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[DangerousLines] Pirates of the Coal Sack
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"Pirates of the Coal Sack Chapter 33" by DangerousLines:
Artist's note:
"So as soon as I give the sickbay design a detail pass and enhancements, I land in the hospital for a month. Not sure what otherparts of the ship I should definitely leave alone after this, but I think sickbay is done for now. I like Doctor Darling just fine, but I donāt want to spend another week there.
Have you ever noticed it never rains in space? No matter how Earth-like the planet is, we get fog and snow, but almost never waterfalling from the sky. Iāve been wanting to avert that trope for a longtime, and this plot gave me an occasion. Fortunately I also just upgraded my render machine, because rendering rain turns out to be really hardware-intensive.
Next issue will go into more detail about my version of New Yellowstone. Figuring out how the Bova came to be has led me to insights about Terran culture 200 years ago, and a fairly different social & governmental structure from Terra itself. Thatāll be relevant as the crew spends some time with them."
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Artist's note:
"So as soon as I give the sickbay design a detail pass and enhancements, I land in the hospital for a month. Not sure what otherparts of the ship I should definitely leave alone after this, but I think sickbay is done for now. I like Doctor Darling just fine, but I donāt want to spend another week there.
Have you ever noticed it never rains in space? No matter how Earth-like the planet is, we get fog and snow, but almost never waterfalling from the sky. Iāve been wanting to avert that trope for a longtime, and this plot gave me an occasion. Fortunately I also just upgraded my render machine, because rendering rain turns out to be really hardware-intensive.
Next issue will go into more detail about my version of New Yellowstone. Figuring out how the Bova came to be has led me to insights about Terran culture 200 years ago, and a fairly different social & governmental structure from Terra itself. Thatāll be relevant as the crew spends some time with them."
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QueenofHearts
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Hurray, we're moving on.Artist's note:
"So as soon as I give the sickbay design a detail pass and enhancements, I land in the hospital for a month. Not sure what otherparts of the ship I should definitely leave alone after this, but I think sickbay is done for now. I like Doctor Darling just fine, but I donāt want to spend another week there.
Have you ever noticed it never rains in space? No matter how Earth-like the planet is, we get fog and snow, but almost never waterfalling from the sky. Iāve been wanting to avert that trope for a longtime, and this plot gave me an occasion. Fortunately I also just upgraded my render machine, because rendering rain turns out to be really hardware-intensive.
Next issue will go into more detail about my version of New Yellowstone. Figuring out how the Bova came to be has led me to insights about Terran culture 200 years ago, and a fairly different social & governmental structure from Terra itself. Thatāll be relevant as the crew spends some time with them."
[DangerousLines] Pirates of the Coal Sack Chapter 33:
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Yeah, he always takes his time. But it's also understandable that he needs time for his amazing story.
"Sisters of STEM" by DangerousLines:
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"Pirates of the Coal Sack Chapter 34" by DangerousLines:
Artist's note:
"The idea for this issue started off as āGoodbody falls in love and becomes a farm girl,ā but then it absorbed the plot about the Bova rustlers Iād intended to do next issue. So things may be a little disjointed. Writing a one-issue romance is even harder than doing a horror story.
I managed to work in some things that have been cooking for a longtime. Fairchild and Thorvaldssonās interest in Alfar anime came from Thorvaldssonās real counterpart. Cookie put in an appearance a while back, but we only now get to see the actual galley. And of course Dialup Hero and I talked about visiting New Yellowstone years ago.
Rejuvenation has been in my head since the beginning. There are two ways Terran technology resists aging; one is monthly drug treatment (that requires Bova milk as an ingredient) slows down aging, and rejuvenation which takes the body apart and rebuilds it as a young adult from the same DNA (leaving the brain intact). Both are restricted to the elites of Terran society and not available off Earth; Star Fleet personnel and civilian sailors like our crew donāt normally have access. But itās why Lieutenant Galensā 80-year-old mother looks so well preserved.
We get a little more about Sister Victoria this issue. Most of the Sisters take their names from prominent women in science, engineering, or the arts; Sister Victoria is the āfirst of her name,ā having had toflee the censors in her teenage years after her school science project correctly predicted the failure of a major military program that she wasnāt even supposed to know existed. Sheās a scientist at heart, not an engineer.
We also get a chance to see more of Ensign Stark. Heās very much a military man, and willing to solve problems with fists or pulser fire. Weāll see how that works out in his new job.
Sonneās love of detective fiction was mentioned during her captainās mast hearing in #29. She finally got to be one of the mystery-solving gang! Now I just need to get her artwork on camera.
Aliās actually done this kind of thing before; making the case against pirates and smugglers is a Star Fleet intelligence officerās job. Heād never gotten to do the āconfront the guilty party who think sheās gotten away with itā thing before, though. He got carried away, because he really didnāt see a lot of difference between the steadholder and the senator. Deeās faster on the draw than he is, though.
Butcher turns out to be a good guy to know, both if you need to keep your apple harvest from spoiling and if youāre questioning your direction in life. Whoādāve thought the second part was in him? But heās been rooming with Goodbody, Morrighan, and Tholi all along; he knows them pretty well by now.
