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[Various Artists] Melissa N. - Melissa 822 inspired Comics, Stories & Artwork

Hi guys! TgLulu here
I would love to know your opinion about my comics!
Please, share any feedback about anything you guys think about my comics
Can be an overall feedback or a more structured of every comic shared on kemono

Just a friendly reminder, this is just my hobby and as a finance person, I monetize my hobby, no problem about sharing my work here (just a little bit with the vampires of svscomics and etc...)
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hi Lulu i like your comics but i think perhaps English isnt your first language. Did you ever finish the nerd story?
 
hi Lulu i like your comics but i think perhaps English isnt your first language. Did you ever finish the nerd story?
Hi!
1- Well, yeah, I'm Brazilian, I even say that on my DeviantArt profile
Of course I'll never have a perfect english, even working on a career that makes me speak almost every day.
Let's say that I use this hobby as a school teacher, everyday I learn a new word, a new sentence, a new slang... The problem is, I can't write every day...

2- About the nerd history, not yet, still on going.
I have some chapters to post, but it's a complex history, not only about sex...
Let's say that I want to use this story to:
A- Improve my render skill to be like Emory Ahlberg
B- Improve my writing skill to be like CBlack (just without the bimbo slut that every character turn)
Atm I feel like I need to create better villains and better endings, but it's a process...
 
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Lulu
if you need help with English I would be happy to help but I am not able to speak Portuguese. lol

I liked the premise of the Nerd story where a poor student is drip fed money, clothes and hormones by a sugar daddy in return for becoming more feminine. Then when the changes progress his mom notices and drags him off to a gender therapist and it becomes clear that the motive by the sugar daddy is that the nerd becomes a finanical dominatrix online.

best wishes
 

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Lulu
if you need help with English I would be happy to help but I am not able to speak Portuguese. lol

I liked the premise of the Nerd story where a poor student is drip fed money, clothes and hormones by a sugar daddy in return for becoming more feminine. Then when the changes progress his mom notices and drags him off to a gender therapist and it becomes clear that the motive by the sugar daddy is that the nerd becomes a finanical dominatrix online.

best wishes
Thanks!

About my comics, you have any feedback about anything?
I already have a lot of content on my Patreon, love to hear what everyone here think about :)
 
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