[Various Artists] Melissa N. - Melissa 822 inspired Comics, Stories & Artwork

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Dannistd said:
I noticed that some of my new posts have been leaked on Kemono. I would appreciate any feedback so I can improve my work since I am still just a beginner.

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You have potential. In my opinion it is very good just need to improve the story and writing. Also you can be creative since youā€™re in charge of your own story so donā€™t be formulaic.
 
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Remember you can just press "Download" in the bottom right corner of the post to download everything as a .zip file.
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Love Caroline and Daisy friendship, but i would had liked more if Daisy told Caroline that she see her "like a sister" (a half-lie, as the 2 are father & daughter) that would had made them even closer
 
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mntna said:
Love Caroline and Daisy friendship, but i would had liked more if Daisy told Caroline that she see her "like a sister" (a half-lie, as the 2 are really siblings) that would had made them even closer
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they are actually father/daughter, not siblings (revealed in part 15)
 
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Hi guys! TgLulu here
I would love to know your opinion about my comics!
Please, share any feedback about anything you guys think about my comics
Can be an overall feedback or a more structured of every comic shared on kemono

Just a friendly reminder, this is just my hobby and as a finance person, I monetize my hobby, no problem about sharing my work here (just a little bit with the vampires of svscomics and etc...)
If you enjoy my work, subscribe my Patreon!
 
hi Lulu i like your comics but i think perhaps English isnt your first language. Did you ever finish the nerd story?
 
Elaine said:
hi Lulu i like your comics but i think perhaps English isnt your first language. Did you ever finish the nerd story?
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Hi!
1- Well, yeah, I'm Brazilian, I even say that on my DeviantArt profile
Of course I'll never have a perfect english, even working on a career that makes me speak almost every day.
Let's say that I use this hobby as a school teacher, everyday I learn a new word, a new sentence, a new slang... The problem is, I can't write every day...

2- About the nerd history, not yet, still on going.
I have some chapters to post, but it's a complex history, not only about sex...
Let's say that I want to use this story to:
A- Improve my render skill to be like Emory Ahlberg
B- Improve my writing skill to be like CBlack (just without the bimbo slut that every character turn)
Atm I feel like I need to create better villains and better endings, but it's a process...
 
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Lulu
if you need help with English I would be happy to help but I am not able to speak Portuguese. lol

I liked the premise of the Nerd story where a poor student is drip fed money, clothes and hormones by a sugar daddy in return for becoming more feminine. Then when the changes progress his mom notices and drags him off to a gender therapist and it becomes clear that the motive by the sugar daddy is that the nerd becomes a finanical dominatrix online.

best wishes
 
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