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I'm not even disappointed the ending was trash because the story lost its plot a long time ago and you can tell she just threw a sex scene in there because she saw all the complaints about how stupid it was getting. At least it's finally over but considering how stupid bestie in the making is and how abysmal the pacing in KPoP is going I don't have much excitement in what Melissa N or whoever is pretending to be Melissa N will do next .
 
Well we knew that it would end happily ever after as far as Melissa was concerned but the story has a lot of loose ends and really needs a better finish. once i get the DS1000 story rewrite finished i can give it a go. Anything you would like to see in a chapter 31 and 32?
Well, it should be a horror story so it should either have a dark ending or a bittersweet ending. But that ship sailed long ago when it was established Elena subconsciously wanted to be an older woman all along.
 
Well, it should be a horror story so it should either have a dark ending or a bittersweet ending. But that ship sailed long ago when it was established Elena subconsciously wanted to be an older woman all along.
yes I was being sarcastic with my comment - a far better story would have been Elena hypnotised or in such a state of mind that she thinks she has always been a 55 year old mature woman except that when she dreams, she dreams that she was a 20 something young man who was married to a woman.
 
I'm not even disappointed the ending was trash because the story lost its plot a long time ago and you can tell she just threw a sex scene in there because she saw all the complaints about how stupid it was getting. At least it's finally over but considering how stupid bestie in the making is and how abysmal the pacing in KPoP is going I don't have much excitement in what Melissa N or whoever is pretending to be Melissa N will do next .
I'm also not interested on the remaining stories. Nabiya already achieved the last transformation and the story will surely revolve on life of kpop artist. Probably Bella will have another transformation but it will take a year or more.
 
I'm also not interested on the remaining stories. Nabiya already achieved the last transformation and the story will surely revolve on life of kpop artist. Probably Bella will have another transformation but it will take a year or more.
Yea I won't be resubbing anytime soon. I've wasted enough money on her for nothing
 
There are some basic techniques in pruning and story balance that Melissa N. could pick up from just about any workshop or any decent editor. Most particularly I suspect they don't not plan their stories in advance, which generally results in an unfocused and meandering plot. It's very easy for an otherwise good author to get deep into the weeds doing that and this is a good example. I think it's a shame because Melissa's work in shorter form is outstanding.

A while back (after the last sex scene, which was TWO YEARS AGO), I edited the first 1400 images of Aphrodite to remove all the intrigue/spy crap. I left all the feminization and brainwashing as well as kept any part where the main character or their feminization was the focus. I also pulled in a couple images from the following 900 pages making it clear that the protag was being drugged.

This left me with 561 images out of 1377. It's far from perfect - some of the early images are pretty low-res due to the download source and I included some of the animations posted here which people might not like. But if there is interest and I'm not doing anything against forum rules I could upload it.
 
Off topic
but I finally found fabricio castro boy to girl transformation for a day videos here is the link

Some old videos are in YouTube
Hope you guys enjoy
 
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Here is the version without animations at just under 1GB. With the GIFs it's 1.8GB so I will wait to see if this works before trying that.

Apologies that the resolution is not fantastic the first 200 or so pages. Now that a full set of PNGs has been added I could potentially go in and replace them but it would REALLY jack up the size.
 

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Here is the version without animations at just under 1GB. With the GIFs it's 1.8GB so I will wait to see if this works before trying that.

Apologies that the resolution is not fantastic the first 200 or so pages. Now that a full set of PNGs has been added I could potentially go in and replace them but it would REALLY jack up the size.
there were animations?
 
Here is the version without animations at just under 1GB. With the GIFs it's 1.8GB so I will wait to see if this works before trying that.

Apologies that the resolution is not fantastic the first 200 or so pages. Now that a full set of PNGs has been added I could potentially go in and replace them but it would REALLY jack up the size.
Thanks for your cooperation. Could you tell me what format the files are in? I can't view them.
 
Thanks for your cooperation. Could you tell me what format the files are in? I can't view them.
It's a multivolume 7z file. You need to download all four files and use some sort of modern archive manager (where "modern" means "less than ten years old" or so) to unpack it. For Windows users, I recommend 7-zip or NanaZip. WinRAR will work too.
 
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Enjoy 😉

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Well, let's hope she doesn't start a new story so we can get faster updates on this and Kpop
usually Melissa take some months before starting a new one, maybe she will start it when Bestie or K-Pop are near the end
i think it will be another Age Progression story, the first was "That's a Job for a MILF" and then "Aphrodite's Mirror", Melissa's longest books are about Age Progression
about "Aphrodite's Mirror", Melissa should have split the story in 2 Books like "MILF", that way it would have left her some time to work on other stories while planning on how to continue "Aphrodite's Mirror"
 
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No no no no........last time it was inspired from Sir aurthr conan doyel 's mystery thriller. And we get Mirror 🪞,

For god Haven, please, this time who knows which writter will her inspiration, J.K - harry potter. Agatha Christie or J.J.R ...... I AM SCARED. PLEASE WHO EVER SUBSCRIBE HER , LET HER KNOW , don't let her do another masacar
 

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