We say goodbye to a good many of the crew here. Most of the Sisters are staying on New Yellowstone, as are a half dozen of the crew who would otherwise have serious illnesses. Personnel issues are going to keep coming up for the next arc.
Something I didnāt find a way to gracefully work in: As part of the program to keep them in their place, Bova are designed to with crippling dyslexia and dyscalculia. They are neurologically unable to learn to read or do math. And theyāre all female. I think of these as an earlier version of Dialup Heroās Bova; Doctor Dey and the Sisters will work on turning them into something closer to his characters."
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Artist's note:
"The idea for this issue started off as āGoodbody falls in love and becomes a farm girl,ā but then it absorbed the plot about the Bova rustlers Iād intended to do next issue. So things may be a little disjointed. Writing a one-issue romance is even harder than doing a horror story.
I managed to work in some things that have been cooking for a longtime. Fairchild and Thorvaldssonās interest in Alfar anime came from Thorvaldssonās real counterpart. Cookie put in an appearance a while back, but we only now get to see the actual galley. And of course Dialup Hero and I talked about visiting New Yellowstone years ago.
Rejuvenation has been in my head since the beginning. There are two ways Terran technology resists aging; one is monthly drug treatment (that requires Bova milk as an ingredient) slows down aging, and rejuvenation which takes the body apart and rebuilds it as a young adult from the same DNA (leaving the brain intact). Both are restricted to the elites of Terran society and not available off Earth; Star Fleet personnel and civilian sailors like our crew donāt normally have access. But itās why Lieutenant Galensā 80-year-old mother looks so well preserved.
We get a little more about Sister Victoria this issue. Most of the Sisters take their names from prominent women in science, engineering, or the arts; Sister Victoria is the āfirst of her name,ā having had toflee the censors in her teenage years after her school science project correctly predicted the failure of a major military program that she wasnāt even supposed to know existed. Sheās a scientist at heart, not an engineer.
We also get a chance to see more of Ensign Stark. Heās very much a military man, and willing to solve problems with fists or pulser fire. Weāll see how that works out in his new job.
Sonneās love of detective fiction was mentioned during her captainās mast hearing in #29. She finally got to be one of the mystery-solving gang! Now I just need to get her artwork on camera.
Aliās actually done this kind of thing before; making the case against pirates and smugglers is a Star Fleet intelligence officerās job. Heād never gotten to do the āconfront the guilty party who think sheās gotten away with itā thing before, though. He got carried away, because he really didnāt see a lot of difference between the steadholder and the senator. Deeās faster on the draw than he is, though.
Butcher turns out to be a good guy to know, both if you need to keep your apple harvest from spoiling and if youāre questioning your direction in life. Whoādāve thought the second part was in him? But heās been rooming with Goodbody, Morrighan, and Tholi all along; he knows them pretty well by now.
We say goodbye to a good many of the crew here. Most of the Sisters are staying on New Yellowstone, as are a half dozen of the crew who would otherwise have serious illnesses. Personnel issues are going to keep coming up for the next arc.
Something I didnāt find a way to gracefully work in: As part of the program to keep them in their place, Bova are designed to with crippling dyslexia and dyscalculia. They are neurologically unable to learn to read or do math. And theyāre all female. I think of these as an earlier version of Dialup Heroās Bova; Doctor Dey and the Sisters will work on turning them into something closer to his characters."
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QueenofHearts
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Hooray, we're moving on.
You're welcome, my dear.
"Happy Easter" by DangerousLines:
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nice frames"Pirates of the Coal Sack Chapter 33" by DangerousLines:
Artist's note:
"So as soon as I give the sickbay design a detail pass and enhancements, I land in the hospital for a month. Not sure what otherparts of the ship I should definitely leave alone after this, but I think sickbay is done for now. I like Doctor Darling just fine, but I donāt want to spend another week there.
Have you ever noticed it never rains in space? No matter how Earth-like the planet is, we get fog and snow, but almost never waterfalling from the sky. Iāve been wanting to avert that trope for a longtime, and this plot gave me an occasion. Fortunately I also just upgraded my render machine, because rendering rain turns out to be really hardware-intensive.
Next issue will go into more detail about my version of New Yellowstone. Figuring out how the Bova came to be has led me to insights about Terran culture 200 years ago, and a fairly different social & governmental structure from Terra itself. Thatāll be relevant as the crew spends some time with them."
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I'm glad you like it.
"Pirates of the Coal Sack Chapter 35" by DangerousLines:
Artist's note:
"This issue kept changing directions on me. My original focus was going to be on the return of the prize crew, and then events that have now been moved to next issue. But then Rileyās rejuvenation started pulling at me. The man just got thirty years younger, from his perception overnight and after a near-death experience. Heās got a lot on his mind. But then, I decided to take an excellent reader suggestion to do a line-crossing ceremony, and it basically took over the last act. If I didnāt like it, I couldāve kept going, but I think it makes a better conclusion. And a touch of naval tradition. And all of it gave me a chance to catch up on the sexy stuff thatās been back-burnered for a while.
