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[Tal3s of Debauchery] A Mothers Shame

Yeah the new look is much better. Also if you can keep the same lighting for the scenes, even a bit brighter.
Because the models are great but many details are obscured by the darkness

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Hi,
The next 21 Pages (66 incl Cover) of Chapter 4 for A Mothers Shame are now out on fanbox and subscribestar!

Showing her some new tricks.. (Sneak Peek of Chapter 4 Page 61)

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Yeah, much much better the new look, more realistic, more mature. See how the whole atmosphere changes, when the character, in this case mother, looks more mature, more "right for the role"? The same goes with plot, or dialogues, especially in this type of stories.
Then the changes had the right effect, if they make her look more mature ;). Thanks for the feedback my friend.

Yeah the new look is much better. Also if you can keep the same lighting for the scenes, even a bit brighter.
Because the models are great but many details are obscured by the darkness

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Thanks for the feedback friend! It will for sure not get darker ;), I took the feedback to heart and fiddled around with the lighting to give a feeling that it is dark/evenings but due to the light everything is still visible cleary. Though I got to say, that I was really happy how the lighting in this scene turned out. Lighting is so key, to setting up the right mood.
 
Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages (133-152) of A Mothers Shame chapter 3. Dylan gettingt overwhelmed by the moment but it isn´t over for "poor" Isabella just yet...


Enjoy :)!

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Hmm..my problem with this is that it's kind of too soft... penetration is actually visible only on page 146, and entire scene looks more kind of soft erotic movie scene, than actually porn, so that's a pretty big mistake, in my opinion. Second, as i already said, age difference between them is just somehow not right...i mean , both are great characters for incest-fantasy story, but this type of mom should have younger son, and this son should have more mature mom. For example, son to me looks like around-25 yrs old guy, so mom could easily be anywhere between 45-55, and mom here is just looking younger than that. But that could be considered marginal, the real problem here that sex scene, poses and penetration is unfortunately not made in greatest fashion. Hopefully it will be better, more porn, more exciting. And her look will be more mature.
 
Mom is okay but I agree boy is too old looking especially considering that mom's age. The boy should be more or less the same looking as the son on Trophy Mom.
 
Now I see that I m not the only one who think that this,EXCELLENT, comic is one of the most frustrating ever
I criticized that s is slow, very slow,too slow
Now after almost one year and 700 pages we have a first real sexual contac
We hope in the next 400/500 pages both will reach an orgasm ( because I suspect an
interruption of this intercourse)
IMHO with respect of author and ironically, off course
 
The renders are more then okay. But indeed it's way too slow almost boring to follow. Besides there is so mucht txt. All that thinking over and over again. If this is meant as a more or less soft porn comix then it's really good.
 
Hi,
The next 30 Pages (96 incl Cover) of Chapter 4 for A Mothers Shame are now out on fanbox and subscribestar!

Giving it her good... (Sneak Peek of Page 89 of chapter 4)

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Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages (153-172) of A Mothers Shame chapter 3. After a short break, Dylan and his urges come back with a vengeance...


Enjoy :)!

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Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages (173-192) of A Mothers Shame chapter 3. Finishing of their first time together...


Enjoy :)!

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I like this story, the artist is excellent, keep up the great work. I only have one reservation: I don't see strong sexual desire in the mother for a situation like this, between mother and son. There is no verbal communication between the two, everything is in the mind. I don't see any demonstration on the part of the mother, to her son, that she wants to have sex with him. It seems to me like forced sex, always accompanied by regrets and doubts for both of them. I would like sex between them to be more fun, bringing more satisfaction and joy to both of them, and for them to tell each other if it was good or bad. I believe that if it were like that, the reader would be more pleased. Just my humble opinion.
 

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