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I agree the story is getting too long, with the whole Mexico Arc pending to be developed I hope this won't mean a neverending story as Melissa's Aphrodite Mirror.
 
Nippur said:
I agree the story is getting too long, with the whole Mexico Arc pending to be developed I hope this won't mean a neverending story as Melissa's Aphrodite Mirror.
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I disagree. Nothing seems repetitive and it has been building well to the climax, which I imagine will begin in the next part. It is certainly detailed but it is also substantive, so I do not mind if it is longer and takes more time.
 
This is all starting to give off Melissa vibes. This is a common vice among TG authors who tackle long, detailed stories. Man, isn't it a self-evident point of dramaturgy that every issue should have some kind of steamy, hot moment and a cliffhanger leading up to the next one? Is it really so impossible to do without three to five slides consisting solely of "Oh, what should I do?" and "Chica, why are you sad?"? Literally every update should include several scenes of nudity or lingerie from a couple of angles, some sexual innuendo or awkward situations, touching of oneself or each other.

I think another major problem with long, detailed comics about forced feminization (besides the fact that the artists almost never understand anything about dramaturgy and plot construction) is that the author takes on the task of describing and attempting to invent things that, in fact, don't exist. All these stories are, in general, not far removed from dragon fantasy, mutant sci-fi, or vampire horror. In real life, such situations don't and don't happen (and what does happen is usually painfully banal and/or sordid), so without life experience and sources to cite, it still wouldn't be realistic fantasy. So if it's already fantasy, maybe we should add more farce, sensuality, and sexuality? Instead of trying to wring out hundreds of pages of some plausible mental transformation that ultimately amounts to the depths of a pornographic scenario.
 
This update seemed to tip the balance the wrong way on story telling.
For sure this was the update to have something exciting happen/move the story forward.

Liltkit is going through Hell and back with health issues, I see that reflected in this comic.
Going through something you don't like and the day to day questions and answers... stuck in Limbo.

And 50g for a make-over? 🤦‍♀️
 
Erica St.Claire said:
This update seemed to tip the balance the wrong way on story telling.
For sure this was the update to have something exciting happen/move the story forward.

Liltkit is going through Hell and back with health issues, I see that reflected in this comic.
Going through something you don't like and the day to day questions and answers... stuck in Limbo.

And 50g for a make-over? 🤦‍♀️
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not for make-over. just Sam bitch golddigger and angry on Nick
I'm afraid how much makeover change her look and it not looks like bimbo makeover and we know liltkit like bimbofication how it will along with latina look.
 
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@lexx$ said:
A Latina in Need - part 21.
Enjoy 😉

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His Aunt is trying to kill him, she made the Missing Person poster to imply that something bad happen and he may be dead, but if he show up and as brought back to his Aunt, they will kill him.
what he didn't realize is that the situation is way worse, this way he may not be able to get his Granny's inheritance, since he will be thought death or really death

i think that the passport is either of Maria's Sister or Daughter, not the Mother because Age Progression doesn't fit in this story (for me)

Samantha is gonna have a blast at seeing Nick as "Daphne" and i have the feeling that she will help "Him" but also keep in checks his Aunt & Uncle to see if selling him to them will make sure she gets the money, she does everything for the money

He should had asked for help from the Salesgirl, she may be an Airheaded but she seemed nice enough to help him willingly
 
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Samantha's services look strained, I think it was just possible to bribe a plastic surgeon to be recorded under a different name. But I think it's just necessary for the plot, to use Samantha again. Or they want latina looks just use make over and tan? I think it need facial surgery.
 
asalund2 said:
I think we will get an update tomorrow since Liltkit posted an update.
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LilTKit latest update says needs a few more days for the final chapter.

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