I am still working on writing this, here is the First part of the story. There will be 3 parts in total. Hope you guys will enjoy it. This is my first go at writing proper Erotica so let me know if i can make it better going forward.
Peeking at it, i see a lot of bolded sections. Names, a few words in sentences... Odd emphesis that doesn't look like it carries over right. I tend to reserve bold for all cap words like "
WATCH OUT!!" as it helps with if someone is yelling or very intense. Course single word replies like Huh? WTF and other things it may work well too.
Italics i think should probably be used more than bold, to give subtle meaning, or foreign words. "Greetings
Ma Petite.
Je suis heureux que tu sois revenu sain et sauf." (
glad you made it back safe and sound - Google TL).
Other italics could be to coyly hint something. "So how was his
sausage at lunch break?" "It's
Big and
sooooo tasty"... or to send hidden messages between people. Usually the in crowd, or gossiping. Emphasis can be for something that's more important, or isn't at first glance either. "You wouldn't deprive an
old man his
walking stick, would you?" Could also be sarcasm to some degree.
In some places italics can be internal monologue or thoughts. I personally would add extra quotation for those.
~Wait, he took the second train? Not the first? That means i can't flirt with him since we're on different trains...~
Underlines should probably put emphasis on things that are especially important. "You may take one,
and only one...."
If epubs honored colors i'd suggest male and female colors for text, as it helps to identify if/when something is being said. But since they don't...
Though i suppose fonts can help to when denoting.... something particularly flat or different:
Hello fellow humans. I too am a human, as such you should trust me... And since we are all humans here and nothing is suspicious, you should tell me your secret plans...
Anyways, i might do more than glance at the story a bit later. But don't overdo emphesis,