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[Various Authors] Mom Son erotica

Yes, these are the usual plots we see or read in the existing stories. But I am more of thinking about "shared wife" kind of situation. Dad could see there is attraction between them and give his blessings for the act. Watches as they go at it and later join in. Exploring DP, spitroasting, taking turn, freeuse & other kinks. I am thinking of 30-35 chapter long novel with each chapter around 3k words. If you guys are interested i can prepare an outline and post it here.
It's not my type of story so I'd skip it, but I'm sure there is an audience for it. I would support anyone who tries writing a good story even if it's not for me.

Side note, sunbrycd has a new story out called The Long Game.
 
Hey People. Big fan of what you guys have done here. Everyday in the morning i check on this. Also I usually write for myself but taking inspiration from the works i have read here. I have brainstormed few ideas about novellas/novels I can work on. One idea that I kept on playing with is Dad sharing mom with son willingly. Is this something that intrest you guys. Would love to know your views.
Thanks
As long as the son is the only one fucking then it's good
 
Well if we only want son having sex, In that case try this story's outline. it follows a usual trope but i have tried to add some depth into it.

Synopsis- During a Plane crash a family get stuck on a remote island. But in the end its not about just survival its about Loving and accepting each other. Son/Mom/Sister/Grandmother.

I would love to know how you guys feel about this.
Thanks
 

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Could someone kindly post a rough night sleep with mom part 2 and a boy's breast friend part 2 both by klrxo
here's a boy's best friend part 2. was there ever a 2nd part of rought night's sleep with mom released? I'm not seeing anything...
 

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Well if we only want son having sex, In that case try this story's outline. it follows a usual trope but i have tried to add some depth into it.

Synopsis- During a Plane crash a family get stuck on a remote island. But in the end its not about just survival its about Loving and accepting each other. Son/Mom/Sister/Grandmother.

I would love to know how you guys feel about this.
Thanks
Where is the story?
 
I can't find the part 1 of this story. Can you post part 1 as well? Many thanks in advance.
idk which story you mean but both have been posted in this thread. i shouldn't have even posted part 2 earlier today bc it's already been posted. apologies for taking up space. use the search function maybe? i found it in about 10 seconds
 
Well if we only want son having sex, In that case try this story's outline. it follows a usual trope but i have tried to add some depth into it.

Synopsis- During a Plane crash a family get stuck on a remote island. But in the end its not about just survival its about Loving and accepting each other. Son/Mom/Sister/Grandmother.

I would love to know how you guys feel about this.
Thanks
Does anyone have the full story?
 
Does anyone have the full story?
Hey People

I am still working on writing this, here is the First part of the story. There will be 3 parts in total. Hope you guys will enjoy it. This is my first go at writing proper Erotica so let me know if i can make it better going forward.

Thanks
 

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I am still working on writing this, here is the First part of the story. There will be 3 parts in total. Hope you guys will enjoy it. This is my first go at writing proper Erotica so let me know if i can make it better going forward.

Peeking at it, i see a lot of bolded sections. Names, a few words in sentences... Odd emphesis that doesn't look like it carries over right. I tend to reserve bold for all cap words like "WATCH OUT!!" as it helps with if someone is yelling or very intense. Course single word replies like Huh? WTF and other things it may work well too.


Italics i think should probably be used more than bold, to give subtle meaning, or foreign words. "Greetings Ma Petite. Je suis heureux que tu sois revenu sain et sauf." (glad you made it back safe and sound - Google TL).

Other italics could be to coyly hint something. "So how was his sausage at lunch break?" "It's Big and sooooo tasty"... or to send hidden messages between people. Usually the in crowd, or gossiping. Emphasis can be for something that's more important, or isn't at first glance either. "You wouldn't deprive an old man his walking stick, would you?" Could also be sarcasm to some degree.

In some places italics can be internal monologue or thoughts. I personally would add extra quotation for those. ~Wait, he took the second train? Not the first? That means i can't flirt with him since we're on different trains...~


Underlines should probably put emphasis on things that are especially important. "You may take one, and only one...."

If epubs honored colors i'd suggest male and female colors for text, as it helps to identify if/when something is being said. But since they don't...


Though i suppose fonts can help to when denoting.... something particularly flat or different: Hello fellow humans. I too am a human, as such you should trust me... And since we are all humans here and nothing is suspicious, you should tell me your secret plans...


Anyways, i might do more than glance at the story a bit later. But don't overdo emphesis,
 
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Peeking at it, i see a lot of bolded sections. Names, a few words in sentences... Odd emphesis that doesn't look like it carries over right. I tend to reserve bold for all cap words like "WATCH OUT!!" as it helps with if someone is yelling or very intense. Course single word replies like Huh? WTF and other things it may work well too.


Italics i think should probably be used more than bold, to give subtle meaning, or foreign words. "Greetings Ma Petite. Je suis heureux que tu sois revenu sain et sauf." (glad you made it back safe and sound - Google TL).

Other italics could be to coyly hint something. "So how was his sausage at lunch break?" "It's Big and sooooo tasty"... or to send hidden messages between people. Usually the in crowd, or gossiping. Emphasis can be for something that's more important, or isn't at first glance either. "You wouldn't deprive an old man his walking stick, would you?" Could also be sarcasm to some degree.

In some places italics can be internal monologue or thoughts. I personally would add extra quotation for those. ~Wait, he took the second train? Not the first? That means i can't flirt with him since we're on different trains...~


Underlines should probably put emphasis on things that are especially important. "You may take one, and only one...."

If epubs honored colors i'd suggest male and female colors for text, as it helps to identify if/when something is being said. But since they don't...


Though i suppose fonts can help to when denoting.... something particularly flat or different: Hello fellow humans. I too am a human, as such you should trust me... And since we are all humans here and nothing is suspicious, you should tell me your secret plans...


Anyways, i might do more than glance at the story a bit later. But don't overdo emphesis,
I very much agree with the bold statements. They should be used sparingly and not just to emphasize one word for no real reason. I've seen klrxo use it at times to say something like, "The chair was creaking as it swayed." and that just doesn't work either IMO.

Italics I see mainly used to portray what someone is thinking. An inner monologue.
 

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