[Garak3D] A Desire in the Family

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Hello Garak3D.

This story continues, little by little, its unstoppable course.

It seems that Barbara has some back problem. Let's hope she can fix herself "properly."

Commissioner Gordon appears to have been distracted by "something" that should not have distracted him at all. He will be very tired and has to be careful, but this can lead him at some point to "something" that can make him feel "bad and good at the same time."

And Batman follows the "clues" left by the Joker. He seems to have arrived at the place where "two cute couples" were fighting to the point of exhaustion. I hope it arrived on time.

PS: I find it funny the way you make some of Barbara's faces, like when she wonders if she said something, especially her lips hahaha
 
Great pages 67-72, great example of how incest/taboo thoughts for the first time are entering father's mind... I would always use similar path in almost every incest fantasy story, it's just necessary. I mean, those first times when son (or father) sees mom's (or daughter) tits, ass, pussy, body - as sexy and attractive - that's always simply fundamental for the realism of the story. So, i just loved it how you done it here. Hope for equally great dialogues and action between these two (or other characters). I would even more loved this type of things in completely realistic /everyday-type-of-environment story (here we have...well..Batman...Gotham city and all that) but it's ok.
 
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Thank you, don't feel pressured to release under certain time frame. Obviously I would love to have updates as soon as possible, but you don't owe us anything bc we do not pay for anything. So take your time and do the comic right.
 
Hey Garak! There sure are a lot of whiny loudmouths in your thread. I’m with the ones who are saying, do what you’re want on your own time. There’s no pleasing the ones that can’t be pleased.

I personally love the story so keep it up. I really appreciate the little details too, even in the dialogue. I see MrH69 got a shoutout this release lol.

Barbara is a cutie. I hope she gets a scene with her Dad. 🥵

Stay the course my dude!
 
Hi Garak, I second Scorpius. You have YOUR Way and this is a fantastic way.

Love this tale but also your other work.

Your rock, man! 🍻
 
Love Barbara expression at the end... is Gordon affected by it too? I'm really curious now!

Also, I still have the feeling that Martha is alive somehow, there are some ways to revive someone in the DC universe, I feel Joker is someone twisted enough to revive Martha to torment Batman, can't wait!
 
Hello Garak3D.

Honestly, this turn of events towards a more violent confrontation has caught me off guard, especially because of Batman's rivals right now.

Seeing Batman threaten and intimidate the scum of Gotham is common, but the last image surprised me. David and Liam's condition was somewhat to be expected, but seeing the mothers go from exhausted to this...I hope you can explain all of this in detail.

I just have a couple of questions, which I'm sure you'll answer in the future:

-Is this reaction of the mothers due to the Joker's special toxin or will it be an isolated case due to Insane Father and Swinelord, who mixed the formula wrong?

-What will be the cure for mothers: the semen of their children? Will there be short-term treatment or will mothers have to receive semen from their children for the rest of their lives to avoid this aggressiveness, like Hulk?

Looking forward to seeing this confrontation.
 
Whe mothers protect their children they go feral, no matter the species!
Interesting twist and I am looking forward to where you will lead us. Intersting it will be anyway!

Thank you! 🍻
 
Hmmm... little bit too much action for my taste, i would focus exclusively on sexual part (dialogues and build up can take certain number of pages....) but ok, a little digression is acceptable and somehow fun, as long as it's not too long, hopefully.
 
Gnaparelli said:
Hmmm... little bit too much action for my taste, i would focus exclusively on sexual part (dialogues and build up can take certain number of pages....) but ok, a little digression is acceptable and somehow fun, as long as it's not too long, hopefully.
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Kids today... no patience.... the build up is often the best part. It creates excitement.
 
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