This is all starting to give off Melissa vibes. This is a common vice among TG authors who tackle long, detailed stories. Man, isn't it a self-evident point of dramaturgy that every issue should have some kind of steamy, hot moment and a cliffhanger leading up to the next one? Is it really so impossible to do without three to five slides consisting solely of "Oh, what should I do?" and "Chica, why are you sad?"? Literally every update should include several scenes of nudity or lingerie from a couple of angles, some sexual innuendo or awkward situations, touching of oneself or each other.
I think another major problem with long, detailed comics about forced feminization (besides the fact that the artists almost never understand anything about dramaturgy and plot construction) is that the author takes on the task of describing and attempting to invent things that, in fact, don't exist. All these stories are, in general, not far removed from dragon fantasy, mutant sci-fi, or vampire horror. In real life, such situations don't and don't happen (and what does happen is usually painfully banal and/or sordid), so without life experience and sources to cite, it still wouldn't be realistic fantasy. So if it's already fantasy, maybe we should add more farce, sensuality, and sexuality? Instead of trying to wring out hundreds of pages of some plausible mental transformation that ultimately amounts to the depths of a pornographic scenario.