[Melissa N.] Collection

[BriannatheMage]

I'm glad they didn't go full GRS. there's plenty of content where that happens including other melissa N stories and it seems to happen in LilTKit's stories a lot. Leave it as a nub and have them use a gaff. Hopefully with this transformation the story can really kick into high gear.

 

[Devin19]

I'm glad they didn't go full GRS. there's plenty of content where that happens including other melissa N stories and it seems to happen in LilTKit's stories a lot. Leave it as a nub and have them use a gaff. Hopefully with this transformation the story can really kick into high gear.

A gaff is not necessary when there is only a nub left. The balls were also cut off. What is a gaff going to do at this point? Like what is this character supposed to do with a nub? It's just there for no purpose at all. At least with GRS, the character could have PIV sex afterward.

 

[qhill44]

You know in the original story he didn't need GRS because the "experimental" therapy that he started taking in S.Korea (after he went there and since he continued the same story that he is Trans and wants to look Korean) had a side effect and that was turning him into a real girl, meaning he got female reproductive organs overtime, uterus, tubes etc.

 

[Elaine]

You know in the original story he didn't need GRS because the "experimental" therapy that he started taking in S.Korea (after he went there and since he continued the same story that he is Trans and wants to look Korean) had a side effect and that was turning him into a real girl, meaning he got female reproductive organs overtime, uterus, tubes etc.

is the original story posted anywhere? do you have a link?

 

[Aculina]

You know in the original story he didn't need GRS because the "experimental" therapy that he started taking in S.Korea (after he went there and since he continued the same story that he is Trans and wants to look Korean) had a side effect and that was turning him into a real girl, meaning he got female reproductive organs overtime, uterus, tubes etc.

Where did u read the story?

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

Someone made this long ago because all the parts are hard to find but this is imo her best story she just never finished it hence the remake

 

[qhill44]

Where did u read the story?

I had it from kemono page of Melissa but it is not there anymore, Melissa said that there will be differences in the story but what are those I don't know.
Btw the original story was left unfinished back then.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

She changed a lot it's practically entirely different

 

[qhill44]

I wouldn't go as far to say is entirely different , in both ,she met him at the bar where he was singing , she started giving him hormones , (I don't remember if there was debt etc. in the original but those 2 things remained the same) and when he went to S.Korea he was given a new treatment etc. and he was part of the group and the most famous of them all.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

In the original he was tricked into becoming one of their band members in the remake they have him running from a thug so the foundation of the story is entirely different

 

[qhill44]

It doesn't matter if he was just tricked in the original and in this one he is doing it to avoid thugs.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

In already uploaded the PDF easier for people to read

 

[BriannatheMage]

A gaff is not necessary when there is only a nub left. The balls were also cut off. What is a gaff going to do at this point? Like what is this character supposed to do with a nub? It's just there for no purpose at all. At least with GRS, the character could have PIV sex afterward.

Considering it's a forced feminization story and Nabi has secretly been on hormones/experimental drugs to accelerate that process... it has been nothing more than a hood ornament for a while. It comes down to a matter of taste, I prefer the caged/nub aesthetic over giving them a squeaky-clean new vagina. I think it's the perfect marriage of what the character used to be and who they are presently.

You know in the original story he didn't need GRS because the "experimental" therapy that he started taking in S.Korea (after he went there and since he continued the same story that he is Trans and wants to look Korean) had a side effect and that was turning him into a real girl, meaning he got female reproductive organs overtime, uterus, tubes etc.

I never read the original but I can see where Melissa has sown the seeds for this to happen. I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens and how much Melissa incorporates from the original narrative.

 

[mntna]

Hi everyone
I wanted to say that to me "A K-pop Idol" feel rushed every since the doctor visit

 

[Anna Shapard]

Hi everyone
I wanted to say that to me "A K-pop Idol" feel rushed every since the doctor visit

yep, and suddenly she resorted to violence to get her way!:/

 

[JumpyInTheMorning]

Hi everyone
I wanted to say that to me "A K-pop Idol" feel rushed every since the doctor visit

I mean that's always been a thing with Melissa n's longer stories, take 40 pages what you could do in 5 but also shorten down what could be interesting segments to offscreen developments.

It's why I prefer her shorter focused works

 

[Elaine]

I mean that's always been a thing with Melissa n's longer stories, take 40 pages what you could do in 5 but also shorten down what could be interesting segments to offscreen developments.

It's why I prefer her shorter focused works

yes but Melissa always leaves you wanting more at the end of each part. I am wondering what is in store for Nick now he's a korean girl

 

[Redryder74]

Someone made this long ago because all the parts are hard to find but this is imo her best story she just never finished it hence the remake

It was me! I made this.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

It was me! I made this.

Of course it was you're the best

I mean that's always been a thing with Melissa n's longer stories, take 40 pages what you could do in 5 but also shorten down what could be interesting segments to offscreen developments.

It's why I prefer her shorter focused works

Melissa is notorious for poor pacing. She gets in her pocket with stories so they drag and drag then she realizes she needs to actually do something so she rushes it in. Then will drag 2 more months of unnecessary exposition updates before anything else actually happens again, before you know it we have a 500 page comic that could have been 150. Every single one of her larger comics is like this, she makes a ton of money though so it makes sense why she drags out comics keeps them subs thirsty.

I just wish there was a artist that lt sits perfectly between tgtrinitys output and Melissa N story concepts and art.

 

[Jackjons]

Of course it was you're the best

Melissa is notorious for poor pacing. She gets in her pocket with stories so they drag and drag then she realizes she needs to actually do something so she rushes it in. Then will drag 2 more months of unnecessary exposition updates before anything else actually happens again, before you know it we have a 500 page comic that could have been 150. Every single one of her larger comics is like this, she makes a ton of money though so it makes sense why she drags out comics keeps them subs thirsty.

I just wish there was a artist that lt sits perfectly between tgtrinitys output and Melissa N story concepts and art.

Believe me or not , I see much potential in Lilkit