[Various Artists] Melissa N. - Melissa 822 inspired Comics, Stories & Artwork

[yano2mch]

So. The text would be the exact same! Hmmm , just art will be changed?!! Then I would be little disappoint ! Becouse, it is not that Melissa's art was that bad at that time too ! I was guessing lilkit will change the text too little bit , !

Looking at the two, they both have their own charm, though the remake does have the longer hair, more V cut blouse, slightly better curves, oh and those headphones look more real. Not sure the bed's padded grid was an improvement, as it implies she doesn't even have sheets on it. Though I'm not sure about the whole blurred picture background that only encompasses 60% or less of the screen, and having huge white walls like it was a posterboard. But that's all subjective opinion.

As for the text. If you only wanted to improve visuals then sure leaving the text alone works. Adding something or altering it to fix things, or a better version of the dialog may also be good; Depends. As an ERPer more fluff is nice, as long as it doesn't feel forced. But too much and you bore the reader. It's a balancing act.

 

[mihaluck]

I think at that time Melissa was just mastering the program and you can see that the art is poor in the first half and improves in the second half

 

[Jdjajanansn]

Does anyone know if the next part of the lesson for the teacher has already been completed?

 

[SaraVega]

File folder on MEGA

mega.nz

Full story of College Girlfriends until the end. Enjoy!

I honestly enjoyed this story, parts of this felt like they moved really fast and parts didn't made all the sense but I loved the ending.
It's good to see at least one story where they end up with the girl

 

[mihaluck]

Part 2 of The Lesson for the teacher is out.

 

[Just Another User]

Next Teacher update goes up to page 120 of the original story.

 

[Theger320]

Liltkit A Lesson for the Teacher Fan Remake Part 2

 

[Theger320]

Liltkit A Lesson for the Teacher Fan Remake Part 2 Zip File

 

[Theger320]

Comparison

 

[oled65cxpua]

Liltkit A Lesson for the Teacher Fan Remake Part 2

Hopefully he adds some NSFW chapters to the original

 

[Sstpa]

I honestly enjoyed this story, parts of this felt like they moved really fast and parts didn't made all the sense but I loved the ending.
It's good to see at least one story where they end up with the girl

I just wish she never had bottom surgery, or that we at least got another sex scene before that. Maybe with her in chastity.

 

[Sstpa]

All of these TS 3D porn comic artists seem to shy away from in-depth sex scenes. Kizaru3d is the only one that really has graphic scenes. Emory Ahlberg is the worst for this, but Hanna23 does it, Liltkit does it, and MelissaN does it. MelissaN has only just started to do some real sex scenes after 700 pages of Aphrodites mirror. Hanna23 is not too bad but they are short and rushed, same with Liltkit. We get these amazing build ups just to get a quick and soft climax. I don’t mind when the story ends with bottom surgery but I’d like to see more end without it too. Some chastity play or some impotence play would be a nice change of pace once and a while

 

[mihaluck]

Liltkit A Lesson for the Teacher Fan Remake Part 2

Art very good. One thing for me in original face changed not so much as in remake, Liltkit made more bimbo face, not unexpected from him, but wanted to see not bimbo face at once. I mean face features get more delicate and lips too big.

 

[Kobboldpot]

Art very good. One thing for me in original face changed not so much as in remake, Liltkit made more bimbo face, not unexpected from him, but wanted to see not bimbo face at once. I mean face features get more delicate and lips too big.

As I understand it, the problem is in the editor and the models that are used. In general, all of her heroines are extremely similar and I think it is a matter of the tools that the author has mastered, and not some responsible desire.

 

[Elaine]

Anyone have the new Puttin’ the ass?

 

[Vidya_SissyQueen]

Puttin' the Ass (Up to Dated)

 

[Vidya_SissyQueen]

Drop Dead Mommy Part 1 & 2
Combined PDF [Up to Date]

 

[Jackjons]

One thing I love about Hanna is hanna has very unique story! Either he or she can elaborate the story fully or not . Atleast hanna tried every time to improve which should be appreciated
And one thing I don't like ( well Two things technically) the models are good but the face somehow I personally feel can more feminine!
And one thing hanna Never thought about bottoms though, I am not complaining but if it was cut that tiny banna then I may like more !

 

[Aculina]

Can someone pls send me via pdf, there is some kind of error in rar format

 

[Jackjons]

Hey guys! I recently read "Abby's Lovely TG"s Victoria's secret! And its got my interest! Dose anyone have more comics ! Then do me a favour and please upload