men with their schlongs hanging at eye level approached you, not only would your radar be up, but also you would attempt, if not immediately, to cover up your exposed areas. Not to mention, one would question the reason they're there since Saunas, and I have been to a few, are usually segregated by sex. I understand, or at least I presume, the scene was created to build up tension which would eventually be resolved by her son's "white knighting," but I believe, and let me stress that this is just my opinion, the same effect could have been achieved if Isabella, at the very least, covered herself up with her towel or even hands. I know I'm nitpicking (it's a bad habit of mine) but it just leaves a sour taste that there are three male characters who got an eye full of Isabella's nude body, but only one had to put the work in, so to speak, while the other two were just cringeworthy douchebags from a handful of scenes. It came off as pornographic as opposed to a relatable narrative.

3. And this is perhaps the most important point: you're are an incredible 3D artist Tal3s of Debauchery, as I'm fond of Isabella's character design, and my statement was in no way intended to be an indictment on the story as a whole. Not that you need me to tell you this, but please continue to do whatever will make both you and your subscribers satisfied. And whatever individual gripes lurkers may express, even if cathartic, is their own baggage to carry.

Hey,
thanks for your words friend and I dig your obvious passion for the topic . Just a quick note from my side to your second point, my intention with Isabellas body language was indeed to show some form of being threatend with first making her self small and then after standing up to keep her hands in front of her. And at least where I come from here in Germany mixed saunas are pretty much the norm, so maybe I should have put more work in with her body language to emphasize that she is feeling threatened. And she not grabbing the towel, yeah that was also a decision I made since otherwise my thought for the following scene wouldn´t really work. The thing with two douches and Dylans white knighting... yeah, that was rather clumsy but I somehow wanted to see if such a scene would work but I probably cut too many corners instead of making a "proper" sort of scene like this, but then the build up would again take alot of time and pages and then we again come to the discussion regarding the balance of story and sexy scenes. Anyway I appreciate the feedback since only with feedback one is able to improve .

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hey all,
here we got the last 20 Pages of my little rather light hearted christmas themed short story, A Naughty little office Jingle.

I hope you also Enjoyed this little story!

 

[Picca]

I hope the two of you don't mind my addressing your statements together. A few points:

1. I would never presume to tell Tal3s of Debauchery what to do with his (her?) story. At the end of the day, I have no control or say over it. That's Tal3s's prerogative. I know that very well. It is within Tal3s's discretion to completely ignore my statement, though I'm grateful that you didn't. That is not the same, Picca, as not knowing what I want, or being a part of a composite of fandom that doesn't know what it wants. I wouldn't have stated my opinion if I didn't.

2. My gripe, if you could even call it that, is, as Tal3s's pointed out, the lack of modesty especially from Isabella's part during the "dangerous situation." One would think (and I'm well aware that I'm talking about 3D characters here) that if you're nude and two strange men with their schlongs hanging at eye level approached you, not only would your radar be up, but also you would attempt, if not immediately, to cover up your exposed areas. Not to mention, one would question the reason they're there since Saunas, and I have been to a few, are usually segregated by sex. I understand, or at least I presume, the scene was created to build up tension which would eventually be resolved by her son's "white knighting," but I believe, and let me stress that this is just my opinion, the same effect could have been achieved if Isabella, at the very least, covered herself up with her towel or even hands. I know I'm nitpicking (it's a bad habit of mine) but it just leaves a sour taste that there are three male characters who got an eye full of Isabella's nude body, but only one had to put the work in, so to speak, while the other two were just cringeworthy douchebags from a handful of scenes. It came off as pornographic as opposed to a relatable narrative.

3. And this is perhaps the most important point: you're are an incredible 3D artist Tal3s of Debauchery, as I'm fond of Isabella's character design, and my statement was in no way intended to be an indictment on the story as a whole. Not that you need me to tell you this, but please continue to do whatever will make both you and your subscribers satisfied. And whatever individual gripes lurkers may express, even if cathartic, is their own baggage to carry.

Hey mate,

Actually when I wrote my previous message I didn't mean to you. I spoke as general. But I should have underlined this before in order to prevent any misunderstanding. I agreed the statement you gave previously, no objection to that.

Moreover I also understand the perception of artist as well.

Briefly, let's see how the story goes..

 

[mickeymc]

Got it from X:

Super Hot. And I really like the mom. So beautiful! Excellent MILF!

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Got it from X:

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Super Hot. And I really like the mom. So beautiful! Excellent MILF!

Always glad to hear, how much you enjoy her

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hi guys,
Just for your information, since I'm currently still on a business trip until Sunday, the update here will come tomorrow evening instead of today.

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages of A Mothers Shame chapter 2. Where the two of them get to grips after the "tricky" situation...


Enjoy !

 

[mickeymc]

Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages of A Mothers Shame chapter 2. Where the two of them get to grips after the "tricky" situation...


Enjoy !


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Very nice. Kudos to @Tal3s of Debauchery for making such a wonderful comic story.

 

[ilove3dmoms]

Any Indian subscriber here?
DM

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Very nice. Kudos to @Tal3s of Debauchery for making such a wonderful comic story.

Thanks friend. My pleasure

 

[mickeymc]

Thanks friend. My pleasure

I hope for more success to you.

 

[ilove3dmoms]

how many pages available on SUbscribe star?

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

how many pages available on SUbscribe star?

Hey friend,
on subscribestar are currently 268 pages for chapter 2 of A Mothers Shame out.

 

[Kjay]

A Mothers Shame is so erotic and excellently done. Can't wait to see the continuation of the story

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

A Mothers Shame is so erotic and excellently done. Can't wait to see the continuation of the story

Thanks Friend for those kind words. You´ll get some new pages tomorrow

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hi,
The next 15 Pages (283 incl Cover) of Chapter 2 for A Mothers Shame are now out on fanbox and subscribestar!

Frozen in place, maybe because she secretly does want it?! (Sneak Peek of Chapter 2 Page 283)