We havenāt heard from the Putti in a while (since #19), but thatās the way theyād want it. Theyāre private and reclusive, and the Federation would like to ignore them, because they are an interstellar repudiation of the Terran doctrine of racial superiority.
Pvaeshās line on page 8 and Pvaerās on page 10 in Aenean is daie, idiomatically āYes,sir.ā Senator Nigiliaās Hatian Creole lines: āKoumanmanā is an expression analogous to āWoah!ā āO mĆØtā is āOh my god!ā The challenge and response on page 10 is citing rugby championships; I thought of doing the traditional Trek 3D chess moves, but that didnāt feel right for Riley and BarragĆ”n.
āį“ØĀ³ Orionā is pronounced āpi three Orion.ā I donāt make Bayer notations, I just use them.
A scene I cut from last issue and originally intended for this issue, but it didnāt fit: The officers of Air de Cour were, as promised, let off at a Federation portāNew Yellowstone, where they will face charges for rustling the Bova and trying to export them. Both are hanging offenses on New Yellowstone."
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Artist's note:
"This issue kept changing directions on me. My original focus was going to be on the return of the prize crew, and then events that have now been moved to next issue. But then Rileyās rejuvenation started pulling at me. The man just got thirty years younger, from his perception overnight and after a near-death experience. Heās got a lot on his mind. But then, I decided to take an excellent reader suggestion to do a line-crossing ceremony, and it basically took over the last act. If I didnāt like it, I couldāve kept going, but I think it makes a better conclusion. And a touch of naval tradition. And all of it gave me a chance to catch up on the sexy stuff thatās been back-burnered for a while.
We havenāt heard from the Putti in a while (since #19), but thatās the way theyād want it. Theyāre private and reclusive, and the Federation would like to ignore them, because they are an interstellar repudiation of the Terran doctrine of racial superiority.
Pvaeshās line on page 8 and Pvaerās on page 10 in Aenean is daie, idiomatically āYes,sir.ā Senator Nigiliaās Hatian Creole lines: āKoumanmanā is an expression analogous to āWoah!ā āO mĆØtā is āOh my god!ā The challenge and response on page 10 is citing rugby championships; I thought of doing the traditional Trek 3D chess moves, but that didnāt feel right for Riley and BarragĆ”n.
āį“ØĀ³ Orionā is pronounced āpi three Orion.ā I donāt make Bayer notations, I just use them.
A scene I cut from last issue and originally intended for this issue, but it didnāt fit: The officers of Air de Cour were, as promised, let off at a Federation portāNew Yellowstone, where they will face charges for rustling the Bova and trying to export them. Both are hanging offenses on New Yellowstone."
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You're welcome, my friend.
"Pirates of the Coal Sack Chapter 36" by DangerousLines:
Artist's note:
"The rescue of the Perseus crew was originally in last issue, and got pushed to this one to make room for the line crossing ceremony. There was more too it, but I cut it because it ended up having a very wrong vibe.
Senator Galens has been studying Phoenix. The Federation has very few multi-racial groups of any kind, and Phoenix is her first encounter with one that isnāt basically humans as overseers of non-human slaves. After her dinner conversation, and her earlier exchange with Jordan, sheās starting to have ideas.
With the Perseus crew, we get some insight into how Tiberiusā takeover of the Federation is going, and what Star Fleet thinks of the Phoenix crew. With the other Aenean ship detected in the Sol system at the same time, the Aeneans are convenient scapegoats for Tiberiusā crackdown; fear and anger at an identifiable out group always help when solidifying a new authoritarian regime. But Hardingās insistence on Star Fleet-like behavior ā uniforms,protocol, etc. ā gets recognized and pays off some.
So we dive back into Sister Victoriaās transitions, and hint a bit more at whatās going on with the Bosun. Lots of life changes going on with the crew; Goodbody was just the beginning. They have crossed a line."
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Artist's note:
"The rescue of the Perseus crew was originally in last issue, and got pushed to this one to make room for the line crossing ceremony. There was more too it, but I cut it because it ended up having a very wrong vibe.
Senator Galens has been studying Phoenix. The Federation has very few multi-racial groups of any kind, and Phoenix is her first encounter with one that isnāt basically humans as overseers of non-human slaves. After her dinner conversation, and her earlier exchange with Jordan, sheās starting to have ideas.
With the Perseus crew, we get some insight into how Tiberiusā takeover of the Federation is going, and what Star Fleet thinks of the Phoenix crew. With the other Aenean ship detected in the Sol system at the same time, the Aeneans are convenient scapegoats for Tiberiusā crackdown; fear and anger at an identifiable out group always help when solidifying a new authoritarian regime. But Hardingās insistence on Star Fleet-like behavior ā uniforms,protocol, etc. ā gets recognized and pays off some.
So we dive back into Sister Victoriaās transitions, and hint a bit more at whatās going on with the Bosun. Lots of life changes going on with the crew; Goodbody was just the beginning. They have crossed a line."
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Buttercake
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Great, a new chapter!
You're welcome, my friend.
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