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You're right, you think it would be interesting to introduce an image of each character at the beginning of the story with their description.
Or Whenever a new character appears in the story, you can provide a short introduction with their name, their relationship to the main character, and a brief description of who they are.
 
Why is there so much hate in hentai?

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Why is there so much hate in hentai?

you mean hate of hentai? I don't know.

As for the school uniforms, you could always say that they start attending school at 10 (instead of 6), and then they leave school at 22 :P Or that uniforms are more the norm in that world.

As for Japanese culture, the age of consent is 12 i believe, but only for other 12-18 yearolds (So school based hentai then fits and works). Once you hit 18 it's basically 18+ only.

The only other one that has young sexual partners off hand is Muslims/Islam where it's basically 8+.
 
maybe because there is no story yet? nothing to post about? only 20 picture. at all? if you continue like now.. you going to have 9 followers next month
 
oh.. it's definitely not my business how you going to do your.. But if we mention again novelchef (which many people blaming for slow), he producing more than 100 images monthly for his stories.
Realy.. if AI is so difficult to use for comix, draw it manually or use some engines for it. Or you can do real long story with 20 pages, but put this 10 pictures inside.. have no idea, sorry
 
Really.. if AI is so difficult to use for comix

I've tinkered with the AI stuff enough. For probably every 10-20 images you generate there's one or two you want to keep (lots of errors, or not what you're looking for. It feels easier to generate a lot and find good ones, then find one that's close and then modify it). And depending on if he's using himself as a reference for img2img, then a LORA to try and keep the character consistent between images.

As the models are getting better the biggest limitation is Video Ram (so i bet the shared RAM/VRAM systems will be popular for AI). Running on CPU is just slow. Think I've generated a 1024x1024 (using a large high quality model) that I'm sure used normal ram or was just that slow and it took like 30 minutes per image. While on the video card you're talking 20 seconds to 3 minutes.

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Trying img2img you have the [ original | pulp fiction | meerkats and felines ]. Probably generated 100 images to try and get something halfway close to what i wanted. Though if the resolution were higher i'm sure it wouldn't have looked as bad as it came out.
 
Hello, here is the second part (the third part is published on Patreon) all constructive criticism is accepted
 

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While it's not my cup of tea, it looks generally good. Graphically looks similar to NovelChef (though i haven't read his stuff I've only glanced at the images in passing).

Premise of the story seems okay, Looks okay overall. The only gripe i have is the text dark text and then hitting dark background makes it hard to read. That's where it should have an outline or shadow. Light text should probably have a black shadow, dark text have a white shadow (doesn't need to be big, 2-3 pixels thick probably). Then the words will stand out better while not interfering much with the image.

Something you might to keep backgrounds consistent (unless they are walking around the room) generate the backgrounds, then make characters separately but use a 'white background' as part of the generation. Then in Gimp or your preferred editor make the white transparent, and do layers.
 
Hello, here is the third part (the four part is published on Patreon)
 

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Hello, here is the quarter part (the fifth part is published on Patreon)
 

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Hello, here is the quarter part (the fifth part is published on Patreon)


Looks decent. Again the words need a white or back outline/shadow so they aren't hard to read on other light/dark surfaces. And page 5 'time for your new job' the skin tone of him while asleep is a few shades too dark compared to the images immediately following.

Also read part 3 and see he had earrings after being at the saloon, except the last frame. Minor inconsistencies.

Everything else.... looks fine. :)
 
Looks pretty good. There's minor inconsistencies between the images; But nothing to nitpick at as long as it's close enough to not draw the eyes towards it too much. And the text is easier to read with the outlines.

I doubt i have much in the way of useful feedback from this point on; As long as the story is enjoyable and readable, it should be fine. Good luck on your work :)
 

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