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[Yair/BlackNWhiteComics] The Poker Game 4

Compared to the Poker Game 1 and 2... Yawn. Boring. Action please. Tension. A Story? Yair recycling, no Plot needed. Just phat Asses
 
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timbob said:
Compared to the Poker Game 1 and 2... Yawn. Boring. Action please. Tension. A Story? Yair recycling, no Plot needed. Just phat Asses
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To be honest, yeah, the story has been pretty disappointing, but the action is pretty good at least. 3 was probably the best to me.

Also, I like DJ in this scene, but the dude's been in every other comic for a while now, overexposure is how I feel.
 
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bobkun said:
To be honest, yeah, the story has been pretty disappointing, but the action is pretty good at least. 3 was probably the best to me.

Also, I like DJ in this scene, but the dude's been in every other comic for a while now, overexposure is how I feel.
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Agree overall. A great art, but probably from the standpoint of the plot, more action is needed. What can help this comics is some lesbian action between Lexi and Vanessa, the time has come
 
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