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If any of you are able to communicate with Don Silver please tell him to wrap toxic attraction up and stop adding useless side characters for Sarah to fuck as itā€™s just ruining the story and heā€™s obviously just milking it for the money.

Seriously surely heā€™s lost most of the subscribers at this point cos I certainly wouldnā€™t be supporting this work in its current state, I always find it sad when works suffer from writers who get greedy and think they can turn a story into a never ending gravy train but are met with the reality that they loose their fans because of that greed
 
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deluxx_247 said:
Thanks for sharing.
Spoiler free review: For me, this is not a great chapter. Sarah is just gross now. She does not have two logical brain cells to rub together.
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I disagree. Sarah is looking for a dominate man and responds accordingly. She shows how much she desires Lester's attention. She revels being control thru sexual acts. The chapter is too short but the cliff hanger is complete. This chapter moves the story forward as the dynamic between Lester and Sarah is exposed. Does Sarah succumb to Ted? I can see Lester arriving at the house and Sarah is not there but Renee is. He aggressively fucks Renee in the living room to release his frustration and maybe Sarah witnesses them fucking when she returns from Ted's house.
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Sarah climbs off Ted stating that he is now acting like a man and offers to consider further encounters if he acts like a man and asks directly for what he wants. She is home when Lester arrives and Lester hustles her to her marital bed and aggressively fucks her while Rene watches. Lester insists Sarah throw away the birth control pills and she does. Sarah knows she is fetile from this point going forward.

Dan witnesses Renee masturbating in the living room, maybe even Lester fucking Renee.
 
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I haven't read the chapter yet. But let me look into the crystal ball. Dan is trying to pull something. 10 pages of Lester having sex with the daughter or the mother. Bla bla, Dan is trying to pull something. Lester has sex with the daughter or the mother, and then he teleports somewhere.

Don to us fools. Haha with Nelsom voice. Thx for the money suckers
 
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If any of you are able to communicate with Don Silver please tell him to wrap toxic attraction up and stop adding useless side characters for Sarah to fuck as itā€™s just ruining the story and heā€™s obviously just milking it for the money.

Seriously surely heā€™s lost most of the subscribers at this point cos I certainly wouldnā€™t be supporting this work in its current state, I always find it sad when works suffer from writers who get greedy and think they can turn a story into a never ending gravy train but are met with the reality that they loose their fans because of that greed
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If you aren't enjoying Toxic Attraction, nobody is forcing you to read it. Feel free to skip it and spend your time on stories that are more to your taste. There are plenty of readers who genuinely enjoy this slow-burn dynamic. And if you feel you can write a better story yourself, feel free to give it a try. Constructive thoughts are always welcome, but this negativity adds very little value.
 
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carloswerty said:
I haven't read the chapter yet. But let me look into the crystal ball. Dan is trying to pull something. 10 pages of Lester having sex with the daughter or the mother. Bla bla, Dan is trying to pull something. Lester has sex with the daughter or the mother, and then he teleports somewhere.

Don to us fools. Haha with Nelsom voice. Thx for the money suckers
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Don't like it? Don't read it. We love the slow burn. Write your own if you can do better, instead of dropping your stupid complaints here.
 
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ricbar said:
I disagree. Sarah is looking for a dominate man and responds accordingly. She shows how much she desires Lester's attention. She revels being control thru sexual acts. The chapter is too short but the cliff hanger is complete. This chapter moves the story forward as the dynamic between Lester and Sarah is exposed. Does Sarah succumb to Ted? I can see Lester arriving at the house and Sarah is not there but Renee is. He aggressively fucks Renee in the living room to release his frustration and maybe Sarah witnesses them fucking when she returns from Ted's house.
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Sarah climbs off Ted stating that he is now acting like a man and offers to consider further encounters if he acts like a man and asks directly for what he wants. She is home when Lester arrives and Lester hustles her to her marital bed and aggressively fucks her while Rene watches. Lester insists Sarah throw away the birth control pills and she does. Sarah knows she is fetile from this point going forward.

Dan witnesses Renee masturbating in the living room, maybe even Lester fucking Renee.
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I don't see how this chapter moves the story forward at all. Just talking about this chapter, because 45 gave me hope of movement, but 46 stalled out on me.

Sarah is not behaving differently or moving forward - her character has been reduced to a set of holes without the capability of rational thought. She's not necessarily looking for a dominant man - she's looking for her next orgasm since it's been almost 24 hours. For the past 30 chapters she has shown that, while she would prefer it from Lester, she doesn't care who she gets it from (especially if she can rub it in her husband's face after). She has taunted Lester on multiple occasions that she can have anyone she wants. In fact in Ch45 (the previous night) she told Lester to let her in or she'd get the guys outside to take her on the hood of her car. He knows she's most likely serious which is why he pulled her inside so quickly. That dynamic hasn't changed.

Sarah didn't need Cash or Otis or Richard or the random guys in the sex shop to dominate her, she's looking to get off simply because the sun has gone down again. She keeps playing with fire and doesn't even consider how much she's getting burned because, as I said, her brain is either non-functional or she has manually switched it off. There is nothing that gives off even a glimmer of cognitive function about her scene with Ted or even the decision to go in the first place.

Kids are neglected again, so nothing new there.

Lester hasn't done anything new - he's trolling Dan and Tricia, and working on knocking Sarah up.

Renee is not doing anything new - she folded faster in 5 chapters than Sarah did in 25 chapters.

Dan is still sidelined away from home like always. Is the keylogger working? Does it do anything? Will he even be able to come home for the weekend, much less while Sarah is on another tear through the male populace of northern Illinois?

The only thing slightly new is that there's another boss (Gordon) has thoughts about how to "help" Dan so the that guy can somehow obtain time with Sarah. But that's happened before as well.

Movement could be Lester getting contacted by Marcus or the Lincoln Group on the way to Middleton, interrupting his trip...or Sarah getting noticed across the street by Renee and them talking it all out...or Ava contacting her mom in the middle of the night to say come home which would interrupt her Ted time and possibly fire some synapses between her ears instead of only what's between her legs...or James showing up at the Williams house (again, maybe an Ava contact) at the same time as Lester so he can flatten his face....or Lester showing up and having Sarah and Renee realize what's been happening.

But none of that happened in *this* chapter. It was Sarah acting completely insane... again... instead of being with her kids....again... while everyone else treaded water. Ted getting some action is not what I would call moving the story forward - that's just what Sarah's been doing for the last 30+ chapters
 
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