[Various Artists] Melissa N. - Melissa 822 inspired Comics, Stories & Artwork

[tv_marina]

Cassie Rose Watson
Curse of destiny Chapter 16 - Beach Bunny (png file)

 

[tv_marina]

And pdf as well

 

[Miar89]

Anyone has updates for tglulu?

 

[Jackjons]

No, much shorter. Current 25 page is 61 in original. There are no close-up pages at all like in original. I watched the original and what can I say, you can see how Melissa's narrative has changed since then. What I loved about this comic is the long and detailed transformation of the character externally and internally throughout the comic. I think that's what got a lot of us, and people like Liltkit to even start making their own comics.

That is 100% true' mellisa's narrative is got us , take us to a journey, and involve with it

 

[mihaluck]

Liltkit said tomorrow next Part Lesson to the teacher

 

[KidtheKidd]

Liltkit said tomorrow next Part Lesson to the teacher

 

[mihaluck]

I even feel some sad that it's a shortened remake. I would have liked the opposite, my favorite combination of going back to school as a slender girl and not with big shapes as in Like Father Like Daughter. Can't wait!

 

[yano2mch]

So. The text would be the exact same! Hmmm , just art will be changed?!! Then I would be little disappoint ! Becouse, it is not that Melissa's art was that bad at that time too ! I was guessing lilkit will change the text too little bit , !

Looking at the two, they both have their own charm, though the remake does have the longer hair, more V cut blouse, slightly better curves, oh and those headphones look more real. Not sure the bed's padded grid was an improvement, as it implies she doesn't even have sheets on it. Though I'm not sure about the whole blurred picture background that only encompasses 60% or less of the screen, and having huge white walls like it was a posterboard. But that's all subjective opinion.

As for the text. If you only wanted to improve visuals then sure leaving the text alone works. Adding something or altering it to fix things, or a better version of the dialog may also be good; Depends. As an ERPer more fluff is nice, as long as it doesn't feel forced. But too much and you bore the reader. It's a balancing act.

 

[mihaluck]

I think at that time Melissa was just mastering the program and you can see that the art is poor in the first half and improves in the second half

 

[Jdjajanansn]

Does anyone know if the next part of the lesson for the teacher has already been completed?

 

[SaraVega]

383.26 MB folder on MEGA

mega.nz

Full story of College Girlfriends until the end. Enjoy!

I honestly enjoyed this story, parts of this felt like they moved really fast and parts didn't made all the sense but I loved the ending.
It's good to see at least one story where they end up with the girl

 

[mihaluck]

Part 2 of The Lesson for the teacher is out.

 

[Just Another User]

Next Teacher update goes up to page 120 of the original story.

 

[Thebasement334]

Liltkit A Lesson for the Teacher Fan Remake Part 2

 

[Thebasement334]

Liltkit A Lesson for the Teacher Fan Remake Part 2 Zip File

 

[Thebasement334]

Comparison

 

[oled65cxpua]

Liltkit A Lesson for the Teacher Fan Remake Part 2

Hopefully he adds some NSFW chapters to the original